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these are my poetry works. I hope you enjoy.
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04-12-12 08:11 PM
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Alright... I will be updating this every time I come up some thing new. But for now. Here is some of my older works that I found among my junk.

these are my poetry works. I hope you enjoy.

There are from a few years ago.

"But Here I Am" 
By: Donald "Caleb" Maloy, also known as thing1

My birth was a difficult process for my mother;
Twenty-three hours of extreme pain
With my big head being a bother.
But here I am, big and strong.

When I was young,
I was physically abused by a man I hated with a passion.
Then ten years later, I have that our brave heroes go through when their ears drum.
But here I am, fighting severe P.T.S.D.

All through elementary school,
I moved so much
That I just wanted to relax in a pool.
But here I am, happy as can be.

My uncle and cousin were killed by a drunk women.
I was seven,
And didn't know why I had to go to a sermon.
But here I am, realizing how much I miss them.

Middle school was a struggle,
Something unusual for me;
I had to learn to juggle much,
But here I am, with plenty of friends.

High school was easy.
All though at times,
it made me feel queasy.
But here I am, about to graduate early.

All through my life,
I got into trouble.
it was like the role of dice.
But here I am, finally rolling seven's.

Now,
I'm getting ready to become a man.
I don't know how...
But here I am, getting ready to do my part, serving my country proudly.

Author's Note: (this work was done maybe a year and a half ago)

"What People Say About Me"
By: Donald "Caleb" Maloy, also know as thing1

Some people say I'm annoying.
But I say, "That's just me."

My sisters say that I'm bossy;
But I'm just trying to least them in the right direction.

Most people say I can't;
But I know that I can.

Some say "Don't."
But I do the right thing.

Some people say I shouldn't do everything,
But I say how do I know I can't until I try it?

People say I need to focus,
But I say that I am.

Others say I need to go;
But I say, "I'm here to stay."

Some negative people tell me "Hello."
But I tell them, "Good Bye."

People tell me I'm ill;
But I tell them I'm well.

Some said I would end up in jail, 
But I say: "Look at me now."

Others said my mouth would get me in killed,
But I said, "I'm still alive."

People said I would have to learn,
But I tell them to look where at where I am.

People say I need to let go of my mom.
But I said, "Obliviously I you've never heard of the bond between Mother and Son."

People told me, "No!"
But here I am, telling them "Yes!"

People tell me not to worry about others,
But I ask: "Does that include my family?"

Authors Note: (written about a year and a half ago)

This is all I have at this time. Feedback is requested and appreciated. Thank you for your support in my journey to do great things in this life.
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Those are some interesting topics in the post. Even though its older poetry from a couple of years ago, its still pretty good today. Good job, thing.
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Wow, I had no clue that you were a nice poet, these were some interesting poetry pieces that reflect some real time and effort. I appreciate you posting this... it gives us valuable insight into you as a person, a good thing
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Yea I think it's pretty good, it all rhymes you could say it was a rap or poem.I think ill Wayne is a good story teller and he writes for other people too! Good job sounds from the heart.
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yeah... i have to have something on my heart to write about it... until then, I have
really bad writers block. And I do not like to B S my poetry either. I have some more somewhere. But I can not seem to find them. D:
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Good job with your poetry. Nice to see some of your own work! I look forward to seeing more in the future. Also I know writers block it our worst enemy. I'm going through that with chapter 5 I just can't figure out how I want it to be written. Darn writers block... Good luck overcoming yours!
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Sounds pretty good. Some of the parts of the poetry was quite interesting to be honest with you. I don't know a lot about poetry because I'm not all that good of a poet. The main thing thing that I would tend to stick to would be writing.
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Well, it's really good. I found some time to read your poems and you have all my support. Keep doing this good work, man, I'm really impressed by your skills
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thanks for the support guys. I might be doing some corny A B C, and some 2 liners later today or tomorrow. have not decided yet. Does any body have any topics? I tend to do alright if I have a topic given to me...
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What about doing a poem about spring or your favorite item you own. Those are two good ideas to start off with.
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RequiemHaunt: an A B C kind of thing? I guess I could. I might get on that tomorrow morning. We'll see how today plays out. I also have on that I have in mind, but I am going to keep that one secret. 
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RequiemHaunt : Summon fail.
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Alright... I got some new stuff for y'all.
The A B C's of Me
By: Caleb Maloy, aka, thing1

A- Always there for when a friend needs me
B- Balanced lifestyle between Family, Friends, and Self
C- Caleb, it is my middle name
D- Donald, it is my first name
E- Everyone has there feelings about me
F- Feels like the whole word does not give a crap about me
G- Goes forward in life, no matter what is put on his plate
H- Hates to have his buttons pushed
I- Is one amazing guy, once you get to know him
J- Jokes all the time, if he knows the person will enough
K- Kind though out his entire life
L- Loves his family more than anything in the world
M- Maloy is my last name
N- No one messes with my family with out messing with me
O- Open minded, or at least tried to be
P- People love me; well, most of them
Q- Quitters never win, and I am not one of them
R- Respectful to those that respect me
S- Stands tall in the face of adversity
T- Taller than all of his family
U- Unique, in his own weird way
V- Vizzed Board loyal, and always will be
W- Walks into the darkness, and comes back victorious
X- eXtremely agile, and annoying
Y- Your favorite person in the whole world
Z- Zig Zag'ing through all the insults 

The American, The Foreigner, and the Ramen
By: Caleb Maloy, aka, thing1

Ramen is a foreign food,
But Americans eat it.
The foreigners say: "Dude,
Why you eat this in small bits?"

The American says: "Sir,
I like it my way. Please respect that."
The foreigner say: "Burr, 
It is cold here. Why dat?"

The American replies: "I do not know.
Maybe you should ask the whether man."
The foreigner say: "Too much snow.
And that man should be ban."

The American says: "Would
You like some Ramen?"
The foreigner says: "Could
You? I want to try it, made by American."

That day the American
And the Foreigner
Did what others can:
Accept others for who they are.

The Epicness of thing1
By: Caleb Maloy, aka thing1

Thing1 was a epic dude
Going around, and posting like it was a feud.

Then one day his sister joined the site,
And gave thing1 a huge freight.

Thing1 was scared of his little sister,
Mostly because of all his blisters.

SuperYoshi was her name,
And messing with thing1 was her game.

So thing1 gets an idea,
And decides to take her to IKEA.

He takes her to get her meatballs,
And then he gets some phone calls.

He is told not to feed her the meatballs,
Because they had been nibbled on by dogs.

By this time, Yoshi had already eaten a few.
And she hadn't even had her Mountain Dew.

So thing1, being epic and all,
Decides to hang up the call.

He then goes to Yoshi's rescue,
And it turns out it the dog was Scooby Doo.

Yoshi is petting Scooby Doo,
But Scooby has the flu.

So thing1 takes Scooby and Yoshi to the doc,
And the doc tells them to put on some socks.

Thing1 makes them do what they are told,
And that is the story, lo and behold.

This is all I have for today. So, like always, feed back is requested and sort of needed. Hope you liked this stuff. SuperYoshi thought these were hilarious.

SuperYoshi: Here is the stories, sis.
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How about the other abcs? This one is definatly awesomme though.
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MasterDash : what exactly did you have in mind? I could do one of your screen name, a characteristic that I think of you for every letter in MasterDash. Would you like that?
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My friend, sorry if my reply is a bit late but I was so focused on my stuff that I completely forgot to tell you: I really enjoyed your new works. Yes, I spent some time to read it but I forgot to reply. How confused I am sometimes. Oh well, nice job, my friend
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