Story: The story is abour Doctor Morbis using his new ape man to destroy the cheetahmen once and for all, and that's about it for the story.- - -Graphics:The graphics look exactly the same as the Action 52 Version of cheetahmen, seriously no improvements. All the sprite flickering is bad and still annoying as usual.- - -Gameplay:The first level you play as i think apollo who uses a crossbow to kill enemies, it sucks, see most of the enemies are on the ground or to short to hit, you cannot crouch so its impossible to hit ground enemies. Jumping is annoying, it's the same in Action 52 where you tap B and then push right. if you jump off a block floating in the air air you will die from fall damage, if you don't jump you're fine. The first boss is Doctor Morbis who just runs to the right and doesn't stop until he dies. I didn't bother to play anymore, i got so bored.- - -Sound/Music:The music is the same theme from the Action 52 version. the sound effects are the same to with the jump sounding like a hum by a cricket and punching something that sounds like a pigeon being punched- - -Final Verdict:This game sucks, bad graphics, bad sound, bad controls, bad glitches. 

Okay, I think you are off to a good start with this review but I think you should focus more on saying what was bad about it. Specify. Talk about the parts of the game that contributed to it not being as good as it could be. I think you have a good solid start here, I would just separate it and break it down into categories and go from there with reviewing each one. Its a preference, but I think it just looks more professional that way. But that is what I would do. 


The only other thing I can say is just keep reviewing frequently and I can promise you will get better at it the more you do it. So not a bad start, just keep up the good work and keep making more reviews if you want to get better!