Dun. duun bala pom papa! THIS IS IT FOLKS! Me and my mom are reviewing Super Smash Bros Brawl for the Wii! So lets get ready! READY, SET, SMASH REVEIW!
Graphics: 10. Even though my mom says the graphics are good, i say that the graphics are MUCH better then Super Smash Melee. Plus I love how a lot of the Classic stages are better then better then before. Not to even mention the charters. In Super Smash bros for the Nintendo 64, all of the charters had pointy edges, then in melee, The some of the pointy edges were removed and new charters were introduced. And now brawl, all of the charters look AWESOME. So we are giving this a 10.
Sound: 10. Mom says that on brawl you can say that amassing and you can earn in the stages and some of the songs are from other games, even though some of the songs don't sound good, its because it some songs came from older consoles. I agree with her, and plus some songs are Remixed like 02/Zero 2 (note: DON'T GET CONFUSED BY THE AWESOME MEGA MAN X CHARATER!) theme, in Kirby 64 Crystal Shards, the original tone of the song was Dark and people might say 2Spooky4Me, while the brawl remix sounds like 02 is some weird screaming monster or something. We are going to give it a 10.
Addictiveness: 10. Mom and i are addicted to the game. Whenever mom and i are debating on school, or just wanna play for fun, we'll brawl against each other and see who'll win. Sometimes its me, and sometimes its mom. It depends on the stage. If we do one of My custom stages,, she'll say No. And since me and my mom always play as the Winged Charters we sometimes say what they say. 
Story: 8. (heres my lone ranger time) The story mode of the game is very interesting and has a lot of plot twists! Heres the basic story is (with help). Tabuu is turning a lot of good guys into trophies and a lot of the charters are trying to stop him and save the tropicated Warriors. That's just the basic story but i was gonna explain what happens in the begging of the game. Oh well. :p
Depth 9: now if you are gonna Plow down the story mode, i am going to warn you, its not like Classic mode, it took me a few months to finish Story mode. So just to let you know, STORY MODE IS TOUGH!
Difficulty: 8. It depends on the Level you play the game on, Plus the controls are different. I use the Nunchuck Controller while mom play with just the wii remote. But it depends on your style. 
Overall: 9.2. This game is very fun, addicting and not to even mention Silly. Plus i wanted to give it a 10 *randomly get hit on the back with a hammer, flung into the sky and into a lake* [mom] you can't give it a ten with out a perfect score [me] party crasher. Anyways, not only this game is fun, it has a Street Fighter-like style along with a Platformer story mode to go with this Nintendo Street fighter game!

RMJEtheReploid : That was an ok review; however it could use some more detail for each individual section for example: what is it that makes the games addictive? how much time have you put into the game for depth? or even what do you think about the music/what are some of your favorite songs?

Also I would suggest spacing out your sections more so it's like:

Sound:

Addictiveness:

Instead of being clumped together since it can be hard to tell the transition, I'm not sure how many reviews you've done but I'd say  if you really enjoy writing these don't give up <3  there are changes that could be made and I don't want you to feel down about it as you  could have potential

Keep trying, don't give up, and almost strive to improve.

sonicthehedgehog57 : sorry.

I like this one, but like the other one that I had read, it can use some work, but is still a nice review. I did play this version a couple of times, and I did like it, but it is not my favorite

SMBLOZ123 : i have Super smash bros. Brawl. but i dont have Super smash bros. Melee 
zanderlex : ;( your mean.

What did I do? Its just not my favorite.

I always thought Brawl sucked for a few major reasons:

• Horrible Wi-Fi system
• Gameplay mechanics (tripping, infinite air dodging, escaping after 13 frames of hitstun)
• Slow speed and abysmally OP characters.

I am a little angry that you use the wii chuck combo and your mom can even use the Wii remote by itself. Let me tell you, I have used the Wii remote for 2 years by itself. If you want to get competitive, only use a GameCube controller. The wiimote won't allow you to do U-airs without jumping or do many advanced techs like DACUS, or timing-specific ones.


The review is nice, but let me say this:

1. Why do you say your mom is reviewing it when only you are typing this? (4th wall break insert here)
2. You should space an entire empty line between review categories, like spacing graphics from sound, overall from difficulty, etc.
3. I don't think you should go and say that Tabuu is behind this, because according to the Vizzed rules, you can't say anything about the story besides just the opening. Tabuu isn't mentioned anywhere in the opening until you get to the final stages where you see Tabuu turn everyone into trophies.
4. The last few lines disturb me. Why do you have a caption for mom in brackets? I used to do the brackets in my fan stories 2-3 years ago and stopped making fan stories 2 1/2 years ago.
5. You should always go in-depth with a game THIS big. With Pokemon Channel and Sonic Heroes, I did around 2000 words in both, and those games are very extensive. You should try doing that with very long games and ones that are super large and extensive. Like, explain why you give the category you are looking at the rating you gave.

3 and 5 are very important, you don't have to change 1 and 4, but it would make it less weird for me in the future if I catch your reviews.

SMBLOZ123 : I hope you won't be mean or contradicting me as I didn't really like Brawl and then I saw tripping and horrible wifi. I lost it right when seeing the lag pile up. I always liked Melee, but go ahead and bop me if you want. Jiggly is awesome in Melee btw as you see my profile pic.