Enjoy the Johto and Kanto region's new look with Pokemon's most iconic figure, pikachu.

   The most apparent difference between this game and the original Crystal game is the map structure. The regions have a very new and fresh look but have a very difficult and confusing traversing path. You will also start the game by choosing pikachu as your starter pokemon, as does your rival, almost giving more of a competitive vibe. With the change in maps, the routes and caves have a new variety of pokemon to catch and use along your journey. 

   The level curve has also been significantly been increased than that of the original Crystal, especially in Kanto, adding difficulty to the journey and giving more of a challenge to dedicated players. Even some typing of the pokemon have been changed, such as Charizard and Gyarados. Pikachu can even use Surf! Some pokemon have different evolution requirements too, including pikachu.

   This game can be very enjoyable for fans who have delved into the Johto journey previously, but the most glaring flaw of the game is the map structure and layout. The region is very difficult, confusing, and almost impossible to remember. I rarely knew where to go and how to get there and sometimes was stuck. The idea of using a pikachu can be fun, but with poor level layout, it is not the best trade to be had.

   I recommend this game to those who are seeking a challenge and also have a love for pikachu. However, if you are someone who greatly enjoys the Johto and Kanto region for what they were and do not wish to train very tediously, you should not play this.

Pretty good review man, for a newbie I have to admit that this is pretty well put together and you really made this review nice and detailed, I also like that you spaced out your review and broke it down into categories like this because it just looks more professional and clear/ easy to read when it is broken down and categorized rather than just one huge paragraph. 

Overall, nice job, keep up the good work and keep making reviews because I think you have great potential, and with every review you make, your skills as a reviewer only sharpen! So keep at it man!

Hmm... this would not be the poorest written review I have seen today. It could stand to see some improvement.

Your overall structure is neat, you keep your discussion well-ordered and provide relevant information about gameplay changes.

You may want to watch how you arrange sentences to avoid further mishaps like unnecessary punctuation as we are seeing above.

I do like your take on this game. I feel inspired to play it now. Thank you for submitting this feedback about the game.

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