Chapter1. That night in mushroom kingdom after dinner mario hears a faint sound then toadsworth comes in and well being hyper toadsworth says mario huff princess pe huff pe huff huff peach has been captured.MARIO:Whaaat again.Toadette:by a different king.MARIO:What color was he.Toadette:Green with an L on his hat.MARIO:Luigis behind this crime.Toadett:But he had a big back like bowsers shell with things that look like spikes.Toadsworth:Huff.toadsworth who found no relife might die.Chapter2:A great death:MARIO:I will stop this crime right away:Toadsworth:Collapse.Toadett MARIO and LUIGI:Luigi welcome ahhh toadsworth collapsed.MARIO:Toadett call 911.10 minutes later.Ambulance worker:I am sorry but toadsworth has died.MARIO LUIGI and toadett:nooo RIP Rest in peace toadsworth.Toadsworth:From 1400 - 2011.Chapter3:Luigi starts the adventure:MARIO LUIGI:Lets go.world 8-bowsers castle. LUIGI:A spiky pistion Clash.Mario:Luigi noooo.There you are bowser I will destroy you.Chapter4:A great deafet:Bowser:How did you know it was me.Mario:BANG.Bowser:nooo.Mario:You'll pay for what you did to Luigi.Bowser:That wasn't Luigi it was magikoopa.Mario:Magikoopa what there you are peach.The next day:Chapter 5 the great mix up:Marioeach want to play:Magikoopa:neeahhahahahahaha.Mario:Magikoopa again:Back at bowsers castle:Marioeach there you are lets go but nah I hate rescuing you into the lava with you peach.Peach:Mario noooo Splash.Peach:From 1987-2011.Death Count:2 people. this is a forum game because users can also fight bowser to I will be bowser post a reply saying I would like to battle then you post a reply with an attack then I will do the same.You will repeat this till one of us is defeated

Plot fail+Grammar fail+personality fail

What does that equal? EPIC FAIL.

Here, let me explain...

Plot fail:Killing off two major characters, one of them being the main goal of most Mario games? Sorry, does not compute.

Grammar fail:Has Austin96 ever heard of RPing or watched it? There's no asterisks to separate speech from verbs, and the enter key on Austin's keyboard is probably feeling rather lonely...

Personality fail:Mario dropping Peach into the lava just because of being tired of saving her? Nope.avi

silverthundr :
YourMajestyKen :
If this thread deserves to be closed, close it.

-Posted from a 3DS-

Uhm.. I'm going to close it, but not for the reasons you gave, November.

I'm closing it because

1. It's supposed to be a forum game, but you gave no sense of any rules or guidelines.

2. You know you're getting in trouble, making a game requiring you to host is a bad idea if you may not be here for long.

That said, closing.