Hey everybody it's sonicman120 again with his 4th review so let's get started! This is a game I own for Super Nintendo Entertainment System.  Believe it or not I have a lot of classic systems. Story One: Same as always, saving a princess named Toadstool(Peach)from King Koopa(Bowser). Graphics Seven: Pretty good Iv'e seen better like in Scooby-Doo for this system. But overall there good. Sound Seven: In my top three list of Mario for this system best Iv'e heard yet. If you played this game you should know about all the happy fast music and regular star etc.
Depth: For any body who has never played this be ready to use save state this game is really long. It has about ninety-eight levels in it. 
Difficulty Eight: If you ask me if this game is hard my answer will always be yes.
Addictiveness Ten: Even though this game is challenging I play it all the time. Yes it's very adictive so it's one of the best game.
My overall is a 9.1. It's a good game because it has all the right things a good game needs. So for all you people who haven't played this game I recomend doing so.

Getting better and better each time my man! All you need is a little more detail and it needs to be spaced out a little better. I am not a very big Super Nintendo fan as some of you may know but I do play this game every now and then.

Not bad at all, you are indeed getting better at reviewing. Just remember that practice makes perfect. Just keep adding a little more detail to each review and you will get in the hang of it. Elaborate on your points, add more information and really go into detail with explaining things and proving your points. Do that and you won't have a problem with word count! I think that you have what it takes, just keep trying hard and you will become a great reviewer in no time. Keep up the hard work and I know you can do it if you try. Remember that practice makes perfect! Keep it up and keep on reviewing. I look forward to seeing your next review!

Not bad. It's a bit bland, though. Something that would help is you elaborating on why you rated each category the way you did, and then talk about it in detail for awhile.