This thread is a place to place your poetry. I would advise that you only post if you're comfortable with feedback. I think it's a good way to share ideas. I will start: The peom that I am going to post is actually more of a letter to my best friend, however I think it suites this thread pretty well:

To My Best Friend

We used to be great friends, Best friends. We used to always be together.

We loved hanging out enjoying each other’s company. Everything was great with you near. We would go to “Our Spot” and just hang out, talking…laughing, arguing….crying. Whenever there was a time that we fought we would always get over it and move on. I remember the things we used to do as kids...innocent, playing silly games in the front yard, staying up late talking about our lives, or silly problems, our big concerns.
Oh how I miss you so…

I remember always finding a way to your house, or you to mine…we were too young to drive, although we wished we could. I remember sitting in the park talking about “what we wanted to do when we grew up”. I remember running around town together with no plan on where we were going, we just wanted to go and get away…to be alone. I remember talking on the phone for hours with nothing in particular to talk about, just having you on the other line was enough for me.
Oh how I miss you so…

Do you remember when I got my license? I would always come to you so we could hang, and chill…and eat your candy. We would drive together to the places we wanted to go. We would sometimes drive to no where…just so we could have longer together.
Oh how I miss you so…

I went away. I left you…abandoned you. I am sorry for that. I missed you. I thought there was something I needed to do…to experience, but without you near I was nothing. It was my fault. When I came back we reconnected. We were grown up, into new things…into different things… we had changed. No longer our innocent selves, careless, having no worries, we were adults, responsible. Then I went away again, leaving you to again try to find myself, where I belonged. I am sorry for that. This time when I came back, you didn’t come back. You had moved on. I was torn. I hated myself for leaving you.

Now you are gone, living your life, and me living mine. I miss you now and I wait for you, too afraid to come to you. Wishing you were near me so I didn’t have to feel so grown up. So we could be kids again, with no worries or responsibilities. I will always be here for you, waiting for you if you ever decide to have me again.
Oh how I miss you so….

I love you…

That was a nice poem... so personal and emotional too. I think those are always the best . Here's one I had when I had to vent once... I wouldn't really call it a poem though. Or at least, it's not really laid out like one, it's more like a paragraph or two.

Over Thinking

I think I'm over thinking. Or maybe I'm just paranoid, about being paranoid. I honestly don't know what to think as I'm thinking of you. There has to be something wrong with me... Or then again, maybe I'm wrong. Sometimes I wonder why I even bother with you, and other times I wonder if I ever bother you. Why did I fall for you just to end up falling apart? Why do I keeping looking at pictures of you when it keeps torturing me? Don't get me wrong, I wish I could just move on. But where you any different? Did you find it easy to move on? Apparently not, because your dreams came true, while my dreams were crushed. Please don't think I'm angry at you, and I hope you don't get angry from reading this. But what should I do? Should I never speak to you again? Should I forget about you? I don't want to do this... or do I? Do I want to get rid of you? Does it have to be this way? Know that I will always call you "friend". Will you say the same? When I'm more than 500 miles away from you it's easy to say anything, as we aren't looking at each other in the eye. But there'll be a day, when I'll be less than ten feet away. What will you say to me then? Or will you say nothing? Will you shun me and turn your back? Or will you greet me with your smile? Your smile that I loved so dearly. And will you say "I've missed you"? Because I'll surely say that to you.
Because I miss you.
And I know that once these words come out, I'll regret it, the same way I regretted saying those words on that night. Do you still remember? Have you forgotten? Did you push those words aside; the same way you pushed me aside? Or have they been stuck on your mind? Those pathetic words that I wish I could take back. I wish I could just start over and throw away all these feelings I have for you. But I know it's impossible. So I will do whatever it takes to try and fix this, and learn from my mistakes. This has all been my fault. I'm the one to blame. I'm the one who started this mess, and I intend to clean up after myself.

I looked at all my poems at deviantART and this was the one with the most favorites and views... so i chose this one haha

You should probably just post these in alexanyways thread, it's basically the same thing and prolly will be ongoing so I'm just going to close this and say use that for posting poetry, okay.

Heres the link:
https://www.vizzed.com/vizzedboard/thread.php?id=10791