Legend of greenluigi
Zoro’s Mask chapter 2(SPOILERS!):

the museum and the joke competition.
WARNING! Before you
read this chapter they will contain HUGE FABULOUS spoilers. So if you LOVE
spoilers then you can read it. If not then return to the board or check other
threads. Thank you!
The next day… it was
a beautiful sunshine in clock town where are heroes are taking vacation. It’s
breakfast time! Kimmy woke up but no green because he is such a lazy jerk.
Kimmy:”good morning green! Huh? You’re still asleep? Well never mind i’ll
prepare breakfast.” Kimmy prepared breakfast. The breakfast is some yummy
chocolate cereal. Kimmy yelled:”GREEN BREAKFAST TIME!” green woke up with eyes
close. He fell downstairs and he licks his hand for no reason. Kimmy slaps green.
Green:”OW!!!! WHAT DID YOU DO THAT FOR!?” kimmy:”to wake you up moron! Anyway
take your cereal and say thx because I MADE IT.” Green:”thx.” The vizzed heroes
eats the cereals. Green was still a sleepy head. Because of this green’s head
falls down to the bowl. Kimmy sighed:”green can you hurry up im done eating.
I’ll go out for a walk and I don’t care if you’re done or not.” Kimmy went out
for a little walk around the town. And she sees a fat woman talking to the
mayor dotour. The mayor dotour:”Madame Aroma my wife today all of the people
are going to visit the museum and the joke competition will held also today.
What should we start with?” Madame Aroma:”we should start with the museum.
Besides the joke competition nobody will ever be able to make you laugh me or
you. It held every year.” Kimmy said:”oh hi the mayor!” the mayor
dotour:”kimmy! Thank you for saving us yesterday! Would you like to visit clock
town’s museum? Btw where’s green?” kimmy:”yes I want to visit it! It seems
interesting anyway green is such a sleepy head today he didn’t even finished
his cereal.” Madame aroma:”is that so? Well we should go without him then.”
Suddenly green screamed very extremely loud. Green:”WHERE’S MY….
HAT?!?!?!!?!??!” because of his scream every people woke up and iris starts to
cry because of his scream. Kafei and Anju along with their baby: iris came out
from their house. Anju:”did green suddenly screamed?” Kafei:”I think so…” kimmy
got angry and she went to her and green’s house. She slaps green:”green! WHAT’S
WRONG WITH YOU SCREAM!?” green:”because I want my hat! Like I said: IM NOT
FABULOUS WITHOUT MY HAT!!!!!! Where is it!?” anju came and she said:”your hat?
Well to tell you the truth is that our baby iris accidently pied on it. Im very
sorry but here it is.” She handed over greenluigi’s hat to green. Green:”…”.
Greenluigi without saying a word came out from the house and he climbs to the
roof. Nintendofankimmy said:”GREEN WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?” green:”this is our
goodbye kimmy im going to jump and im goanna die because of this! So goodbye…”
kimmy:”NO GREEN DON’T DO THIS PLEASE!” green jumps from the roof. And an
unknown man with a white long haired, holding a wand, with a black and purple
dress saves greenluigi. Green:”HEY WHO SAVED ME?! I WANTED TO BE DEAD SINCE MY
HAT IS RUINED!” the unknown man:”my name is Whis A.K.A master no hands. Im a
god of destruction and a wizard too here’s a new hat to make you happy.” With
his wand he makes a new hat to green to appear. Green:”WOO A NEW HAT FOR ME!”
green grabs the hat and started to kiss it. He wears his hat. Kimmy:”well thank
you whis well can we go to the museum now?!” green:”HELL YEAH!” the vizzed
heroes goes to the museum. A mysterious man in a treen with a purple suit which
is not whis said:”in this museum you will see the truth about yourself. Well a
bit at least.” The mysterious man disappears. The vizzed heroes and the people
enters clock town’s museum. They see beautiful paintings. Then green sees a
painting which a prince with a blue suit sitting on a chair. He asked whis:”who
is this guy with an angry face?” whis:”this is the bad “prince fou”. He caused
many bad things and right now it’s unknown if he is dead or not.”
Green:”weird.” Kimmy sees a painting which a young man wearing EXACTLY green’s
clothes and hat. Kimmy asked to whis:”now who is this guy?” whis:”this is one
of the brave heroes: Luigi. He is a powerful warrior and if he fuses with Mario
one of the brave heroes they turn into the powerful warrior: Marigi.”
Green:”fuse? That’s remembering me something… well never mind!” kimmy sees
another painting which a young woman punching a man with a black suit. Kimmy re
asked whis:”who is she and who is that man?” whis:”that is the most serious
brave heroes: Peach. And that man is the evil Agent Boss: The leader of team
agent.” Green sees another painting about a trio and he asked to whis:”who is
that trio?” whis:”these are the ultra heroes. Their names are: Jimmy, Paul and
Rex. Well Paul lives in Clock Town but later he joined forces with jimmy and
rex. Well now the joke competition is about to start so let’s hurry!” the
vizzed heroes hurried for the joke competition. The mayor dotour:”Ladies and
Gentleman the rules are simple like always: all you have to do is to make me
laugh me or madame aroma with a hilarious joke.” Kimmy:”well I will fail of
course because im more strict than green. He might win.” Kimmy tried to make
laugh the mayor dotour and madame aroma but she failed. Every people failed so
there’s only greenluigi. Green:”ready guys for my joke? It’s pretty hilarious
so get ready!” madame aroma:”Bring it on!” green:”YOU CAN EAT A FISH BUT YOU
CAN’T EAT IT’S FINS!” the mayor dotour:”I CAN’T WHAT!?” green:”you can’t eat a
fish because its fins are poisonous so nobody can never eat a WHOLE fish. Get
it?” everybody started to laugh including the mayor and madame aroma. Kafei
said to green:”that’s the first time my dad and my mom laughs so wildly and
your joke is the best joke of the year!” green:”thx! Because I have a sense of
humor more than kimmy so I think im the person the most funny in the world. The
mayor:”it’s the first time me and my wife laughs so wildly! Anyway the
competition has ended so I wish everyone a good luck next year and goodnight
everybody!” kafei said:”well green we’re sorry that our baby iris pied in your
hat.” Green:”that’s ok! Anyway we have to go to sleep so bye!” everyone went to
sleep…

greenluigi : i hope you dont act like this in real life man. this chapter was funny and some what sad in the fact hes super tired suicidel then eased this chapter had a good mix of emotions keep up ?the good work

Oh my gosh, you put a lot of work into this one, and I love it. The only thing I didn't like would be the formatting, but that's just fine. For the story itself, it's great and I think you did an amazing job.