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my poem ya

 

12-12-10 10:58 AM
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I know that I am huting know that I am tore
but as you stand there waiting for me do not morn
for as I spead thim liteley
and I fumbale as I fall
with these wings
these glores wings
this torn and broken wings I fly

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tell me what you think please
I know that I am huting know that I am tore
but as you stand there waiting for me do not morn
for as I spead thim liteley
and I fumbale as I fall
with these wings
these glores wings
this torn and broken wings I fly

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tell me what you think please
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drkonecharlie : I think it's a pretty darn good poem. Better than what I could write anyways.
drkonecharlie : I think it's a pretty darn good poem. Better than what I could write anyways.
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Jordanv78 : thank you *bows*
Jordanv78 : thank you *bows*
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drkonecharlie : No problem at all! I never was really any good at poems. Not really sure why. It's hard to make a poem really sound good, and be meaningful at the same time.
drkonecharlie : No problem at all! I never was really any good at poems. Not really sure why. It's hard to make a poem really sound good, and be meaningful at the same time.
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Jordanv78 : hmm i jut try to put my fellins or others down and make it rime
Jordanv78 : hmm i jut try to put my fellins or others down and make it rime
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Yeah I hear ya. I was never good at that though. I am much better at writing short stories.
Yeah I hear ya. I was never good at that though. I am much better at writing short stories.
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do you have any up here I wold like see one
do you have any up here I wold like see one
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Pretty nice poem.

I've never written a poem before
Pretty nice poem.

I've never written a poem before
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Thats really good man is that your first one?

septembern : I bet you would be good man. Because you have a good imagination on making threads
Thats really good man is that your first one?

septembern : I bet you would be good man. Because you have a good imagination on making threads
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M!cH@3l 001 : no it's my newst i mite put up my older ones sines this is geting good reviws
M!cH@3l 001 : no it's my newst i mite put up my older ones sines this is geting good reviws
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drkonecharlie : No I don't have any posted anywhere, although I guess I could post some.
drkonecharlie : No I don't have any posted anywhere, although I guess I could post some.
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