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10-30-05 09:36 PM
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Why is all poetry all bout luv and hurt and pain... Why dosnt someone write poetry about somthing different.. I spose it just shows something about the poets.
Why is all poetry all bout luv and hurt and pain... Why dosnt someone write poetry about somthing different.. I spose it just shows something about the poets.
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10-30-05 09:40 PM
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Coz thats exactly what gets me writing
Coz thats exactly what gets me writing
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True... If only i could have writen more in eng exam.. Hoppy, u good at english?
True... If only i could have writen more in eng exam.. Hoppy, u good at english?
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10-31-05 08:18 PM
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poetry is just an outlet for the heart, and no im not really good at english, and please use Hopstar on here BB
poetry is just an outlet for the heart, and no im not really good at english, and please use Hopstar on here BB
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11-03-05 04:19 AM
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Here's another poem that came of the top of my head, dunno if it makes sense n if you guys will understand it, but please tell me what you think...

It is said to love a person you have to know the person,
But if all the people in the world who have not met that person,
Would it remain impossible to catch someone in your heart even if they don’t know they are there?
For if all this was true how could I say that I love you?
I have never spoken to you to know you would be by far a mission,
A mission I feel I could not conquer.
As all I feel I am worthy of is watching you from afar,
I do not feel that you could love me like I do you.
You & me are very different people, who live in different worlds,
Though it is very difficult to explain how it feels,
How it feels to feel that you are losing the chance to make a difference in your life.
Anyone who says that opposites attract obviously have only fallen for someone the same as them,
For if they knew how it felt to love someone not like them they should know it’s not that simple.
If it were so true then I wouldn’t feel so lonely as I do,
So lonely that I do not have someone to call mine.
If you need to know someone to love them,
I never want to love anyone, as they are not you.
And if that day comes when I do know you,
I would pray that I would love you forever as I would finally have someone to call my own.
Here's another poem that came of the top of my head, dunno if it makes sense n if you guys will understand it, but please tell me what you think...

It is said to love a person you have to know the person,
But if all the people in the world who have not met that person,
Would it remain impossible to catch someone in your heart even if they don’t know they are there?
For if all this was true how could I say that I love you?
I have never spoken to you to know you would be by far a mission,
A mission I feel I could not conquer.
As all I feel I am worthy of is watching you from afar,
I do not feel that you could love me like I do you.
You & me are very different people, who live in different worlds,
Though it is very difficult to explain how it feels,
How it feels to feel that you are losing the chance to make a difference in your life.
Anyone who says that opposites attract obviously have only fallen for someone the same as them,
For if they knew how it felt to love someone not like them they should know it’s not that simple.
If it were so true then I wouldn’t feel so lonely as I do,
So lonely that I do not have someone to call mine.
If you need to know someone to love them,
I never want to love anyone, as they are not you.
And if that day comes when I do know you,
I would pray that I would love you forever as I would finally have someone to call my own.
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11-03-05 08:57 PM
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thats not really a poem more a story sort of thing, poems more run in short lines of about 5 words at most
thats not really a poem more a story sort of thing, poems more run in short lines of about 5 words at most
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Theres a million different sort of types of poetry though.
Theres a million different sort of types of poetry though.
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11-03-05 11:33 PM
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yeah, but poem's always have the short line thing no more the bout 5 6 words it loses its flow after that
yeah, but poem's always have the short line thing no more the bout 5 6 words it loses its flow after that
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11-05-05 06:30 AM
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watever... its just something i wrote about wat i was thinking at the time
watever... its just something i wrote about wat i was thinking at the time
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