okay guys welcome to this walkthrough hope you likey this walkthrough of this game.

1.1 Baron monsters: Goblin Cocatrice Floating eyes sword rat, Helldiver Treasures: Ether 480 gil tent.
okay so we start the game so the main protagnist Cecil is the captain of the Baron red wings.( they arent a hockey team they fly on airships.) and they notice he is kinduv down because he had to kill the innocent people just to get a crystal for their king. and then we are attacked by monsters but sadly you're not able to play as him i't's just giving you a hint on what the battle is like in this game. then we recieve a talk with Baigan who tells Cecil to wait in a room while he talks to the majesty and tells him that they should question about Cecil that he isn't to be trusted anymore.

then we give him the water crystal but wait Cecil was dismissed but wants to tell the king about what he is doing because his men are confused on why they are doing this evil things. but the King gets mad and starts yelling at Cecil. and says he has one more task. that he has to slay a beast but Cecil's loyal friend Kain tells the king to rethink on what he wants. but the king refuses so now we head down a few steps until you see a room full of treasures okay to get them find the soldier who is in front of the room go above him and talk to the wall and you will earn an Ether $480 and a tent. then we talk with another main character Rosa Cecil's girlfriend basically. who wants to talk to him later. then we talk with Cid another main character who tells Cecil to stop making Rosa worry. our maid tells us our room is cleaned. then later that night Rosa tells Cecil he is a good man. but Cecil regrets on who he is. she tells him she loves him and storms out. we wake with Kain waiting for us downstairs now we start the journey.
okay as you can see we are able to go into the village but not now and we are already level 10. sometimes if you are lucky you can get a item called Goblin after fighting them wait to use that item because a special character can use it. you can still level up a bit goblins appear more in the deserty and forest like areas. okay go left until that bridge go over it and keep going north west till hte mountains show go inside the mountains pass and you will see a cave at the top go in it.
Location Mist Cave monsters: Goblins, Swordrats, Insectus, Flying Eyes Treasures: Potion, tent,  Rare items: Goblin
go right then down then right again till you see a ladder turn left just keep using ladders untill this voice tells us to go away. go north on that ladder then you can find a potion. go on the bridge go down on the ladder then go down on the other ladder then go left then up to see another ladder with a treasure on it it's a tent. then go back to the bridge find the ladder above it go right and you will find eye drops which will cure blindness. okay go back down to the two ladders go down one this time and we get another Potion now you should heal up for the boss coming up.  go up untill the voice stops you again then keep going until it asks you if you still want to come say yes. and you will fight the Mist Dragon. okay here is it's stats level 10 HP 465 Mp 29 strength 16 magic 10 defense 5 exp 700 gil 200. there is a trick to this boss becaerful when it says the dragon is turning into mist don't attack it or you will get hurt by it's special move and could kill you just use defend when it does that. and wait until i turns back into it's real form.  if you ge the right timing ou should be able to make Kain use his Jump ability. after we kill it we exit the cave and go right to enter the village of Mist but our ring the king wanted us to deliver transforms into all the monsters and destroys everything and everyone. but as they are getting bewildered on why the king had sent them to do this we hear a little girl's crying. we find her because her mom is dead because we killed the dragon she get's mad at us for killing the dragon which killed her mom with it. then she attacks us. using her summon ability makes an earthquake and she and Cecil are on the other side with Kain mysteryously gone okay we take the girl now let's go up till we see the dessert go east for a while and then we go north and we enter Kaipo, Oasis, Village of the Desset  now we go to the inn to rest and help the girl later that night soldiers from Baron tell Cecil that everyone from the village was supposed to die. so they attack Cecil okay for this battle you HAVE to kill the General first because if you don't he will run away and you lose lot's of exp his stats are HP 226 level 11 MP 13 defense 2 strength 26 exp 398 gil 80 and if you are able to defeat every enemy in the boss battle you will earn about 886 Exp total. after that the girl asks you if your okay and tell you her name is Rydia also joins your team. 
okay we wake up and as you see Rydia is level 1 so we should leave the Oasis and level her up okay when you do fight make sure she uses defend since she is very weak but learns very good magic when leveled. 

1.4 Dessert monsters: Goblin, Flying eyes, Insectus, Hundlegs, Sahagins. summons: Goblin.
we will stop for now tell me what i can do to make these better thank you

Hey, not a bad job on that walkthrough man. I especially liked how it was simple, straightforward, and fairly easy to follow. Not bad at all man. What you can try to do is to fix some minor grammar errors but not a big problem.. I must say, good work.