Filthy little plagiarizer.

xOpticalStaticx : Hey!

This was a detailed piece of writing, it was a good review. I enjoyed reading this! 

Positive Feedback:

I liked how you went into detail on what levels you can find Pokémon (Caterpie & Metapod) This was very informative. 

Your definite strength is the section 'Story' I can see that you put a lot more detail into this section compared to the rest. Very well done as this is usually one of the harder sections to fill in.

I'm glad you mentioned how you couldn't get enough of this game. This backs up your rating on addictiveness. I enjoyed the way you stated that the game keeps you guessing through out, this draws readers in, and is very effective.

You were very successful in depth also, your writing excites me! I really, really enjoyed reading this. I love how you mentioned that there is always a surprise in store for you! Great, just great!

Negative Feedback:

I would definitely work on 'Graphics' as you stated, and I quote 'The picture is just as good as Pokémon Fire Red' Here, you should have discussed what the picture was like in Fire Red, and then make the contrasts and comparisons. You didn't really develop that point any further, and that's a disappointment, as I know you have the potential to write a great review.

Really develop your points more, add more detail into them, this will gain you the good ratings.

I hope you work on this and come back stronger and write a brilliant review! Good Luck! I provided help below!

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Always use P.E.E. Point. Evidence. Explain. In reviews. Give a valid point concerning the game, back this point up with evidence from the game itself and then explain your point fully, this is how you achieve great review ratings!

Also, this thread will also help you with writing even better reviews than the standard you are currently writing at:
https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382

Very good job on this review, I like your detail and how descriptive you are in each category as well, it really shows that you put good effort in your writing. I also like how you include extra stuff like the map layout and the underground path, it is good to put a lot of extra thought into your review because that is what makes it awesome.

I also agree with a lot of the stuff that Dean said, you really do go into depth with your writing which is very important to do because it really gives an insight on what the reader is going to expect when they play.

Your review overall is very interesting and it is the perfect length too, so good job there.



I will say that you could've added a lot more to graphics and sound though because they are essential components to the game itself and the graphics are major too, you could talk about how clear they are or in comparison to fire red you could've gone a bit further into that.



Overall though I think you did a very great job in writing this review and from the description alone I feel compelled to want to play this game so good job, keep it up and keep writing more good reviews!

The game is actually very good for what I played, and that is not saying a lot

What the fro yo! This nimrod actually copy and pasted my review for this game . Nobody caught him .

He probably got himself Perma Banned for similar plagiarisms .

Still , learning about this blatant rip off years after I typed all this out after actually playing the game [ which I doubt he even bothered to do ] it is upsetting .

Huff !


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