Pokemon: Shiny Gold - Review by Dean2k13 (FEATURED) - Game Boy Advance, Game Reviews - Pokemon: Shiny Gold

06-10-13 01:50 AM

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Yo Dean2k13, what's up. Off the subject, I think
I found the thread you were telling me about.
Now, back to the subject at hand. First I would
like to say that I'm not a fan of Pokémon at all.
With that said, I went and read the whole
review,and all I can say is that it is very unique.
I like how you separated your categories and
that each category was very detailed and specific.
I'm fairly new and haven't had much experience
in playing hacks, but the way you wrote out your
thoughts, you seem to know what your talking
about. I'm "old school" and this review reminded
me a lot of the "old school" magazines such as
Game Pro , Electronic Gaming Monthly, and
Nintendo Power. Not only that, I use the word
unique because it also reminds me of a walk
through. You seem to have found a distinct
combination of the two and fused it together
like they were Goku and Vegeta. I guess you
can call it a "Review Through". All in all I like
what you wrote. It kept me very interested in
what you saying about the game. Great job,
keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read
more reviews from you in the future.

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06-10-13 08:09 AM

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Dean2k13 : I have to say that, with your age and amount of self-application to writing, you are most definitely going places in life. We writers are becoming more and more rare as the eras progress, so we need more people with that kind of drive. Your grammar could use a bit of tweaking, but beyond that, I'm impressed. Thank you for writing this.

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06-10-13 02:57 PM

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I agree with the post above! You writing is just awesome, I always love reading your writing.

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06-10-13 05:52 PM

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Dean2k13 : I like this review's depth, you did a good job with that. Where it kinda falls short is the formatting. You have some paragraphs that are huge, then other sentences that are double-spaced.

Other than that you did well!

Keep up the good work!

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