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04-30-24 07:35 AM

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Finally, some new inspiration. Enjoy.
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10-22-12 07:38 AM
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I find myself at a loss for words
In the presence of a mockingbird
A charm it is three times the third
Silent echoes never heard.

Listen now, to emptiness
The shadow of your selfishness
A cry for help in my distress
A test of more and nothing less.

The faulty heartbeat is to blame
In vanity of a pointless game
The last time that I call your name
And life will never be the same.

Blank stares and a lifeless dream
As things are never what they seem
And after down the face they stream
The tears are all that's left agleam.

The shining sky grows dim with hate
The end has come, and it's too late
Your sheltered life too void to sate
The hunger of a timeless fate.

Hear now the gears scream as they churn
The hourglass one final turn
Memories like paper burn
And once again to ash return.
I find myself at a loss for words
In the presence of a mockingbird
A charm it is three times the third
Silent echoes never heard.

Listen now, to emptiness
The shadow of your selfishness
A cry for help in my distress
A test of more and nothing less.

The faulty heartbeat is to blame
In vanity of a pointless game
The last time that I call your name
And life will never be the same.

Blank stares and a lifeless dream
As things are never what they seem
And after down the face they stream
The tears are all that's left agleam.

The shining sky grows dim with hate
The end has come, and it's too late
Your sheltered life too void to sate
The hunger of a timeless fate.

Hear now the gears scream as they churn
The hourglass one final turn
Memories like paper burn
And once again to ash return.
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10-22-12 08:27 AM
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*sighs in contentment*

Oh man... your poetry is just so......

Wow.

I wish I had the words to give it the praise it deserves. 

I just know how to rhyme.  You, sir, know how to be a poet....
*sighs in contentment*

Oh man... your poetry is just so......

Wow.

I wish I had the words to give it the praise it deserves. 

I just know how to rhyme.  You, sir, know how to be a poet....
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10-22-12 09:15 AM
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Singelli : Thanks, Sin :3


In all honesty, I don't like it that much. It took me all of 10 minutes to write.

Singelli : Thanks, Sin :3


In all honesty, I don't like it that much. It took me all of 10 minutes to write.
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