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Legend of greenluigi Mysteries of the Giant Melon Ship chapter 1: DEATHMELON IS REAL!?
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Legend of greenluigi Mysteries of the Giant
The completely different world! World is again at peaca! I mean peace XD. In Vizzed Town, Viz members
Green-“GAAAH!!!!!” Kimmy-“Will you stop shouting like that? I’m getting ready like David
Green-“THIS STUPID GIRL ON THE WATERMELON KEEPS KILLING ME!!! It’s not
Kimmy-“Are you playing Super Carrotta again?” Green-“*keeps losing lives and GAME OVER* GAAAH!!! DEATHMELON’S SOLDIERS
David-“Are you read my people?” Green-“YO YO YO WHAT’S GOING ON!?” David-“We are invited to a lunch and dinner in Clock town. Wanna come?” Green-“EEEWWW NO WAY :C!!! IT’S THE WORST PLACE EVER!!!!” Saria-“You’re invited too!” Green-“Plus why am invited!?” Usi-“You know Iris?” Green-“OF COURSE I KNOW!! I WISH I WANNA PUNCH HER!! THAT’S MY DREAM !
Monsi-“Well we have good news to her!” Green-“Wut?” Enii-“She now has a baby sister and a baby brother ^^. They are twins!” Green-“OH MY GOD!! IRIS EARNED A NEW SISTER AND BROTHER. OMG WE HAVE TO
David-“FINE! You can stay here!!” Green-“Wanna stay Raver?” Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!!! (I’M ALWAYS STAYING WITH GREEN!!!)” Green-“HAAA!! RAVER IS STAYING WITH ME!! ENJOY YOUR STUPID PARTY!!! HOPE
Geeo-“Whatever.” All the Viz members and Kokirs goes to Clock Town. Green-“What should I do all alone?” Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!!! (WE CAN HAVE FUN TOGETHER!!!)” Green-“HELL YEAH!!!” With the Viz members… Kimmy-“Ahh that Green! That bastard! If only he came L!” Enii-“Ignore him. He’s even angry that this time, he can’t play online
Kimmy-“Yeah! I also filmed him when he was playing Super Carrotta and he
Enii-“Okay!” Monsi-“Gees I’m bored! I wanna play Super Carrotta L!” Usi-“ME TOO!!” Juul-“ME THREE!!” Frodlex-“ME FOUR!!” David-“QUIT IT YOU FOUR!! Euh… ME FIVE L!! I WANNA PLAY SUPER CARROTTA TOO!!” Usi-“You suck at this game. Green defeated you tons of times!” Kimmy-“YO YO YO PEOPLE!! WHO WANTS TO SEE GREEN’S FUNNY VIDEO OF CARROTTA!!!???” Juul-“?? That kimmeh. I want to slap some sense to her one day… I wonder
Green-“WHOOOOOO THIS IS FUN BEING ALONE TOGETHER!!! YOU CAN SPAM
Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!!! (I KNOW RIGHT?)” Back with the Viz members. Monsi-“… I WANT SUPER CARROTTA!!!” Juul-“Can you survive one day without playing that game?” Kimmy-“Hey, Iris! Wanna see Green’s embarrassing video?” Iris-“K.” After the video. Kimmy-“Lol. He must have trouble with Dancing Melon.” Monsi-“DANCING MELON!? THAT MEANS HE REACHED WORLD 9000-7!!! THAT IS THE
Kimmy-“!
Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!!! (LET’S TAKE A WALK IN THE FOREST!!!)” Green-“OKAY!!!” Green rides on Raver and they go to Forgetten Woods. In
???-“Professor Twevlin Gadd! What do we need for our next plan?” Professor Twevlin Gadd-“Agent Boss, order your agent commanders and look
Agent Boss-“Okay… what do you want to do mr Italian?” ???-“My name is not mr Italian. I have an Italian accent. Funny
Agent Boss-“AGENT A!! AGENT B!!! AGENT C!!! REGROUP!!! TRAVEL TO THE OTHER
All agent commanders:”YES SIR!!” Back in Forgetten Woods… Green-“*sigh* I saved my world so many times. I spent most of my time on
Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!! (WE BETTER GO BACK TO Viz TOWN!! THESE WOODS ARE
Green-“Yeah.” Suddenly, they hear huge noises. Agent B-“Psss, It’s Raver! And… LUIGI!? No, impossible all these years,
Green-“Who’s here?” Agent A-“That must be… Luigi’s descedent like Twelvin Gadd said!” Agent C-“So w-we h-have to a-a-a-attack it!????” Agent A-“Don’t be a scaredy boy!” Green-“THAT’S IT!! WHO’S HERE!?” Agent B-“HEYA PAL!!” Green-“Huh?” Agent A-“Hello, Luigi’s descedent! We are Agent Boss’s agent commanders!” Green-“What do you want from me?” Agent C-“We n-need that h-horse!” Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!!! (YIKES!!! I KNOW THOSE GUYS!!! GREEN BE CAREFUL!!
Green-“If you wanna a fight, then I’m ready!” Agent A-“Oki donkey.” She runs at speed of light and she appears behind
Green-“THAT’S IT!! *GOES HYPERMODE* LET’S DANCE!!” Green chases the
Agent C-“T-TAKE THAT!!!” Green-“AAAHHH!!! I’M PARALYZED!!! I THINK THAT I’M TRANSFORMING!!!
Agent B-“Hehehhe. Now Raver belongs to us!” Agent A-“Let’s return to the base!!” The three commanders have Raver and
Green-“WHAT HAPPENED TO ME!? I’M A PLANT MONSTER NOW!!! THANK GOD WE CAN
Green-“Yo yo yo how come there is a HUUUUGGGGE hidden world beyond
Young Man-“A WILD POKEMON!! I’M GONNA CATCH YOU!!!” Green-“Huh what?” Young Man-“GO BLAZIKEN!!” Blaziken is a fire chicken and fights. Has
Green-“OOW THAT HURTS!!! YOU MEANIE!!! TAKE THIS!!!” Green does a
Young Man-“IT’S BECAUSE YOU’RE A GRASS TYPE AND MY BLAZIKEN IS
Green-“OH OH OOOWW!!!” Young Man-“GO POKE BALL!!” Green-“HAYA!!” Green breaks the Poke Ball. Suddenly, a woman walks in
???-“JIMMY!! STOP HURTING GRASS POKEMON!!!” Jimmy-“Sorry mistress!” ???-“Are you okay? Wanna join my Grass Pokemon Gym? I’m Gardenia!” Green-“I’m Green! (DAMN IT!! I EVEN LOST MY ITEMS!!!) Gardenia-“It’s so relaxing there!!” Green-“(THAT KIMMY!!) FLASHBACK: Kimmy was preparing herself until Green
Kimmy-“YOU CAN’T EVEN PASS THE GIRL ON THE MELON? HA!! YOU SUCK AT
Gardenia-“Huh?” Green-“Oh sorry nothing!! NOTHING!!” Gardenia-“Oh look! The carrot girl will give a speech!” Green-“CARROT GIRL!? NO WAY… SUPER CARROTTA!?!? SHE EXISTS IN THIS WORLD!??!!!” Gardenia-“Yep! She’s also our hero!!” Green-“NO WAY!! MY FRIENDS MUST KNOW THAT SUPER CARROTTA EXSITS!!!”
Super Carrotta-“LADIES AND GENTLEMAN! Your favorite hero, Super Carrotta
Gardenia-“YIKES!! I HATE CREEPY MANSIONS!! THEY ARE SO MANY GHOSTS TYPE
Green-“I can’t believe Super Carrotta exists! But only in this world.” Super Carrotta-“Would our Pokemon Champion, Lucas join us?” Lucas-“…Yeah. (Gosh, I want Gardenia too. So I can have the chance to
Green-“I’LL JOIN!!” Super Carrotta-“WOAH!! A POKEMON CAN TALK!!” Green-“I’M NOT A POKEMON!! I’M GREEN FROM THE KOKIRI TRIBE!! I LOST
???-“CORRECT!!” Three mysterious people comes in the scene. Super Carrotta-“What do you want this time, DEATHMELON!?” Green-“DEATHMELON EXISTS!? OMG!!! HE MUST BE SOO STRONG!!!” ???-“Master, who’s that punk?” DeathMelon-“Oh this? It’s a Green! The punk that the agents transformed
???-“XD YOUR ITALIEN ACCENT!!” DeathMelon-“Shut up Agent Boss.” Green-“DEATHMELON DOES EXISTS!! OMG!!!!” DeathMelon-“It’s a right Green! With our spaceship, our powerful charge
Agent C-“I’m scared for that! L PLEASE!! BRING 10 PEOPLE HERE TO STOP IT!!!” Agent Boss-“*punches Agent C* WHAT’S WRONG WITH YOU!? NOW HE KNOWS HOW
Green-“First, WHERE’S RAVER?” Agent A-“He’s in our ship. COME IN GET HIM!!!” The villains flees from
Gardenia-“*gulp* I guess I’ll go with you guys because Green joins.” Super Carrotta-“GOOD! Now we 4, we’ll go!!” They go in the Mansion. Lucas-“Sshhh careful there! This is Gravity Beetle! He guards this
Green-“Elite Mavericks exists on that dimension too?” Super Carrotta-“Okay so we will go sneakly to the next room! 3 2 1 go!”
Gardenia-“Oh no I’m scared! A…A…ACHOUM!!!” Lucas-“YIKES!!” Gravity Beetle wakes up and becomes in a furious anger!! Green-“It looks like that maverick wants death! Wanna dance? LET’S
Legend of greenluigi Mysteries of the Giant
The completely different world! World is again at peaca! I mean peace XD. In Vizzed Town, Viz members
Green-“GAAAH!!!!!” Kimmy-“Will you stop shouting like that? I’m getting ready like David
Green-“THIS STUPID GIRL ON THE WATERMELON KEEPS KILLING ME!!! It’s not
Kimmy-“Are you playing Super Carrotta again?” Green-“*keeps losing lives and GAME OVER* GAAAH!!! DEATHMELON’S SOLDIERS
David-“Are you read my people?” Green-“YO YO YO WHAT’S GOING ON!?” David-“We are invited to a lunch and dinner in Clock town. Wanna come?” Green-“EEEWWW NO WAY :C!!! IT’S THE WORST PLACE EVER!!!!” Saria-“You’re invited too!” Green-“Plus why am invited!?” Usi-“You know Iris?” Green-“OF COURSE I KNOW!! I WISH I WANNA PUNCH HER!! THAT’S MY DREAM !
Monsi-“Well we have good news to her!” Green-“Wut?” Enii-“She now has a baby sister and a baby brother ^^. They are twins!” Green-“OH MY GOD!! IRIS EARNED A NEW SISTER AND BROTHER. OMG WE HAVE TO
David-“FINE! You can stay here!!” Green-“Wanna stay Raver?” Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!!! (I’M ALWAYS STAYING WITH GREEN!!!)” Green-“HAAA!! RAVER IS STAYING WITH ME!! ENJOY YOUR STUPID PARTY!!! HOPE
Geeo-“Whatever.” All the Viz members and Kokirs goes to Clock Town. Green-“What should I do all alone?” Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!!! (WE CAN HAVE FUN TOGETHER!!!)” Green-“HELL YEAH!!!” With the Viz members… Kimmy-“Ahh that Green! That bastard! If only he came L!” Enii-“Ignore him. He’s even angry that this time, he can’t play online
Kimmy-“Yeah! I also filmed him when he was playing Super Carrotta and he
Enii-“Okay!” Monsi-“Gees I’m bored! I wanna play Super Carrotta L!” Usi-“ME TOO!!” Juul-“ME THREE!!” Frodlex-“ME FOUR!!” David-“QUIT IT YOU FOUR!! Euh… ME FIVE L!! I WANNA PLAY SUPER CARROTTA TOO!!” Usi-“You suck at this game. Green defeated you tons of times!” Kimmy-“YO YO YO PEOPLE!! WHO WANTS TO SEE GREEN’S FUNNY VIDEO OF CARROTTA!!!???” Juul-“?? That kimmeh. I want to slap some sense to her one day… I wonder
Green-“WHOOOOOO THIS IS FUN BEING ALONE TOGETHER!!! YOU CAN SPAM
Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!!! (I KNOW RIGHT?)” Back with the Viz members. Monsi-“… I WANT SUPER CARROTTA!!!” Juul-“Can you survive one day without playing that game?” Kimmy-“Hey, Iris! Wanna see Green’s embarrassing video?” Iris-“K.” After the video. Kimmy-“Lol. He must have trouble with Dancing Melon.” Monsi-“DANCING MELON!? THAT MEANS HE REACHED WORLD 9000-7!!! THAT IS THE
Kimmy-“!
Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!!! (LET’S TAKE A WALK IN THE FOREST!!!)” Green-“OKAY!!!” Green rides on Raver and they go to Forgetten Woods. In
???-“Professor Twevlin Gadd! What do we need for our next plan?” Professor Twevlin Gadd-“Agent Boss, order your agent commanders and look
Agent Boss-“Okay… what do you want to do mr Italian?” ???-“My name is not mr Italian. I have an Italian accent. Funny
Agent Boss-“AGENT A!! AGENT B!!! AGENT C!!! REGROUP!!! TRAVEL TO THE OTHER
All agent commanders:”YES SIR!!” Back in Forgetten Woods… Green-“*sigh* I saved my world so many times. I spent most of my time on
Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!! (WE BETTER GO BACK TO Viz TOWN!! THESE WOODS ARE
Green-“Yeah.” Suddenly, they hear huge noises. Agent B-“Psss, It’s Raver! And… LUIGI!? No, impossible all these years,
Green-“Who’s here?” Agent A-“That must be… Luigi’s descedent like Twelvin Gadd said!” Agent C-“So w-we h-have to a-a-a-attack it!????” Agent A-“Don’t be a scaredy boy!” Green-“THAT’S IT!! WHO’S HERE!?” Agent B-“HEYA PAL!!” Green-“Huh?” Agent A-“Hello, Luigi’s descedent! We are Agent Boss’s agent commanders!” Green-“What do you want from me?” Agent C-“We n-need that h-horse!” Raver-“YOSHI YOSHI!!! (YIKES!!! I KNOW THOSE GUYS!!! GREEN BE CAREFUL!!
Green-“If you wanna a fight, then I’m ready!” Agent A-“Oki donkey.” She runs at speed of light and she appears behind
Green-“THAT’S IT!! *GOES HYPERMODE* LET’S DANCE!!” Green chases the
Agent C-“T-TAKE THAT!!!” Green-“AAAHHH!!! I’M PARALYZED!!! I THINK THAT I’M TRANSFORMING!!!
Agent B-“Hehehhe. Now Raver belongs to us!” Agent A-“Let’s return to the base!!” The three commanders have Raver and
Green-“WHAT HAPPENED TO ME!? I’M A PLANT MONSTER NOW!!! THANK GOD WE CAN
Green-“Yo yo yo how come there is a HUUUUGGGGE hidden world beyond
Young Man-“A WILD POKEMON!! I’M GONNA CATCH YOU!!!” Green-“Huh what?” Young Man-“GO BLAZIKEN!!” Blaziken is a fire chicken and fights. Has
Green-“OOW THAT HURTS!!! YOU MEANIE!!! TAKE THIS!!!” Green does a
Young Man-“IT’S BECAUSE YOU’RE A GRASS TYPE AND MY BLAZIKEN IS
Green-“OH OH OOOWW!!!” Young Man-“GO POKE BALL!!” Green-“HAYA!!” Green breaks the Poke Ball. Suddenly, a woman walks in
???-“JIMMY!! STOP HURTING GRASS POKEMON!!!” Jimmy-“Sorry mistress!” ???-“Are you okay? Wanna join my Grass Pokemon Gym? I’m Gardenia!” Green-“I’m Green! (DAMN IT!! I EVEN LOST MY ITEMS!!!) Gardenia-“It’s so relaxing there!!” Green-“(THAT KIMMY!!) FLASHBACK: Kimmy was preparing herself until Green
Kimmy-“YOU CAN’T EVEN PASS THE GIRL ON THE MELON? HA!! YOU SUCK AT
Gardenia-“Huh?” Green-“Oh sorry nothing!! NOTHING!!” Gardenia-“Oh look! The carrot girl will give a speech!” Green-“CARROT GIRL!? NO WAY… SUPER CARROTTA!?!? SHE EXISTS IN THIS WORLD!??!!!” Gardenia-“Yep! She’s also our hero!!” Green-“NO WAY!! MY FRIENDS MUST KNOW THAT SUPER CARROTTA EXSITS!!!”
Super Carrotta-“LADIES AND GENTLEMAN! Your favorite hero, Super Carrotta
Gardenia-“YIKES!! I HATE CREEPY MANSIONS!! THEY ARE SO MANY GHOSTS TYPE
Green-“I can’t believe Super Carrotta exists! But only in this world.” Super Carrotta-“Would our Pokemon Champion, Lucas join us?” Lucas-“…Yeah. (Gosh, I want Gardenia too. So I can have the chance to
Green-“I’LL JOIN!!” Super Carrotta-“WOAH!! A POKEMON CAN TALK!!” Green-“I’M NOT A POKEMON!! I’M GREEN FROM THE KOKIRI TRIBE!! I LOST
???-“CORRECT!!” Three mysterious people comes in the scene. Super Carrotta-“What do you want this time, DEATHMELON!?” Green-“DEATHMELON EXISTS!? OMG!!! HE MUST BE SOO STRONG!!!” ???-“Master, who’s that punk?” DeathMelon-“Oh this? It’s a Green! The punk that the agents transformed
???-“XD YOUR ITALIEN ACCENT!!” DeathMelon-“Shut up Agent Boss.” Green-“DEATHMELON DOES EXISTS!! OMG!!!!” DeathMelon-“It’s a right Green! With our spaceship, our powerful charge
Agent C-“I’m scared for that! L PLEASE!! BRING 10 PEOPLE HERE TO STOP IT!!!” Agent Boss-“*punches Agent C* WHAT’S WRONG WITH YOU!? NOW HE KNOWS HOW
Green-“First, WHERE’S RAVER?” Agent A-“He’s in our ship. COME IN GET HIM!!!” The villains flees from
Gardenia-“*gulp* I guess I’ll go with you guys because Green joins.” Super Carrotta-“GOOD! Now we 4, we’ll go!!” They go in the Mansion. Lucas-“Sshhh careful there! This is Gravity Beetle! He guards this
Green-“Elite Mavericks exists on that dimension too?” Super Carrotta-“Okay so we will go sneakly to the next room! 3 2 1 go!”
Gardenia-“Oh no I’m scared! A…A…ACHOUM!!!” Lucas-“YIKES!!” Gravity Beetle wakes up and becomes in a furious anger!! Green-“It looks like that maverick wants death! Wanna dance? LET’S
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I appear in this story? X_X I'm still the same like always, wanting people to slap them to sense and mocking people for the fact they like a game XD I'm still the same like always, wanting people to slap them to sense and mocking people for the fact they like a game XD |
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juuldude : Lol. You're a game just like Green. It was funny that they got surprised that Green arrived in a dangerous level but he didn't told you guys XD. Anyway, what was your reaction when you saw DeathMelon ALIVE IN REAL LIFE!? |
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I was like 'HOLY CANNOLI, IT LIVES!!!' and I peed my pants XD I was like 'HOLY CANNOLI, IT LIVES!!!' and I peed my pants XD |
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great story green! but can i be in the next chapter? pleasseee? |
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DeathKid3 : Owch! I'm so sorry but I already know the story so it will be very difficult. I'll see what I can do okay? Oh and I made more than the same series so check it out! |
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Woo hoo! I'm still a pointless background character with very little to no personality depth! awesome~ I'm David's generic lacky! This is a dream come true!
Honestly your writing style still needs a lot of work. Honestly your writing style still needs a lot of work. |
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This was a very good chapter green! Funny too! But I would agree a bit with There are characters that are completely useless. Like frodlex. Pretty generic. But still good work green! DeathKid3 : Thing is, it would be completely useless and stupid to put you in the story, There would be way too many characters. Just saiyan Edit: PUT MEH IN TEH STORY PREASEEE DeathKid3 : Thing is, it would be completely useless and stupid to put you in the story, There would be way too many characters. Just saiyan Edit: PUT MEH IN TEH STORY PREASEEE |
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