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A short poem by JLH
Dedicated to someone special
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A short poem by JLH

 

11-19-12 11:25 AM
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I wrote this because you haven't returned my call.
Maybe you will see this while I stare at your picture on the chat wall.

I just wanted to let you know I have been thinking a lot about you and what this world is all about.

I wish I could open my heart and let you see what I feel.
You are the one I want and that is the real deal.

Would you believe me and love me in this world gone black?
I just wanted to know if you would have me back?

Would you have me back if you knew I made it?
would you have me back if I never break it?
would you have me back if I never faked it?

If I never see you again, I will always remember you.
The times we had and the way I kept my feelings true.

I hope you will remember that someone loves you.
I will always know my love for you is true.

If you were ever thinking about me and this and that.
Yes I would take it back.

Would you have me back if I was true?
Would you have me back and be my boo?
Would you have me back if it was all about you?
I wrote this because you haven't returned my call.
Maybe you will see this while I stare at your picture on the chat wall.

I just wanted to let you know I have been thinking a lot about you and what this world is all about.

I wish I could open my heart and let you see what I feel.
You are the one I want and that is the real deal.

Would you believe me and love me in this world gone black?
I just wanted to know if you would have me back?

Would you have me back if you knew I made it?
would you have me back if I never break it?
would you have me back if I never faked it?

If I never see you again, I will always remember you.
The times we had and the way I kept my feelings true.

I hope you will remember that someone loves you.
I will always know my love for you is true.

If you were ever thinking about me and this and that.
Yes I would take it back.

Would you have me back if I was true?
Would you have me back and be my boo?
Would you have me back if it was all about you?
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11-19-12 12:05 PM
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Oh I like it!
The last line especially, was quite powerful.  It makes me want to get back into the habit of writing poetry.  LOL

I look forward to future pieces from you. 
Oh I like it!
The last line especially, was quite powerful.  It makes me want to get back into the habit of writing poetry.  LOL

I look forward to future pieces from you. 
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11-19-12 12:12 PM
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Yes, solid poem indeed! This is a great poem and I am quite impressed. If it is to that someone special, I hope they like it.
Yes, solid poem indeed! This is a great poem and I am quite impressed. If it is to that someone special, I hope they like it.
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11-19-12 12:15 PM
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Stop it. This isn't in the right forum for starters, and also you need to quit dwelling. Nothing is changing, leave her alone.
Stop it. This isn't in the right forum for starters, and also you need to quit dwelling. Nothing is changing, leave her alone.
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