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06-02-13 05:39 PM

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Hello and welcome to this review! I will be reviewing THEME PARK.

Graphics - 7
This games graphics are pretty good. It is not as good as Sonic the Hedgehog, but it's still pretty good.

Sound - 7
On my Mega Drive my sound is a little bit out of tune but I can cope with it. The one song that I hate is the start up park/octopus song. Otherwise, the games sound is awesome!

Addictiveness - 9
On my holiday to the theme parks in Queensland, I built a theme park on my pad of paper. When I came home I went rummaging through my big bag of Mega Drive games I came across this game. I tried it out. It was awesome! This is a game that I'll always play again!

Story - 1
The Sega CD version starts off with a cut-scene which is supposedly the story. Otherwise it doesn't have a story at all. You start off with a $50000 or a $100000 loan.

Depth - 9
This has so much stuff to offer you. It has an arcade, coconut shy, fries shop, Toy sop and so much more it will fill your entire screen! But you can't put the same ride in your park twice.

Difficulty - 6
This game is not that hard (I've survived long enough to make $2 million) but it starts to get harder against 19 other parks facing off to get top places in 6 categories.

Overall - 9
This is a game that I'll always treasure. I will never give it away and it'll be kept safe with me

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BeBop3000 : Not a bad review. It is very organized and you described almost every detail, but you need to type more and go more in depth though. Keep up the good work!

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I enjoyed playing this game back when they would put it out on "The Sega Channel" I would play it all the time. Although it's not a GREAT game by any means, it is a fun little time waster.

Decent job on the review. Keep making them detailed and you will get better.

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Jordanv78: I done the exact same!

This was a very well structured review, I like how you used structured it using the template above, it makes the review a lot more readable and clear. I felt that this review was quite well written in that you included valid points from the game and inserted them into our review. Your ratings are very accurate and are very close to the average ratings, which is good.

You seem to have focused on addictiveness a lot more than the other sections, I love the way you referred to a place in your review, it's always nice to share a personal experience, and it really draws the reader into your review. It's amazing how you were searching through your games and found this game. I felt all of your points in this particular section were explains and well justified, well done!

However, having said that, I feel you could have added a lot more detail into your graphics section, or at least develop the current points you have made. You states that the graphics were pretty good and didn't develop on that, what about the graphics did you find good? Was it the use of colouring used on the characters? - contrast, saturation, brightness etc.

I also think a rating of one for story is pretty harsh considering you didn't give many points and evidence backing up your rating. You should always support your points with evidence, it's crucial in producing a great review.

Overall, I think this is an adequate review and is worthy of credit, and I shall give credit, where credit is due. Well done.

Here is some tips and some help, it will help you in the future when posting reviews. Good Luck! (See below)

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Also, this thread will also help you with writing even better reviews than the standard you are currently writing at:
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Jordanv78: I done the exact same!

This was a very well structured review, I like how you used structured it using the template above, it makes the review a lot more readable and clear. I felt that this review was quite well written in that you included valid points from the game and inserted them into our review. Your ratings are very accurate and are very close to the average ratings, which is good.

You seem to have focused on addictiveness a lot more than the other sections, I love the way you referred to a place in your review, it's always nice to share a personal experience, and it really draws the reader into your review. It's amazing how you were searching through your games and found this game. I felt all of your points in this particular section were explains and well justified, well done!

However, having said that, I feel you could have added a lot more detail into your graphics section, or at least develop the current points you have made. You states that the graphics were pretty good and didn't develop on that, what about the graphics did you find good? Was it the use of colouring used on the characters? - contrast, saturation, brightness etc.

I also think a rating of one for story is pretty harsh considering you didn't give many points and evidence backing up your rating. You should always support your points with evidence, it's crucial in producing a great review.

Overall, I think this is an adequate review and is worthy of credit, and I shall give credit, where credit is due. Well done.

Here is some tips and some help, it will help you in the future when posting reviews. Good Luck! (See below)

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Always use P.E.E. Point. Evidence. Explain. In reviews. Give a valid point concerning the game, back this point up with evidence from the game itself and then explain your point fully, this is how you achieve great review ratings!

Also, this thread will also help you with writing even better reviews than the standard you are currently writing at:
https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382

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