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ghostfishy : I think right now that they have a decent card line up. Taker v Shane is a pretty shaky one in my opinion but if there is one thing I know bout the WWE, it's that their match endings for big matches will suit more people than not. They may have a double KO or Taker willingly accepting a loss to better WWE. What I can't understand though is will Taker be a face here? I mean he is always a face at Mania duh, but now he is fighting for the biggest heel in WWE in Vince. Sounds like the Ministry to me. We've yet to hear his response to Shane for the Mania match (or I have yet to hear it) but I think the possibility of him being heel at Mania is very likely. Plus his last matches showed him using some heelish tactics *cough* Low Blow  *End Cough*.

And speaking of nut shots, I think Lesnar needs to wear a cup because he has gotten SO MANY. With a match vs Ambrose at Mania he better wear some protection because He'll need it. Ambrose is gonna be thrown around like a rag doll and then probably have a momentum shift (with a low blow)  where he starts beat Lesnar with a chair. Just like Punk back in 2013. I'd give the advantage to Lesnar though because Paul is always gonna be a factor. I just hope we see some wrestling moves in the match apart from Suplexes and Cross Bodies. I mean I love seeing Lesnar toss someone around as much as the next guy but I would like to see more variety in his move set. He has so much more potential than Suplexes. Likewise Ambrose. Chairs and kendo sticks shouldn't be the only things he uses against Lesnar ( TBH they are really the only things he can use). It'll be interesting to see if WWE book this as a "Lesnar beatdown, Ambrose Skirmish" fight or as a "Lesnar beatdown, Ambrose Never say die fight."

As for Styles, I think him vs Owens would be great at Mania for the IC title but I also think Ziggler already has that slot. Not sure. But for now I want to see WWE really set the foundation for Styles. Since he is a new guy that some folks won't know, he needs a bit more mic time. His matches are great but putting on a good match is only half the job. I know he's had segments with Miz (where he said nothing cuz Miz wasn't letting him talk) and Jericho but will he be a trash talker, a respect giver or what? I want to see more of his personality. Need something to distinguish him from an average wrestler from the TNA to a WWE Superstar and potential World Champion. 
ghostfishy : I think right now that they have a decent card line up. Taker v Shane is a pretty shaky one in my opinion but if there is one thing I know bout the WWE, it's that their match endings for big matches will suit more people than not. They may have a double KO or Taker willingly accepting a loss to better WWE. What I can't understand though is will Taker be a face here? I mean he is always a face at Mania duh, but now he is fighting for the biggest heel in WWE in Vince. Sounds like the Ministry to me. We've yet to hear his response to Shane for the Mania match (or I have yet to hear it) but I think the possibility of him being heel at Mania is very likely. Plus his last matches showed him using some heelish tactics *cough* Low Blow  *End Cough*.

And speaking of nut shots, I think Lesnar needs to wear a cup because he has gotten SO MANY. With a match vs Ambrose at Mania he better wear some protection because He'll need it. Ambrose is gonna be thrown around like a rag doll and then probably have a momentum shift (with a low blow)  where he starts beat Lesnar with a chair. Just like Punk back in 2013. I'd give the advantage to Lesnar though because Paul is always gonna be a factor. I just hope we see some wrestling moves in the match apart from Suplexes and Cross Bodies. I mean I love seeing Lesnar toss someone around as much as the next guy but I would like to see more variety in his move set. He has so much more potential than Suplexes. Likewise Ambrose. Chairs and kendo sticks shouldn't be the only things he uses against Lesnar ( TBH they are really the only things he can use). It'll be interesting to see if WWE book this as a "Lesnar beatdown, Ambrose Skirmish" fight or as a "Lesnar beatdown, Ambrose Never say die fight."

As for Styles, I think him vs Owens would be great at Mania for the IC title but I also think Ziggler already has that slot. Not sure. But for now I want to see WWE really set the foundation for Styles. Since he is a new guy that some folks won't know, he needs a bit more mic time. His matches are great but putting on a good match is only half the job. I know he's had segments with Miz (where he said nothing cuz Miz wasn't letting him talk) and Jericho but will he be a trash talker, a respect giver or what? I want to see more of his personality. Need something to distinguish him from an average wrestler from the TNA to a WWE Superstar and potential World Champion. 
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I need a Cubone Or Marowak with the item Thick Club AND The ability Battle Armor. Thick Club can only be found on wild Cubone and they aren't available in ORAS so it'd be great if I could get someone on X or Y to trade one to me. In return I have some 4iv mons laying around or I could just breed one up for you. Please and Thanks
I need a Cubone Or Marowak with the item Thick Club AND The ability Battle Armor. Thick Club can only be found on wild Cubone and they aren't available in ORAS so it'd be great if I could get someone on X or Y to trade one to me. In return I have some 4iv mons laying around or I could just breed one up for you. Please and Thanks
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Finally got around to finishing this chapter up. Not a lot of action here. Mostly plans for the future. Hope you guys and gals enjoy.



Mid-morning, Saint Domingue:

After a split up with Zed and Roger’s crew to facilitate the loss of Dedmond’s crew, the two ships sailed peacefully to a vacant coast on the Northern most part of what is now called Haiti. Zed and Roger were still on the Herron whilst John, Luke and other 5 other crew members sailed aboard the Charm. Of course the former members of the Charm’s crew took no time to adjust to sailing their now reunited ship. They would need that experience to compensate for the lack of men aboard the vessel as they soon realized that it took more than 6 men to bring the ship into port. Meanwhile The Herron had just docked and the crew had made their way to the loose, white sand, complimented by the turquoise liquid that washed its shores.

As the morning grew old and both ships had made port, the combined crew of 15 gathered in oneness as Roger, Zed and John took center stage…or sand rather, and were ready to give out orders.

Roger- “Listen uppah all ye. Thar (there) be two things we need geh’n (getting) befare (before) we make our way to The Lost Cityyah (City).

Zed- “Right. Chartman Luke. The Map if you will.”

Luke- *Holds up map and draws the attention of the audience*

Zed- “We are here.” *Points at Northern portion of Saint Domingue with a stick he found not too long ago.* “Our purpose here is to find an indicator. That which will lead us to where we want to be. The map says if we continue that way *Points stick to the south west* then we’ll see an old cottage…..Ancient library records that I read back in England say that in this cottage lies an indicator of some sort. Downside to our little search and rescue is that our indicator is said to be guarded by creatures of the Sprite kind.”

Crew Members- *Murmur in confusion*

Matthew- “Sprites? You mean those mythical midgets with pointy ears? I hear they bruise babies when no one looks and that’s where birthmarks come from.”

Mark- “I hear they like to cut your hair when you sleep.”

Zed- “Oh only if they were mischievous instead of nefarious. The ones we’ll be dealing with have a high probability of being rabid imps rather than playful nuisances.”

Roger- *interrupts what he deems as unnecessary descriptions* “The ather (other) group will set off to Trinidad close to South America. Shouldn’t take no mare (more) than a week’s sail. The Key is located on a Volcanic Islet named Kick’em Jenny. It hasn’t blown in the last 5 years so getting on the isle, getting the key and sailing away shouldn’t be too much of a hasslah (hassle).”

Ed- “Who goes where? Which one of our groups seeks to ascertain which goal?”

Zed- “Well I hate elves so I pick Jenny.”

Roger- “I have a deal to settle with them midgets. I’ll be staying here.”

Ed- “I will search with Roger. He is the more trustworthy of himself and Zed.”

Zed- “Can’t say I didn’t see that one coming

Ed- “Can’t say your name isn’t synonymous with treachery and unscrupulouslness.”

Zed- “I can say….. I’ll be needing my Charm back since ye and Roger will be partnering up. Need a ship to get to an islet.”

Ed- “Fine. It’s all yours.” *Hands over Captain’s hat*

Zed- *Accepts Hat* “Well that was easier than anticipated.”

Amy- “I honestly thought you’d be happier.”

Zed- “I’m rejoicing with my inside voice.”

Mark- “We still need more members for our crew. Maybe about 10 men would do.”

Zed- “Aye. We can find some if we continue westwards on the coastline. If I’m right there should be seamen singing shanties in no time. That was the case last time I set foot here.”

Ed- “Where do we meet up after we’ve found the indicator and you’ve found the key?”
Roger- “We converge next at Dominicah. From there we take our next plan of action. For now… Get the on yar (your) way and commence our marchin (marching)!

At this the crew split in two with Roger, Ed and everyone else apart from Zed’s first mates and Amy on one party (P1) and Zed, the four first mates and Amy on the other party (P2). Not too long afterwards, party 1 set off into the direction of the indicator characterized by dense foliage and the call of inland animals waking from their slumber. Party 2 went off along the saturated and noisy coast complete with the squalls of all species of seabirds. The Sun illuminated the path of both parties with its endearing glow which signaled the start of what was going to be a long day.

Meanwhile: Reaper’s Bride.

Dedmond- “How many hours till we arrive in the Caribbean?” asked the captain whose voice hinted a disgruntled tone and mood.

Skeleton Gregory- “About 5 captain.” Answered the chief mate.

Dedmond- “Good. We are making headway. This pursuit shouldn’t take too long.” Whispered the captain. “Off the starboard bow!!! Move with the current that the trade winds direct.” Yelled the still angered whirlwind of fury.

At this command the ship’s motion shifted to the north-eastern direction. The vessel of bone and rotten wood caught wind in its tattered sails, its main mast being topped with a now decomposing disembodied cranium. The undead crew attending to their duties aboard The Reaper’s Bride; their captain awaiting his arrival in the Caribbean with great thirst. The morning sun lending its gleam to the sea forward the ship and later driving the darkness away from Dedmond and his crew. The darkness they had become accustomed to. Perhaps for shadowing a change in fate.


Meanwhile aboard The English Providence:

The ship had finally become aground. The occupants made their way to the shore where they planned to track one of the two pirate crews. They were careful not to port in the same area as to avoid being spotted prematurely. Their sailors’ hats cast shadows on the sand that each resembled a small bird with its wings slightly outstretched. Commander Williams however, had the largest hat shadow, signifying his authority.



Williams – “They made port to our west. If the library books I read are true, they’ll be heading inland and in a south westerly direction. We’ll apprehend on foot in the same direction until our paths cross.” *Looks at compass* “Five of our men will come with me to locate the bilge rats. The rest will stay here where you will guard the ship and notify English Sentries of our arrival. Now I will 5 men brave enough to join me on my endeavor step forth? Be ye reminded that we are dealing with some of the most notorious and blood thirsty scoundrels humanity has to offer. They will kill without a second thought.”

To the captain’s surprise none of the men who stood before him seemed deterred in the slightest. Their faces still struck with confidence.

Privateer1- “We knew whom we were dealing with when we decided to be privateers.”

Williams- “Good. Then you will join me. Four more brave souls step forward.”

Immediately, four privateers stepped over to the Commander and group was formed. They set off for the forest that awaited them where they hoped to encounter a pirate crew. They left in a queue with the Commander spearheading the formation. They brought no muskets or other form of heavy artillery, just their swords and hand rifles. The five men following the Commander wondered why this was so but none thought they had the authority to ask.


Back At P2:

Mark- “Are we bad people?” questioned Mark, breaking the absence of any sound apart from the swash and backwash of the waves; sea breeze rushing past the ear; trudging footsteps made in the damp sand and sea birds calling to one another.

Zed- “Well I wouldn’t kill in cold blood.”

Luke- “I don’t attack women or children or the elderly.”

Matthew- “I gave some of my money to a family in need once.”

Zed- “Y’know… come to think of it we are a charitable lot no? We have scruples.”

Mark- “Yeah. I think so too. I mean we are earning an honest living.”

Amy- “You 5 all walk around with guns and swords, indulge in drinking, rob other pirates and are wanted by England. Don’t get ahead of yourselves.”

Zed- “Well when you put it that way…”

Is the spacing in the dialogue too excessive or is it ok? It looked like it was gonna be an eye soar to read at first so I thought spacing would help. What do you guys think?
Finally got around to finishing this chapter up. Not a lot of action here. Mostly plans for the future. Hope you guys and gals enjoy.



Mid-morning, Saint Domingue:

After a split up with Zed and Roger’s crew to facilitate the loss of Dedmond’s crew, the two ships sailed peacefully to a vacant coast on the Northern most part of what is now called Haiti. Zed and Roger were still on the Herron whilst John, Luke and other 5 other crew members sailed aboard the Charm. Of course the former members of the Charm’s crew took no time to adjust to sailing their now reunited ship. They would need that experience to compensate for the lack of men aboard the vessel as they soon realized that it took more than 6 men to bring the ship into port. Meanwhile The Herron had just docked and the crew had made their way to the loose, white sand, complimented by the turquoise liquid that washed its shores.

As the morning grew old and both ships had made port, the combined crew of 15 gathered in oneness as Roger, Zed and John took center stage…or sand rather, and were ready to give out orders.

Roger- “Listen uppah all ye. Thar (there) be two things we need geh’n (getting) befare (before) we make our way to The Lost Cityyah (City).

Zed- “Right. Chartman Luke. The Map if you will.”

Luke- *Holds up map and draws the attention of the audience*

Zed- “We are here.” *Points at Northern portion of Saint Domingue with a stick he found not too long ago.* “Our purpose here is to find an indicator. That which will lead us to where we want to be. The map says if we continue that way *Points stick to the south west* then we’ll see an old cottage…..Ancient library records that I read back in England say that in this cottage lies an indicator of some sort. Downside to our little search and rescue is that our indicator is said to be guarded by creatures of the Sprite kind.”

Crew Members- *Murmur in confusion*

Matthew- “Sprites? You mean those mythical midgets with pointy ears? I hear they bruise babies when no one looks and that’s where birthmarks come from.”

Mark- “I hear they like to cut your hair when you sleep.”

Zed- “Oh only if they were mischievous instead of nefarious. The ones we’ll be dealing with have a high probability of being rabid imps rather than playful nuisances.”

Roger- *interrupts what he deems as unnecessary descriptions* “The ather (other) group will set off to Trinidad close to South America. Shouldn’t take no mare (more) than a week’s sail. The Key is located on a Volcanic Islet named Kick’em Jenny. It hasn’t blown in the last 5 years so getting on the isle, getting the key and sailing away shouldn’t be too much of a hasslah (hassle).”

Ed- “Who goes where? Which one of our groups seeks to ascertain which goal?”

Zed- “Well I hate elves so I pick Jenny.”

Roger- “I have a deal to settle with them midgets. I’ll be staying here.”

Ed- “I will search with Roger. He is the more trustworthy of himself and Zed.”

Zed- “Can’t say I didn’t see that one coming

Ed- “Can’t say your name isn’t synonymous with treachery and unscrupulouslness.”

Zed- “I can say….. I’ll be needing my Charm back since ye and Roger will be partnering up. Need a ship to get to an islet.”

Ed- “Fine. It’s all yours.” *Hands over Captain’s hat*

Zed- *Accepts Hat* “Well that was easier than anticipated.”

Amy- “I honestly thought you’d be happier.”

Zed- “I’m rejoicing with my inside voice.”

Mark- “We still need more members for our crew. Maybe about 10 men would do.”

Zed- “Aye. We can find some if we continue westwards on the coastline. If I’m right there should be seamen singing shanties in no time. That was the case last time I set foot here.”

Ed- “Where do we meet up after we’ve found the indicator and you’ve found the key?”
Roger- “We converge next at Dominicah. From there we take our next plan of action. For now… Get the on yar (your) way and commence our marchin (marching)!

At this the crew split in two with Roger, Ed and everyone else apart from Zed’s first mates and Amy on one party (P1) and Zed, the four first mates and Amy on the other party (P2). Not too long afterwards, party 1 set off into the direction of the indicator characterized by dense foliage and the call of inland animals waking from their slumber. Party 2 went off along the saturated and noisy coast complete with the squalls of all species of seabirds. The Sun illuminated the path of both parties with its endearing glow which signaled the start of what was going to be a long day.

Meanwhile: Reaper’s Bride.

Dedmond- “How many hours till we arrive in the Caribbean?” asked the captain whose voice hinted a disgruntled tone and mood.

Skeleton Gregory- “About 5 captain.” Answered the chief mate.

Dedmond- “Good. We are making headway. This pursuit shouldn’t take too long.” Whispered the captain. “Off the starboard bow!!! Move with the current that the trade winds direct.” Yelled the still angered whirlwind of fury.

At this command the ship’s motion shifted to the north-eastern direction. The vessel of bone and rotten wood caught wind in its tattered sails, its main mast being topped with a now decomposing disembodied cranium. The undead crew attending to their duties aboard The Reaper’s Bride; their captain awaiting his arrival in the Caribbean with great thirst. The morning sun lending its gleam to the sea forward the ship and later driving the darkness away from Dedmond and his crew. The darkness they had become accustomed to. Perhaps for shadowing a change in fate.


Meanwhile aboard The English Providence:

The ship had finally become aground. The occupants made their way to the shore where they planned to track one of the two pirate crews. They were careful not to port in the same area as to avoid being spotted prematurely. Their sailors’ hats cast shadows on the sand that each resembled a small bird with its wings slightly outstretched. Commander Williams however, had the largest hat shadow, signifying his authority.



Williams – “They made port to our west. If the library books I read are true, they’ll be heading inland and in a south westerly direction. We’ll apprehend on foot in the same direction until our paths cross.” *Looks at compass* “Five of our men will come with me to locate the bilge rats. The rest will stay here where you will guard the ship and notify English Sentries of our arrival. Now I will 5 men brave enough to join me on my endeavor step forth? Be ye reminded that we are dealing with some of the most notorious and blood thirsty scoundrels humanity has to offer. They will kill without a second thought.”

To the captain’s surprise none of the men who stood before him seemed deterred in the slightest. Their faces still struck with confidence.

Privateer1- “We knew whom we were dealing with when we decided to be privateers.”

Williams- “Good. Then you will join me. Four more brave souls step forward.”

Immediately, four privateers stepped over to the Commander and group was formed. They set off for the forest that awaited them where they hoped to encounter a pirate crew. They left in a queue with the Commander spearheading the formation. They brought no muskets or other form of heavy artillery, just their swords and hand rifles. The five men following the Commander wondered why this was so but none thought they had the authority to ask.


Back At P2:

Mark- “Are we bad people?” questioned Mark, breaking the absence of any sound apart from the swash and backwash of the waves; sea breeze rushing past the ear; trudging footsteps made in the damp sand and sea birds calling to one another.

Zed- “Well I wouldn’t kill in cold blood.”

Luke- “I don’t attack women or children or the elderly.”

Matthew- “I gave some of my money to a family in need once.”

Zed- “Y’know… come to think of it we are a charitable lot no? We have scruples.”

Mark- “Yeah. I think so too. I mean we are earning an honest living.”

Amy- “You 5 all walk around with guns and swords, indulge in drinking, rob other pirates and are wanted by England. Don’t get ahead of yourselves.”

Zed- “Well when you put it that way…”

Is the spacing in the dialogue too excessive or is it ok? It looked like it was gonna be an eye soar to read at first so I thought spacing would help. What do you guys think?
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Chapter 5 of this book. Took a while to type. I transferred it from Microsoft word to here so there might be some differences in how I' like it to look but here it is. It is also a bit lengthy but you can take a break if you'd like.



The captain’s anger seemed to have further kindled as he was ready to fight for his Charm but he knew it wasn’t a battle to be fought now. Roger, Matthew and John made their way to over to the Charm via wooden plank and soon they all joined Zed aboard it.

Roger- “Calm down Zed. If this be Dedmond’s crew then it surely won’t be easy to take out.” Roger said with a hint of caution, as he approached Zed from behind.
Ed- “I suggest you listen to your one eyed friend Mr. Zed. He already seems to have a bit more wisdom than you.” Uttered the Puerto Rican with the intention of aggravating Zed a bit more.
Zed- “Wait wait wait wait.“ *Looks at Ed and then Roger* “I’d say I have the most wisdom out of all three of us. From the looks of things, you *points at Ed* seem to have been captured by Dedmond. Something I have yet to do. And you *Looks at Roger* seem to have become visually impaired. Also something I have yet to do. I therefore declare me the wisest of we three till I lose an eye or get captured by Dedmond. So ha.”


At this remark, both captains (Roger and Ed are the captains at this moment since they actually own their own ships) drew their swords with similar intentions that put Zed in a less than favorable place.

Roger and Ed- “What was that?”
Zed- “Um…. I coughed… ‘….. Anyway that’s all beside the point. I mean we can all be wise together as long as we all don’t make any rash decisions…. Sword wise.”


Roger and Ed then put their swords away and gave Zed a playful grimace. After this Zed proceeded to ask Ed some questions that would shed some light on why he and the crew (Zed and Roger’s crew) were being followed. The answer was; as Zed put it before; Ed was put on a mission to do so by the Reaper himself. While this was happening, about 5 of Ed’s undead crew members crossed over to The Herron with the intention of finding the map they were sent for. Roger’s crew simply watched in shock as their shipped was being treated as if were the scene of a modern day crime. None of them dared to interrupt or engage Dedmond’s crew, as they knew the Reaper wouldn’t be too happy and would probably want replacements if he lost anyone. Dedmond’s crew also didn’t look like the approachable lot as they walked in an ape-like fashion and had disarming looks on what was left on each of their faces. When they finally found what they came for, they retreated back to The Charm in a successful manner.



John- “Um…. Roger and Zed..”
Both- “What?”
John- “It seems that they just raided or ship for the map.”
Roger- “What?!”
Zed- “Ah. I see. So this conversation you had me and old ‘one eye’ engaged in was just a diversion to steal our map eh? Well it’s gonna take more than that to sneak one pass me it will.” said Zed as if he had seen the whole thing go down and had caught Ed red-handed.
Ed- “You were the one who started the questions in the first place…. And I needed no diversion to take it from you.”
Zed- *huddles up with Roger, John and Matthew in an attempt at a quiet conversation* “He’s right y’know.”
Roger- “I care not! Map belongs to me and I AM going to get it Backaah!” Roger yelled as he turned away from Zed who was trying to have a whispering conversation with him.

Immediately following this Roger drew his sword and yelled at his crew to get over and retrieve the map. The once reluctant crew then did as they were told as if Roger’s words invigorated them like a war cry did its receiving soldiers on the battle field. The peaceful deck of the Charm soon became a grueling battle field as all men, (Along with Amy) undead or alive had at one another with swings and stabs. The clashing of swords and throwing of interjections like ‘AAAAAH!’ were enough to convince anyone within a 50 feet radius that there was a fight going on. In all this Roger was slashing his way to Ed taking out as many of Dedmond’s undying crew as possible. Ed was also crossing blades with Roger’s crew, being careful not to get cut but also landing a couple cuts of his own. Not too long into the fight the two captains found themselves dueling in the center of what has a crowd of sword fighting.

SWORDFIGHT Ed vs Roger:

Ed was the first to take a swing at Roger with his sword in his right arm but Roger, with his sword in the in the right blocks it resulting in an echo of steel clashing on steel. Roger shrugs off the weaker Puerto Ricans blade and retaliates with a stab at the gut to which Ed side-steps. Ed the swings at Roger’s face but the one eyed man is a bit too sharp (no pun intended) and blocks with his blade before delivering the first blow of the fight; using his left arm instead of a sword. The dazed Ed then narrowly blocks the incoming swing at his face and kicks Roger in the shin. The two then circle in a fixed ring as they are enclose in the brawl taking place. They both still slash and block, both determined to take home a limb or two at the end of the fight… meanwhile

Dedmond’s crew lost some limbs but simply took them back up and re-attached them as if nothing happened, then continued fighting what was becoming a losing fight for those without this ability. The man who had the map in-hand at this time lost the arm that held it. When he retrieved it he noticed that something went missing as he noticed Zed scurrying off with what the fight was about. When Zed noticed he had been spotted he simply ducked, then pointed behind the undead man as to alert him that he was about to be stabbed. This got his attention and gave Zed the window he needed to make it to the bow of the ship and fire off a gunshot…..this first heard for all the fight. This caught the attention of all fighters including the captains who hadn’t let up at each other till now. The confident looking captain then lowered the hand with the gun and raised the one with the Map.

Zed- “Listen up all ye uncivil and barbaric scallywags!” He said with shouting and well heard voice. “We needn’t be fighting like brutes over a measly piece of paper. What if I dropped it
overboard or tore it up with me blade? What would we all be fighting for then eh?”

Ed- “To see who could kill you for destroying our hope first.” *points gun at Zed*
Roger- “Aye.” *points gun at Zed*
All others (except Amy who just hoped Zed would get himself almost killed again)-“Aye.” *point guns at Zed*

Zed- “What? Even you Matt?”
Matthew- “I have to get paid somehow.”
Zed- “Yup. Ye be pirates alright…. Anywho seeing as none of you want to loose and all want to gain… hows about I make ye all a proposition? There be a way that we can all be satisfied.”

Ed- “How. Explain now or I’ll shoot you.”
Zed- “Like I haven’t heard that one before.”
Ed- *Shoots at Zed’s foot only to see his bullet miss its target as Zed anticipated a shot and jumped and landed on his feet*

Zed- “Told ya. Heard that one before. Good thing I am good under pressure. Anyway before anyone else takes a shot let me explain. Roger wants riches… from what you said earlier you want freedom from Dedmond Ed… and everyone else except the undead ones want riches as they seek freedom also. If Atlantis can free Dedmond… it can do the same for all you undead ones and Ed. It can also give you Roger and unfaithful crew, riches. Why fight then? I say we work together. Nothing beats the power of teamwork.”

Ed- “Why should I trust you? You attacked me and my crew.”
Zed- “Me? I opted not to do any such thing. Roger did. But forgive my impudent acquaintance as it is in his nature to be a bit rash. Besides….. I’m sure Dedmond would do you far worse if ya failed this quest. What makes him any better than Roger? I say. Backstab him. Help me and live again… or help him and hope he has the heart to let you go free. C’mon…. you’re not afraid are ya?”
Ed- “I fear nothing.”
Zed- “Yet here you are putting your undead life on the line while he relaxes in his cozy seas, ordering you to do his work for him. Join me. C’mon. Do it. You know you to….. mate.”


At this option Ed paused as if he were given new life. He looked at his reflection on his sword, recognizing his flesh started rotting and skin from his forehead start to peel off without even being touched. It was now clear in his mind that what Zed was giving him was better than what Dedmond had in-stored.

Ed- “Fine. I’ll join.”
Undead Crew member 1 (UCM1)- “What? Are you mad?” he said with a voice severely affected by dry throat.
UCM3- “If you double cross Dedmond there’ll surely be Hell to pay.” He said with a mouth in absence of a tongue.
Ed- “It might be too late for you… but not me. I am fresh. I will not rot to bone while doing another being’s bidding till the seas dry up.”

Now Dedmond was seeing all of this because of a special quality he possessed and some assistance from UCM2. Before he sent Ed out on his quest, he planted somewhat of a bug so he’d be able to track what took place aboard his resurrected ship. He too out one of his eyeballs and replaced it with UCM2’s eyeball as a means of vision……


Zed- “Good then. We have a deal. You help us. We help you. Nice and simple.”
UCM2- “HE might be in…..but not us. Dedmond knows about this. He can see all of it through my left eye. He is probably on his way right now. When he finds you. You’ll be joining us for sure.”
Zed- “Then we move swiftly knowing time is of the essence. But you negative Nancies won’t do us any good. Especially not with that eye there. I say we tie em up and throw em overboard.”
Roger- “Far oance (pronounced Oh-wan-ss) I agreeyyah.”

The now unified crew of Roger’s crew and… just Ed did as was suggested by Zed…..






Meanwhile on the Reaper’s Bride:

Dedmond- “That Zed…. He has done it again. Potentially robbed me of finding her….. GAH! Pull me anchor and ready the ship for sailing! We have been called out of our waters and will be sailing in pursuit of a certain thieving, conniving and mutiny inspiring man!”

Meanwhile aboard English Providence (English warship):

Commander Williams- *Puts down telescope that was being used to spy on the pirates from a distance* “They’ve finally stopped squabbling, the pathetic and disorderly things. It will be a pleasure getting rid of them. So immoral. So unfit for a proper life. They cannot contribute to this era in any way that doesn’t directly benefit themselves. Selfish.” The Commander said with a hint of strife in his tone.
Privateer1 (P1)- “Commander……?” said the respectful privateer in a humble manner being careful not to disturb the already angered Commander.
Williams- “State your quarry sir.”
P1- “How long were we sent to watch these pirates? What is our next plan of action? The crew are awaiting command.”
Williams- “They seemed to have made a treaty of some sort….an agreement. If they have truly unified we stand no chance. Our crew of 20 was sent to seek information not to launch a direct attack. We wait to see what else happens betwixt these scoundrels then report to the rest of the fleet stationed on the coast of Guyana. When they get heads on what is to be done….we attack in our numbers. He won’t escape this time. For now, keep the ship steady and hidden. I want no blunders on this endeavor. Do I make myself clear?”

All crew- “Aye Commander.” They said in a united and stern voice.
Commander- “Good. For the homeland. For the crown.”
Chapter 5 of this book. Took a while to type. I transferred it from Microsoft word to here so there might be some differences in how I' like it to look but here it is. It is also a bit lengthy but you can take a break if you'd like.



The captain’s anger seemed to have further kindled as he was ready to fight for his Charm but he knew it wasn’t a battle to be fought now. Roger, Matthew and John made their way to over to the Charm via wooden plank and soon they all joined Zed aboard it.

Roger- “Calm down Zed. If this be Dedmond’s crew then it surely won’t be easy to take out.” Roger said with a hint of caution, as he approached Zed from behind.
Ed- “I suggest you listen to your one eyed friend Mr. Zed. He already seems to have a bit more wisdom than you.” Uttered the Puerto Rican with the intention of aggravating Zed a bit more.
Zed- “Wait wait wait wait.“ *Looks at Ed and then Roger* “I’d say I have the most wisdom out of all three of us. From the looks of things, you *points at Ed* seem to have been captured by Dedmond. Something I have yet to do. And you *Looks at Roger* seem to have become visually impaired. Also something I have yet to do. I therefore declare me the wisest of we three till I lose an eye or get captured by Dedmond. So ha.”


At this remark, both captains (Roger and Ed are the captains at this moment since they actually own their own ships) drew their swords with similar intentions that put Zed in a less than favorable place.

Roger and Ed- “What was that?”
Zed- “Um…. I coughed… ‘….. Anyway that’s all beside the point. I mean we can all be wise together as long as we all don’t make any rash decisions…. Sword wise.”


Roger and Ed then put their swords away and gave Zed a playful grimace. After this Zed proceeded to ask Ed some questions that would shed some light on why he and the crew (Zed and Roger’s crew) were being followed. The answer was; as Zed put it before; Ed was put on a mission to do so by the Reaper himself. While this was happening, about 5 of Ed’s undead crew members crossed over to The Herron with the intention of finding the map they were sent for. Roger’s crew simply watched in shock as their shipped was being treated as if were the scene of a modern day crime. None of them dared to interrupt or engage Dedmond’s crew, as they knew the Reaper wouldn’t be too happy and would probably want replacements if he lost anyone. Dedmond’s crew also didn’t look like the approachable lot as they walked in an ape-like fashion and had disarming looks on what was left on each of their faces. When they finally found what they came for, they retreated back to The Charm in a successful manner.



John- “Um…. Roger and Zed..”
Both- “What?”
John- “It seems that they just raided or ship for the map.”
Roger- “What?!”
Zed- “Ah. I see. So this conversation you had me and old ‘one eye’ engaged in was just a diversion to steal our map eh? Well it’s gonna take more than that to sneak one pass me it will.” said Zed as if he had seen the whole thing go down and had caught Ed red-handed.
Ed- “You were the one who started the questions in the first place…. And I needed no diversion to take it from you.”
Zed- *huddles up with Roger, John and Matthew in an attempt at a quiet conversation* “He’s right y’know.”
Roger- “I care not! Map belongs to me and I AM going to get it Backaah!” Roger yelled as he turned away from Zed who was trying to have a whispering conversation with him.

Immediately following this Roger drew his sword and yelled at his crew to get over and retrieve the map. The once reluctant crew then did as they were told as if Roger’s words invigorated them like a war cry did its receiving soldiers on the battle field. The peaceful deck of the Charm soon became a grueling battle field as all men, (Along with Amy) undead or alive had at one another with swings and stabs. The clashing of swords and throwing of interjections like ‘AAAAAH!’ were enough to convince anyone within a 50 feet radius that there was a fight going on. In all this Roger was slashing his way to Ed taking out as many of Dedmond’s undying crew as possible. Ed was also crossing blades with Roger’s crew, being careful not to get cut but also landing a couple cuts of his own. Not too long into the fight the two captains found themselves dueling in the center of what has a crowd of sword fighting.

SWORDFIGHT Ed vs Roger:

Ed was the first to take a swing at Roger with his sword in his right arm but Roger, with his sword in the in the right blocks it resulting in an echo of steel clashing on steel. Roger shrugs off the weaker Puerto Ricans blade and retaliates with a stab at the gut to which Ed side-steps. Ed the swings at Roger’s face but the one eyed man is a bit too sharp (no pun intended) and blocks with his blade before delivering the first blow of the fight; using his left arm instead of a sword. The dazed Ed then narrowly blocks the incoming swing at his face and kicks Roger in the shin. The two then circle in a fixed ring as they are enclose in the brawl taking place. They both still slash and block, both determined to take home a limb or two at the end of the fight… meanwhile

Dedmond’s crew lost some limbs but simply took them back up and re-attached them as if nothing happened, then continued fighting what was becoming a losing fight for those without this ability. The man who had the map in-hand at this time lost the arm that held it. When he retrieved it he noticed that something went missing as he noticed Zed scurrying off with what the fight was about. When Zed noticed he had been spotted he simply ducked, then pointed behind the undead man as to alert him that he was about to be stabbed. This got his attention and gave Zed the window he needed to make it to the bow of the ship and fire off a gunshot…..this first heard for all the fight. This caught the attention of all fighters including the captains who hadn’t let up at each other till now. The confident looking captain then lowered the hand with the gun and raised the one with the Map.

Zed- “Listen up all ye uncivil and barbaric scallywags!” He said with shouting and well heard voice. “We needn’t be fighting like brutes over a measly piece of paper. What if I dropped it
overboard or tore it up with me blade? What would we all be fighting for then eh?”

Ed- “To see who could kill you for destroying our hope first.” *points gun at Zed*
Roger- “Aye.” *points gun at Zed*
All others (except Amy who just hoped Zed would get himself almost killed again)-“Aye.” *point guns at Zed*

Zed- “What? Even you Matt?”
Matthew- “I have to get paid somehow.”
Zed- “Yup. Ye be pirates alright…. Anywho seeing as none of you want to loose and all want to gain… hows about I make ye all a proposition? There be a way that we can all be satisfied.”

Ed- “How. Explain now or I’ll shoot you.”
Zed- “Like I haven’t heard that one before.”
Ed- *Shoots at Zed’s foot only to see his bullet miss its target as Zed anticipated a shot and jumped and landed on his feet*

Zed- “Told ya. Heard that one before. Good thing I am good under pressure. Anyway before anyone else takes a shot let me explain. Roger wants riches… from what you said earlier you want freedom from Dedmond Ed… and everyone else except the undead ones want riches as they seek freedom also. If Atlantis can free Dedmond… it can do the same for all you undead ones and Ed. It can also give you Roger and unfaithful crew, riches. Why fight then? I say we work together. Nothing beats the power of teamwork.”

Ed- “Why should I trust you? You attacked me and my crew.”
Zed- “Me? I opted not to do any such thing. Roger did. But forgive my impudent acquaintance as it is in his nature to be a bit rash. Besides….. I’m sure Dedmond would do you far worse if ya failed this quest. What makes him any better than Roger? I say. Backstab him. Help me and live again… or help him and hope he has the heart to let you go free. C’mon…. you’re not afraid are ya?”
Ed- “I fear nothing.”
Zed- “Yet here you are putting your undead life on the line while he relaxes in his cozy seas, ordering you to do his work for him. Join me. C’mon. Do it. You know you to….. mate.”


At this option Ed paused as if he were given new life. He looked at his reflection on his sword, recognizing his flesh started rotting and skin from his forehead start to peel off without even being touched. It was now clear in his mind that what Zed was giving him was better than what Dedmond had in-stored.

Ed- “Fine. I’ll join.”
Undead Crew member 1 (UCM1)- “What? Are you mad?” he said with a voice severely affected by dry throat.
UCM3- “If you double cross Dedmond there’ll surely be Hell to pay.” He said with a mouth in absence of a tongue.
Ed- “It might be too late for you… but not me. I am fresh. I will not rot to bone while doing another being’s bidding till the seas dry up.”

Now Dedmond was seeing all of this because of a special quality he possessed and some assistance from UCM2. Before he sent Ed out on his quest, he planted somewhat of a bug so he’d be able to track what took place aboard his resurrected ship. He too out one of his eyeballs and replaced it with UCM2’s eyeball as a means of vision……


Zed- “Good then. We have a deal. You help us. We help you. Nice and simple.”
UCM2- “HE might be in…..but not us. Dedmond knows about this. He can see all of it through my left eye. He is probably on his way right now. When he finds you. You’ll be joining us for sure.”
Zed- “Then we move swiftly knowing time is of the essence. But you negative Nancies won’t do us any good. Especially not with that eye there. I say we tie em up and throw em overboard.”
Roger- “Far oance (pronounced Oh-wan-ss) I agreeyyah.”

The now unified crew of Roger’s crew and… just Ed did as was suggested by Zed…..






Meanwhile on the Reaper’s Bride:

Dedmond- “That Zed…. He has done it again. Potentially robbed me of finding her….. GAH! Pull me anchor and ready the ship for sailing! We have been called out of our waters and will be sailing in pursuit of a certain thieving, conniving and mutiny inspiring man!”

Meanwhile aboard English Providence (English warship):

Commander Williams- *Puts down telescope that was being used to spy on the pirates from a distance* “They’ve finally stopped squabbling, the pathetic and disorderly things. It will be a pleasure getting rid of them. So immoral. So unfit for a proper life. They cannot contribute to this era in any way that doesn’t directly benefit themselves. Selfish.” The Commander said with a hint of strife in his tone.
Privateer1 (P1)- “Commander……?” said the respectful privateer in a humble manner being careful not to disturb the already angered Commander.
Williams- “State your quarry sir.”
P1- “How long were we sent to watch these pirates? What is our next plan of action? The crew are awaiting command.”
Williams- “They seemed to have made a treaty of some sort….an agreement. If they have truly unified we stand no chance. Our crew of 20 was sent to seek information not to launch a direct attack. We wait to see what else happens betwixt these scoundrels then report to the rest of the fleet stationed on the coast of Guyana. When they get heads on what is to be done….we attack in our numbers. He won’t escape this time. For now, keep the ship steady and hidden. I want no blunders on this endeavor. Do I make myself clear?”

All crew- “Aye Commander.” They said in a united and stern voice.
Commander- “Good. For the homeland. For the crown.”
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Ok so this story is really late but I am going to try my best to finish what I started. It has been a while since I posted a chapter on here so pardon me if I am a bit rusty. If this is your first time reading and you want to read the story from start to finish then tell me and I will make something with a link with all the chapters for you. My writing style isn't the normal format used so just a heads up. If you guys want it changed then I'll make some adjustments. Anyway with out any further delay here is chapter 4.


The Red Herron, Roger's Ship. Morning:

The journey for the first of two items needed to find Atlantis was approaching the end of its first leg. The Earth had just rotated the portion where they ship and crew were occupying and the period of civil twilight had just ended. The sky gave the waves a purplish blue hue that added to some tranquility being experienced by the crew. The serene cry of the waves that gracefully carried the ship towards its destination warmed the ears of those who were awake to hear it. Truly one of the wonders only sailors could experience. Those who experienced it were the ship's Capt. Roger; crew members Luke and John; and of course Zed along with his female acquaintance Amy.


Roger: "Mr. Luke how long till we hit Saint Domingueaaaahh (pronounced San Domengaaaah)?"
Luke: *Glances at the map he was given to read and uses a telescope to try and identify land* " We should dock by mid-day Capt."
zed : *Has arms around Amy* " Hey Roger. I think we should call him chart-man instead of Mr. don't you think?"
Roger: *Answers without even looking at Zed* " This be my ship Zedaaahh. I'll call whom I want what I wantah."
zed : "I swear it's like me captain's hat earns me less respect"
Amy: "You want too much respect Zed. Besides it is HIS ship."
Roger: "Also you took that hat from a ship we sank yesterday. Therefore you captain of a wrecked shipaah. I can throw ya ovaboard and you can go swim for the pieces if you'd like."
zed : "I think I'll pass."
John : "So Zed. How exactly will getting to Atlantis take Dedmond off your tail?"
zed : "Good question old chap." *Turns to John and lets go of Amy* "See. There is a way to make Dedmond mortal again. All I have to do is get two jewels from an ancient Atlantian treasure. These jewels are said to have been blessed a great deal and drive away any curse you want. All I have to do is revert Dedmond to his normal form by lifting the curse I 'accidentally' caused to befall him."
Roger: "And my pay Zed. This transport on your little quest isn't free ya knowaaah."
zed : "Roger Roger Roger. You should be a bit more jolly. Atlantis has so much gold it is said to have sunken because the weight was too much for the city to bear."
Luke: "That sounds like a lot of gold" *smiles*
zed : "It is. As far as the telescope can see"
Amy: "Don't you think Dedmond will be after you? After that rummage in England he must have gotten information on what you are up to. Don't you think he'll try to track us?"
zed : "Thought hadn't crossed me mind" *has a look of worry on his face but still an ironic smile*

Just then, the crew members who had just awoken gave a call of alert to the four who had been conversing on and around the stairs leading from the main deck. They gave word of a ship with red sails closing in fast off the stern. The ship had some unusual attachments on its sides. Two flippers, acting as oars for rowing on each side. A slight morning mist covered had the ship engulfed but not completely unclear to identify..... especially not by one of its former captains.

John : "Well I'll be.... Zed.. isn't tha-"
zed : *interrupts with great disbelief* "The Charm"


Zed wondered in aw as the ship he thought had been destroyed was now closing in on them. The members of the crew; those who were members of Zed's crew; were equally amazed as they rubbed their eyes in order to ensure they were not seeing an illusion. As the ship got closer and closer there minds got more and more secure in the fact that they were looking at their former ship.


Matthew: "Well I can't say I am surprised. With all that's been going on I think this considered to be the norm when sailing with Zed and Roger"

Zed gave a smirk and thought to himself that the statement he just heard was indeed true. He then asked for and received the telescope John was using as to identify who was wearing his old captain's hat. He was shocked to see an unfamiliar face. This one with an ovalish face shape complimented by a well groomed beard that didn't look too long. A nose not too point and a chest not too broad. He was attired in a pair of brown pants, a white shirt, brown vest and of course the Captain's Hat. This is what Zed noticed the most of course.

zed : "That little weasel."
Amy: "What? Is he aiming a gun at you?"
John : "Giving you a disrespectful glare?"
Matthew: "Drinking the old rum we stashed off?"
Mark: "Sticking out his tongue?"

Everyone paused at that comment and looked at Mark in a rather condescending manner.

Mark: "Well I'd hate it if someone did that to me :3"
zed : "No. He is wearing my hat. I'll have his head for this."

The ship continued until it was in docking distance of the Red Herron. At this point both vessels dropped anchor and Zed stormed over to his once gone ship in a rather hasty fashion with his sword drawn and gun ready to fire. He was greeted by a crew of about 10 undead men each with a drawn blade and gun in hand. Zed paused at this, put away his sword and gun then said to himself... "Of course. Another one of Dedmond's mind games. Clever old bugger."

??? : "This is no illusion or trick Captain... or former captain I should say." said Dedmond's latest resurrection of a pirate with a Puerto Rican Accent and steadfast tone.
zed : "Who said that?"

The sound of a squeaky door hinge being used was heard clearly as well as footsteps made by pirate boots. The undead crew then made a passage for Captain Ed to walkthrough.


Ed: "I did. Captain Ed."
zed : "Sounds like a bootlegged version of my name. You are short one letter."
Ed: "I don't need it to be a better captain than you....."
zed : "Now wasn't that uncalled for?" *draws sword and gun*




Ok guys so that was chapter 4 part. one. Tell me what you think, liked or didn't like.

Ok so this story is really late but I am going to try my best to finish what I started. It has been a while since I posted a chapter on here so pardon me if I am a bit rusty. If this is your first time reading and you want to read the story from start to finish then tell me and I will make something with a link with all the chapters for you. My writing style isn't the normal format used so just a heads up. If you guys want it changed then I'll make some adjustments. Anyway with out any further delay here is chapter 4.


The Red Herron, Roger's Ship. Morning:

The journey for the first of two items needed to find Atlantis was approaching the end of its first leg. The Earth had just rotated the portion where they ship and crew were occupying and the period of civil twilight had just ended. The sky gave the waves a purplish blue hue that added to some tranquility being experienced by the crew. The serene cry of the waves that gracefully carried the ship towards its destination warmed the ears of those who were awake to hear it. Truly one of the wonders only sailors could experience. Those who experienced it were the ship's Capt. Roger; crew members Luke and John; and of course Zed along with his female acquaintance Amy.


Roger: "Mr. Luke how long till we hit Saint Domingueaaaahh (pronounced San Domengaaaah)?"
Luke: *Glances at the map he was given to read and uses a telescope to try and identify land* " We should dock by mid-day Capt."
zed : *Has arms around Amy* " Hey Roger. I think we should call him chart-man instead of Mr. don't you think?"
Roger: *Answers without even looking at Zed* " This be my ship Zedaaahh. I'll call whom I want what I wantah."
zed : "I swear it's like me captain's hat earns me less respect"
Amy: "You want too much respect Zed. Besides it is HIS ship."
Roger: "Also you took that hat from a ship we sank yesterday. Therefore you captain of a wrecked shipaah. I can throw ya ovaboard and you can go swim for the pieces if you'd like."
zed : "I think I'll pass."
John : "So Zed. How exactly will getting to Atlantis take Dedmond off your tail?"
zed : "Good question old chap." *Turns to John and lets go of Amy* "See. There is a way to make Dedmond mortal again. All I have to do is get two jewels from an ancient Atlantian treasure. These jewels are said to have been blessed a great deal and drive away any curse you want. All I have to do is revert Dedmond to his normal form by lifting the curse I 'accidentally' caused to befall him."
Roger: "And my pay Zed. This transport on your little quest isn't free ya knowaaah."
zed : "Roger Roger Roger. You should be a bit more jolly. Atlantis has so much gold it is said to have sunken because the weight was too much for the city to bear."
Luke: "That sounds like a lot of gold" *smiles*
zed : "It is. As far as the telescope can see"
Amy: "Don't you think Dedmond will be after you? After that rummage in England he must have gotten information on what you are up to. Don't you think he'll try to track us?"
zed : "Thought hadn't crossed me mind" *has a look of worry on his face but still an ironic smile*

Just then, the crew members who had just awoken gave a call of alert to the four who had been conversing on and around the stairs leading from the main deck. They gave word of a ship with red sails closing in fast off the stern. The ship had some unusual attachments on its sides. Two flippers, acting as oars for rowing on each side. A slight morning mist covered had the ship engulfed but not completely unclear to identify..... especially not by one of its former captains.

John : "Well I'll be.... Zed.. isn't tha-"
zed : *interrupts with great disbelief* "The Charm"


Zed wondered in aw as the ship he thought had been destroyed was now closing in on them. The members of the crew; those who were members of Zed's crew; were equally amazed as they rubbed their eyes in order to ensure they were not seeing an illusion. As the ship got closer and closer there minds got more and more secure in the fact that they were looking at their former ship.


Matthew: "Well I can't say I am surprised. With all that's been going on I think this considered to be the norm when sailing with Zed and Roger"

Zed gave a smirk and thought to himself that the statement he just heard was indeed true. He then asked for and received the telescope John was using as to identify who was wearing his old captain's hat. He was shocked to see an unfamiliar face. This one with an ovalish face shape complimented by a well groomed beard that didn't look too long. A nose not too point and a chest not too broad. He was attired in a pair of brown pants, a white shirt, brown vest and of course the Captain's Hat. This is what Zed noticed the most of course.

zed : "That little weasel."
Amy: "What? Is he aiming a gun at you?"
John : "Giving you a disrespectful glare?"
Matthew: "Drinking the old rum we stashed off?"
Mark: "Sticking out his tongue?"

Everyone paused at that comment and looked at Mark in a rather condescending manner.

Mark: "Well I'd hate it if someone did that to me :3"
zed : "No. He is wearing my hat. I'll have his head for this."

The ship continued until it was in docking distance of the Red Herron. At this point both vessels dropped anchor and Zed stormed over to his once gone ship in a rather hasty fashion with his sword drawn and gun ready to fire. He was greeted by a crew of about 10 undead men each with a drawn blade and gun in hand. Zed paused at this, put away his sword and gun then said to himself... "Of course. Another one of Dedmond's mind games. Clever old bugger."

??? : "This is no illusion or trick Captain... or former captain I should say." said Dedmond's latest resurrection of a pirate with a Puerto Rican Accent and steadfast tone.
zed : "Who said that?"

The sound of a squeaky door hinge being used was heard clearly as well as footsteps made by pirate boots. The undead crew then made a passage for Captain Ed to walkthrough.


Ed: "I did. Captain Ed."
zed : "Sounds like a bootlegged version of my name. You are short one letter."
Ed: "I don't need it to be a better captain than you....."
zed : "Now wasn't that uncalled for?" *draws sword and gun*




Ok guys so that was chapter 4 part. one. Tell me what you think, liked or didn't like.

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I'd have to say the number 1 contender for the NXT championship, Finn Balor. I like the unique charisma he brings to the game with his paint and entrance. But looks and chilling intros aside, kids a good wrestler. He looks like he is on his way to becoming a well known name in the next year. The only thing I wouldn't like about him or that I think would hold him back a bit is his finisher. I mean I like jumping from the top ropes and stomping on my opponent as much as the next guy but...... sometimes I just want to see a bit more than that.  
I'd have to say the number 1 contender for the NXT championship, Finn Balor. I like the unique charisma he brings to the game with his paint and entrance. But looks and chilling intros aside, kids a good wrestler. He looks like he is on his way to becoming a well known name in the next year. The only thing I wouldn't like about him or that I think would hold him back a bit is his finisher. I mean I like jumping from the top ropes and stomping on my opponent as much as the next guy but...... sometimes I just want to see a bit more than that.  
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Well Roman in my opinion is and excellent superstar no matter what any fan thinks of him. Do I think he deserved it... well any man who can win the Rumble, deserves to win the Rumble. And c'mon, if he didn't win do you think Rusev would have been anymore deserving of that victory? He hid when the two big guys were K.O.ing everyone and tossing them out of the ring like they were yesterday's lunch. As far as I am concerned Roman was the last person to be eliminated last year and he deserves a second chance this year which he got. And it is always good to see The Rock lay the smackdown on some Authorized candy a-..... arbitrators. As for the other super stars that were eliminated early on well they will get there chance soon enough. Bryan never got pinned to lose his title and Ambrose still has some beef with Rollins. Ziggler is also owed a rematch for the IC Championship. The Road to Wrestlmania seems to not yet have been fully paved but it will all come down to that Sunday night in April. Can't wait. 
Well Roman in my opinion is and excellent superstar no matter what any fan thinks of him. Do I think he deserved it... well any man who can win the Rumble, deserves to win the Rumble. And c'mon, if he didn't win do you think Rusev would have been anymore deserving of that victory? He hid when the two big guys were K.O.ing everyone and tossing them out of the ring like they were yesterday's lunch. As far as I am concerned Roman was the last person to be eliminated last year and he deserves a second chance this year which he got. And it is always good to see The Rock lay the smackdown on some Authorized candy a-..... arbitrators. As for the other super stars that were eliminated early on well they will get there chance soon enough. Bryan never got pinned to lose his title and Ambrose still has some beef with Rollins. Ziggler is also owed a rematch for the IC Championship. The Road to Wrestlmania seems to not yet have been fully paved but it will all come down to that Sunday night in April. Can't wait. 
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Well the WWE can be split into two categories as far as I see it. The Authority and the WWE Universe. The Authority right now would be pushing Seth Rollins since he orchestrated their return and Brock can only be pushed by Heyman. As for the Universe well they have lots of options. Their is Daniel Bryan who just came off his injury and seems to rally the fans really well or they can choose Cena who claims he fights for them. Overall... Rollins will have to cash the Money In The Bank Contract sooner or later and Cena right now is the one who has the match with Lesnar at Royal Rumble. So if everything goes as planned Rollins and Cena are my pick at least for the first half of the year till we get tired of them and some new or old *coughs* Randy Orton *end cough* faces arrive or return. 
Well the WWE can be split into two categories as far as I see it. The Authority and the WWE Universe. The Authority right now would be pushing Seth Rollins since he orchestrated their return and Brock can only be pushed by Heyman. As for the Universe well they have lots of options. Their is Daniel Bryan who just came off his injury and seems to rally the fans really well or they can choose Cena who claims he fights for them. Overall... Rollins will have to cash the Money In The Bank Contract sooner or later and Cena right now is the one who has the match with Lesnar at Royal Rumble. So if everything goes as planned Rollins and Cena are my pick at least for the first half of the year till we get tired of them and some new or old *coughs* Randy Orton *end cough* faces arrive or return. 
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Dragonlord Stephi : I like the escape. Reminds me of the good and old days. And boy did Niddo almost broke his neck to get to Elie... almost. Jut his head. I feel sorry for Hans. Poor guy. And it looks like Freyja is planning a revolution. I wonder if Sable's army will be enough to match her siser's cunnin and strategy. Can't wait to see.
Dragonlord Stephi : I like the escape. Reminds me of the good and old days. And boy did Niddo almost broke his neck to get to Elie... almost. Jut his head. I feel sorry for Hans. Poor guy. And it looks like Freyja is planning a revolution. I wonder if Sable's army will be enough to match her siser's cunnin and strategy. Can't wait to see.
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Davideo7 : I could be a game tester. That one seems simple enough. Only problem would be my lack of a computer but my mom's laptop might work. I'll reply again if I get confirmation that I can do this.
Davideo7 : I could be a game tester. That one seems simple enough. Only problem would be my lack of a computer but my mom's laptop might work. I'll reply again if I get confirmation that I can do this.
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Good work with this one. I can feel the plot twist starting. And I smell a hint of deception in Elie's future. This makes for a good risingaction which itself makes for a good Climax. Can't wait for that to come. Seems interesting.
Good work with this one. I can feel the plot twist starting. And I smell a hint of deception in Elie's future. This makes for a good risingaction which itself makes for a good Climax. Can't wait for that to come. Seems interesting.
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Mark Callaway or better knownas The Undertaker has accomplished lots in his illustrious career . One of these is having the coveted Wrestlemania Streak where he has won 21 matches and lost none. Starting with Hall of Famer " Superfly " Jimmy Snuka and most recently beating CM Punk at last year's Wrestlemania 29. Tonight on February 24, 2014 he shocked the WWE universe by returning to face Brock Lesnar at this year's Wrestlemania 30. Brock originally requested a match for the WWE World Heavyweight Championship but realized that a chance to break the legendary streak was just as good. Now what thoughts do you get about this. Can the streak continue or will it come to a halt ? Will The Deadman pull of another aw inspiring Wrestlemania victory or will Brock beat the most symbolic streak in Wrestling History?
Mark Callaway or better knownas The Undertaker has accomplished lots in his illustrious career . One of these is having the coveted Wrestlemania Streak where he has won 21 matches and lost none. Starting with Hall of Famer " Superfly " Jimmy Snuka and most recently beating CM Punk at last year's Wrestlemania 29. Tonight on February 24, 2014 he shocked the WWE universe by returning to face Brock Lesnar at this year's Wrestlemania 30. Brock originally requested a match for the WWE World Heavyweight Championship but realized that a chance to break the legendary streak was just as good. Now what thoughts do you get about this. Can the streak continue or will it come to a halt ? Will The Deadman pull of another aw inspiring Wrestlemania victory or will Brock beat the most symbolic streak in Wrestling History?
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Boxia : It'll last as long as someone doesn't summon the law.
Boxia : It'll last as long as someone doesn't summon the law.
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Surgiac : Well for some its a skill , Others its talent to tell or rap whatever the bill might be . Some got words strong and mighty like a flow of fluency from the brain to the mouth , is what its about , a shout , tout or screamin out loud so the world hears and adhears to the sublime message of experienced rhyming ...... and others just have that perfect timing. It gets exciting like a game of cards , so daily rhyming ain't that hard sweetheart .
Surgiac : Well for some its a skill , Others its talent to tell or rap whatever the bill might be . Some got words strong and mighty like a flow of fluency from the brain to the mouth , is what its about , a shout , tout or screamin out loud so the world hears and adhears to the sublime message of experienced rhyming ...... and others just have that perfect timing. It gets exciting like a game of cards , so daily rhyming ain't that hard sweetheart .
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Well the scary thing about it is that it is growing by the tear. Polar Ice Caps Melting and what not causing the water level to riase each year. Soon it'll be 80% Water and 20% land if we don't do something to stop it. 
Well the scary thing about it is that it is growing by the tear. Polar Ice Caps Melting and what not causing the water level to riase each year. Soon it'll be 80% Water and 20% land if we don't do something to stop it. 
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I would say a Hurricane because they come often in the tropics and that Last Hurricane we had wrecked a lot of our country. My house survived thankfully but I might not be as lucky next time.
I would say a Hurricane because they come often in the tropics and that Last Hurricane we had wrecked a lot of our country. My house survived thankfully but I might not be as lucky next time.
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Well with the advancing technology I would be surprised if we did. We did it on th Moon some years ago so i think by that time they will set foot on Mars ... maybe even That Moon on Jupiter that has water on it.
Well with the advancing technology I would be surprised if we did. We did it on th Moon some years ago so i think by that time they will set foot on Mars ... maybe even That Moon on Jupiter that has water on it.
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I am in no clun or on any team at my school. Just a kid who goes, learns, leaves. My dad wants me to get one but I thikn not. What do you guys and girls do ? 
I am in no clun or on any team at my school. Just a kid who goes, learns, leaves. My dad wants me to get one but I thikn not. What do you guys and girls do ? 
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I prefer nature to space because nature just fascinates me more. Space is a wander and it does interest me but nature is easier to access than Space.  Just run outside and run wild but with Space you'd have to do the Spaceship thing or go to astronomy and I don't like just looking with the contact. 
I prefer nature to space because nature just fascinates me more. Space is a wander and it does interest me but nature is easier to access than Space.  Just run outside and run wild but with Space you'd have to do the Spaceship thing or go to astronomy and I don't like just looking with the contact. 
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Barathemos : Oh I have been waiting for this one. Barazed.   Huh? Huh? What do you think Bara?
Barathemos : Oh I have been waiting for this one. Barazed.   Huh? Huh? What do you think Bara?
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