911 Paramedics is one of the most realistic games for the Windows computer. Now this is gonna be one heck of a Review and something I've been playing since age 12. I don't remember much of the game, i will try to do my best with this review. 
Graphics: 10.   911 Paramedic is a game that interacts with real life situations. Now since a lot of gamers are used to charters that look unreal and  fictional story lines, Legacy Interactive wanted to have a game that would inspire someone to work like a Doctor or a paramedic. Aside from a lot of blood and gross stuff, the graphics are very nice. So i am Giving the graphics a 10.
Sound: 9. A lot of cut scenes and conversations in this game are very amusing. Sometimes the paramedics would have conversations with their Patients or other paramedics. I find the music sad. Like i said before in graphics, a lot of us are used to unreal charters. A lot of the music in video games ether had bad words (example: Answer from mega man X6 if you translate it,) are annoying, or get stuck in your head. I don't remember any of 911 paramedics songs but if i remember correctly, the songs can tell sad stories. ;-;
Addicitvness: 6. Now prepare to laugh at me, I have a fear of medics (and other stuff but I'm not jumping off topic.) so my fear sometimes kick in when i see Doctors, medics, or anything else along those lines...unless i trust the person when i don't know they are a doctor. But with that to say, i might play this game once in a while. So i am giving that a 6.
Story: 4. The story isn't very good. I don't know the THAT well but all i know is that you are a paramedic helping a city in some state (i forgot the city and state name. :p silly me.) you must help people who can't get to a hospital quickly or who doesn't need to go to the hospital. You help people who are in a bad situation. You and your Team must help the people....and that's all i can remember now. 
Depth: 5. The game was a piece of cake, not including the times it lagged on my windows XP, It was very simple and very heart pounding. It was scarier then the modern 'horror' games and i freaked out a lot on the game! There is a weird 'glitch' where if you complete the game, it takes you out to your home screen. But still it is tough to beat. 
Difficulty: 5. The controls aren't very hard. The only thing you need (and it comes with every computer) is a mouse. And also like i said with depth, after you beat a certain amount of levels, it will take you back to your home screen on your computer. 
Overall: 9.9. The game is well done, it takes place in a real city and its really fun. The game (i have) has 2 CDS, its from the creators of the best-selling Emergency room Series, Legacy Interactive, and it very funny. if I missed something, please let me know and I'll look at it and change it. 

RMJEtheReploid : Ok I can see you're progressing. And writing much more! I like you're picking a game you already have fond memories of, and use those. 
There are some typos, and I think a line space between your paragraphs would help - especially at Depth and Difficulty so they don't kind of run into each other.

Just watch where you place some off-topic points. Where you mention the cut-scenes in sound, but its three sentences before you get to the music.  I think you just forgot to put them in the graphics notation.