VWORST GAME EVER. This is a redone review.

graphics
1/10
where do I start.... the main colors are blue and puke green, black and white, and orange and white (or at least from what I see from the screen shots... I am still on level one...).

Sound
1/10
all I can say is.... don't play with earphones.... and if you do.... turn down your sound.... please.... its that bad

Addictiveness
10/10
if your like me and your a gamer who wants to prove him/herself then you will keep coming back so you can gosh darn beat level one.

depth
1/10
honestly I have no clue about the depth.... I can beat level one.... but I don't think I game that is SO HARD will have that many worlds.

difficulty
10/10
the big one.... lets talk controls. The controls won't respond for a couple seconds so if there is a enemy you NEED to jump one because it is right there.... your doomed. Now jumping. Your jump is like a upside down V so you can go far and running and then jumping makes you go no farther. Now platforms. Half the time you can't walk on them you just fall though.... last but not least damage when you are hit you just lose all your rings with no hope of getting them back and the spikes.... there is no safe time when you are hurt so.... if you fall into spikes you just keep bouncing until you hit land or die.

as you see that is why my over all rating is 0.1

That's an interesting description. The game sucks really bad, but you can't stop playing it because you want to beat it. I feel the same way about Ghosts 'n Goblins, except that game doesn't suck.

I guess you must really like ellipses, too. There's so many of them. It would improve the review if you could use them less often. For a first review, it's decent enough, and you'll improve with practice.

A major tip that I would give would be to split the review into separated categories. Like this:

Graphics: 2

They hurt my eyes!

Sound: 1

It hurts my ears!

Something like that. Just put a little bit more detail into it than I did, lol

This was a decent review considering The type of game. However you could still have put a few more details. What makes The music so terrible? How does it compare to other hacks if you tried them? Or even The original game?

you correct! this game is so bad! horrible controls, horrible graphics, horrible music and horrible gameplay! im gonna like this review

You've done a decent job of reviewing the game, however, you could a little more detail in your assessment of each category. Give some examples of the graphics and sound being bad, in other words, why did they receive a score of 1 as opposed to something higher? You did do a better job of covering the difficulty aspect of the game in a bit more detail, I think you could improve your review by including that level of detail in every category of the game.