So Earthbound is a very different game for its time, just about any RPG game out there at the moment had something to do with the medieval times, and had something to do with a damsel in distress. This game changed that. It brings you on a very interesting story, and gives you interesting and wacky weapons in current times! It gives you plenty of room to explore and expand upon your imagination, it doesn't include any visual representation of your character attacking, but it doesn't need to keep up how addicting the game is, there's just some charm about it that gives you that urge to play on as much as you can. I've played a lot of RPG games, and I really enjoy them, the story is easily something that could be brought into a sequel, and all the characters are very interesting! Time traveling, magic powers, baseball bats and smashing galore and you have a real fun experience! This game kind of reinvented the RPG genre by giving it a breath of fresh air, and it may be a little bit difficult to understand the controls when you first begin, but eventually it becomes second nature. The world is something to explore for loot and items, like searching trash cans for hamburgers or etc. I really can't stress enough how much of a good game it is! Being able to customize what your first Psy move is by entering your favorite thing as 'PK----" and then something after it, is a really nice touch! I love customization in RPG games and I really think its something that should be expanded upon in most others, be sure to give this game a look over, its really worth it!

Okay, you are off to a good start here, you at least met the minimum word requirement and talked about the game more extensively than some users would. I will suggest a few things though in order to further improve this review. First and foremost, be sure to break down your review into categories and make sure that it is organized and easy to read. Organization is a very important factor in a good review, and it also helps to make it look professional, so make sure yours is neat and easy to read as well. 

Secondly, you should try to make sure that your review is supportive of how you feel about the game, if you think some areas could use improvement, let your review reflect that, if it was a bad game in your opinion, then be sure to list what made it bad and let your scores reflect that. 

Lastly, be sure to make sure you give an in depth analysis and description for each part of the game, like graphics, sound, etc. Some users barely add stuff for some of them, so make sure it is detailed.

That is all of the main advice I can give you my friend. All that is left is for you to apply this to every review you make. Be sure to  review frequently because that is the only way you are going to get better at it. Just through practice. I hope that this helps your reviews in the future. keep up the great work man! Merry Christmas!