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Poke Story Ch. 2 : No Tactic
Another Chapter of my poke story in which I meet my first gym leader
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12-28-13 02:37 PM
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As I walked in route 1 I realized something I do not even know where I am going well lets see I started in Panta Town moving West so I should be . Dang! Left my map at home well wandering aimlessly is fun too? thought laughing. Ok so lets go As I walked I realized that I hadn't let my Pok?mon out of their poke balls as I did I was startled by a water gun to the face and a razor leaf to the knee. Ahh! I screamed as I tried to calm the two down. Then tododile looked at turtwig and started talking oddly enough both of them climbed on my shoulders. Well I may not be able to see because the water gun gave me a black eye and my hats over my other eye I just walked suddenly bumping into a girl on the edge of her wit trying to catch a elakid watch out you ediot she screamed and shoved me and I landed on tododile? foot. Toda he screamed! Then I got back up and asked her what she was doing here she snickered back at me well what are you doing here. trying to get to the gym I responded well I'm trying to become a Pok?mon breeder and I need some Pok?mon to start. Want some help I asked. Why are you gonna help me because you seem friendly I responded. Well the reason I can't catch Pok?mon is I don't have one they ran out in my town. Then she started to cry so Turtwig tried to comfort her. Suddenly I responded with turtwig likes you, you?can have him . Really she said drying her tears. Yes really and here's his poke ball. Ohh thank you thank you thank you she screamed. So what's your name I asked? I'm NintendoFanKimmy you can call me Kimmy. Ok bye Kimmy I said. No wait she responded can I come with you. You wanna go with me I said looking around. Yes you ,?you gave me a Pok?mon I am ever grateful. No you don't have to be. Its ok I want to be. Ok lets go I said. Soon we arrived at Tigra wow the first gym city she said. As we approached the gym I asked her the type and she responded with I don't know what type it is. As We walked in I told her she should go try to get more Pok?mon and I'll face the gym. Ok she agreed and frolicked away and responded come get me when your done as I walked into the floor of the gym I realized It was? 2 different colors one side red one side blue as I was thinking A voice boomed chose the blue one. No I said as I walked down the red one. Then there were three paths red blue and orange don't pick the blue one it said. Well too bad I responded and walked down the blue path. Then I was at the gym leaders feet. He looked about 3 years older then me 13 and had jet black hair and seemed very strong and tough I then said to him lets battle within seconds he announced it was a double battle and he through out an onix and a butterfree. Ohh no I thought well I said I only have one Pok?mon so 2 v 1 is fine. Suddenly we were in s battle I quickly told tododile to use water gun on the butterfree and it fell out of the air and tumbled to the ground, but then one second later onix used body slam and crushed tododile I broke into tears but somehow I saw a glow?under onix and suddenly a croconaw flipped over onix and used water gun. Then the onix fainted only to regain consciousness and use rock throw trapping croconaw no croconaw use bite suddenly he jumped over the rocks and bit onix but onix hit him with its tail croconaw on the edge of fainting squealed , but I said hang in there suddenly he nearly fell over but heard my words and got right back up. Now use rage buddy within seconds croconaw got so fired up that he hit onix so hard he slammed into the front door even though the battle was in the back and fainted. Yes we won I screamed you did very good said the gym leader my names Denz may I join you on your journey my family can watch the gym . Why do you wanna join my I asked. He responded with because I want to see you excel and I want to learn more I still no very little compared to some other gym leaders he said and grabbed his backpack. Lets go I want to fight the league again to learn?a lot more suddenly we were both outside of the gym with Kimmy talking about where we were going next Kimmy responded to the next town west I have to say goodbye to my family.


As I walked in route 1 I realized something I do not even know where I am going well lets see I started in Panta Town moving West so I should be . Dang! Left my map at home well wandering aimlessly is fun too? thought laughing. Ok so lets go As I walked I realized that I hadn't let my Pok?mon out of their poke balls as I did I was startled by a water gun to the face and a razor leaf to the knee. Ahh! I screamed as I tried to calm the two down. Then tododile looked at turtwig and started talking oddly enough both of them climbed on my shoulders. Well I may not be able to see because the water gun gave me a black eye and my hats over my other eye I just walked suddenly bumping into a girl on the edge of her wit trying to catch a elakid watch out you ediot she screamed and shoved me and I landed on tododile? foot. Toda he screamed! Then I got back up and asked her what she was doing here she snickered back at me well what are you doing here. trying to get to the gym I responded well I'm trying to become a Pok?mon breeder and I need some Pok?mon to start. Want some help I asked. Why are you gonna help me because you seem friendly I responded. Well the reason I can't catch Pok?mon is I don't have one they ran out in my town. Then she started to cry so Turtwig tried to comfort her. Suddenly I responded with turtwig likes you, you?can have him . Really she said drying her tears. Yes really and here's his poke ball. Ohh thank you thank you thank you she screamed. So what's your name I asked? I'm NintendoFanKimmy you can call me Kimmy. Ok bye Kimmy I said. No wait she responded can I come with you. You wanna go with me I said looking around. Yes you ,?you gave me a Pok?mon I am ever grateful. No you don't have to be. Its ok I want to be. Ok lets go I said. Soon we arrived at Tigra wow the first gym city she said. As we approached the gym I asked her the type and she responded with I don't know what type it is. As We walked in I told her she should go try to get more Pok?mon and I'll face the gym. Ok she agreed and frolicked away and responded come get me when your done as I walked into the floor of the gym I realized It was? 2 different colors one side red one side blue as I was thinking A voice boomed chose the blue one. No I said as I walked down the red one. Then there were three paths red blue and orange don't pick the blue one it said. Well too bad I responded and walked down the blue path. Then I was at the gym leaders feet. He looked about 3 years older then me 13 and had jet black hair and seemed very strong and tough I then said to him lets battle within seconds he announced it was a double battle and he through out an onix and a butterfree. Ohh no I thought well I said I only have one Pok?mon so 2 v 1 is fine. Suddenly we were in s battle I quickly told tododile to use water gun on the butterfree and it fell out of the air and tumbled to the ground, but then one second later onix used body slam and crushed tododile I broke into tears but somehow I saw a glow?under onix and suddenly a croconaw flipped over onix and used water gun. Then the onix fainted only to regain consciousness and use rock throw trapping croconaw no croconaw use bite suddenly he jumped over the rocks and bit onix but onix hit him with its tail croconaw on the edge of fainting squealed , but I said hang in there suddenly he nearly fell over but heard my words and got right back up. Now use rage buddy within seconds croconaw got so fired up that he hit onix so hard he slammed into the front door even though the battle was in the back and fainted. Yes we won I screamed you did very good said the gym leader my names Denz may I join you on your journey my family can watch the gym . Why do you wanna join my I asked. He responded with because I want to see you excel and I want to learn more I still no very little compared to some other gym leaders he said and grabbed his backpack. Lets go I want to fight the league again to learn?a lot more suddenly we were both outside of the gym with Kimmy talking about where we were going next Kimmy responded to the next town west I have to say goodbye to my family.

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(edited by matapult on 12-28-13 02:41 PM)     Post Rating: 1   Liked By: NintendoFanDrew,

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matapult : This story is rolling out nicely, it really has potential. Keep it up, matapult ^^!
matapult : This story is rolling out nicely, it really has potential. Keep it up, matapult ^^!
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   The plot is extremely chronological and intriguing. I have also noticed that I have finally appeared within your short story along with the user of Vizzed of NintendoFanKimmy. Anyways, I appreciate you accepting my request to be a part of your short story. In addition, keep up the great work, matapult! This idea is certainly leading up to something astounding.
   The plot is extremely chronological and intriguing. I have also noticed that I have finally appeared within your short story along with the user of Vizzed of NintendoFanKimmy. Anyways, I appreciate you accepting my request to be a part of your short story. In addition, keep up the great work, matapult! This idea is certainly leading up to something astounding.
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