Good review! The detail was crisp, the grammar was excellent (I'm a grammar hawk), and the read itself was interesting, as your writing style is palatable. You were informed about the game, and your opinions reflected that. I do have one slight issue, though it's a small one. You used the words "in conclusion" to start your final paragraph, and as a former English major and a grammar freak, I cannot be happy with the addition of those silly words. When you're writing a paper or doing a speech (which I've heard a lot of "in conclusions" in my speech class this semester), the tone and content of your writing, coupled with a transitional sentence and the restatement of your thesis (sometimes both work together) are meant to show that you are concluding the paper, not "in conclusion." Sometimes it's okay to introduce your conclusion in some form, but saying "in conclusion" or "to conclude" questions the reader's intelligence, even if that's not your intention. The only thing I can even think of in which it's okay to mention the word "conclude" when you are concluding something is when you are in court, presenting a final piece of evidence or linking different pieces of evidence together, saying, "I conclude" or "We come to the conclusion..." Other than that, avoid that evil word!

pray75 : I really appreciate your feedback and contructive criticism. What about if I used a phrase like "all in all" or something like that?

Sephirothxxxxxxxxxxx : I actually like "all in all" in some scenarios, and I don't think it would be a problem for a game review. I think it would really give you trouble if you were writing a formal paper, but you're not doing that, are you? Don't dwell on my rant for too long, though, because the review was pretty much flawless other than that!

pray75 : Well I'm glad we could come to an agreement on that matter Thanks again for the nice feedback.

Sephirothxxxxxxxxxxx : And I quote : " This is one of those games that doesn't need a story. "
If there is no story I don't really see the point in playing, however I'm pretty sure the story is the exact same as Donkey Kong Country so there is technically a story... just a carbon copy of the last xD.

Good review anyway, your layout makes it seem long but actually the paragraphs are quite short.
This is a drawback from your review getting a chance at featured.

If you ever go back to edit the review make sure to add a lot more detail to the categories like sound as they seem lack luster at best.

iN008 : Recently I have been making returns to my older reviews and touching them up. I will come back to this one, but I really just need to think of more to add besides throwing in some extra words to only make the post longer. Don't worry, you will get your detailed paragraphs. Thanks for your feedback, as always.

EDIT: Actually, an idea popped into my head just moments before editing this post. I went back and made note that the story is the same as Country's as well as explaining as to why the game doesn't need a story. Hopefully it looks better now.