Okay, so I don't know what the goal of the game is. Ghost pieces are introduced, but it is unclear what their purpose is or how many we need. I'm guessing they are needed to get the "good" ending, but since I don't know how many to look for, I am not sure. Your only Pokémon is a Marowak, and for the love of god, DO NOT DELETE FORESIGHT. It's possible to do so as your Pokémon learns other attacks that can replace it, but without it you are incapable of playing the game. 95% of the enemies or ghost types, so without foresight you can't touch them.

You can battle scientists randomly, but they have to be "challenged" several times to battle, and they all use only Haunters. So again, each battle takes at least two turns since you have to use foresight. The apparent goal of the game is to beat the lvl 100 Gengar at the end. If this is supposed to be done through the undetermined amount of ghost pieces, or by grinding forever on Haunters I am not sure.

Ultimately, I found it was not worth the time and I don't recommend it.

I'm glad that you at least met the minimum requirements for a vizzed review. Some people decide to not to make their reviews at least 100 words long unfortunately. As far as what I think of the review though, I think it's good for a 1st review. In the future, I'd suggest making your reviews longer and add more detail to them. Also, I'd suggest separating your reviews into separate categories, such as

Graphics: 8/10 -then explain why you gave the category the score you did here-

If you do that for each category, your review will look more organized and if you add more words and detail to the review, you'll make lots of Viz.

I liked your review because I added this game to the RGR (since it was located in the Hacks Studio of PokeCommunity) and the thread which I added the game description (and game itself) was from this page:
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=339585

and bottom line, the description in the author's thread doesn't match your review.

kalamundooo : Confusing indeed... I'm not sure I understand you review.

Like gamerforlife said it's much too short. If it's possible, you need to spell out the details that made this game suck. The gameplay seems to be one; what else? Is it worse than other Pokémon games?