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There's A Light (part two)

 

11-25-13 11:55 AM
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(Shawn and Mayim sat in a cafÈ,only one other person was in the cafÈ as it was near closing time,Shawn and Mayim are sat by a booth at the window,they both have coffees)

MAYIM: This place has the best coffee huh?

SHAWN: Sure,it's what I needed

MAYIM: So,do tell,what has got you down? You can confide in me

SHAWN: Well,where to begin....

MAYIM: The start would be helpful

(Mayim giggles)

SHAWN: Well,I realised I am not the great Christian I should be,I am not perfect

MAYIM: No one is perfect,Shawn

SHAWN: I was raised to be perfect I guess,all the years going to church,bible studies,prayer group and choir,makes it all seem worthless

MAYIM: And what brought you to this conclusion?

SHAWN: Just things I have found out,like the ten commandments

MAYIM: Let me guess,you broke some,everyone has

SHAWN: Maybe those people don't care

MAYIM: I told you,no one is perfect

SHAWN: Except Jesus,and I am not Jesus

MAYIM: Listen,I saw you out by that bridge and you sure looked like you were going to do something stupid,was it because of this? This is the reason?

SHAWN: I don't even know anymore,I must seem like a confused moron to you now

MAYIM: Of course not,I want to try help you,I have that special part of me that wants to help people

SHAWN: Well,you have,you got me the best cup of coffee I have ever had,someone told me it is the best

(Mayim smiles as she finishes her coffee)

MAYIM: Well,usually after a good coffee I like to go get some noodles,you like noodles yeah?

SHAWN: They are alright,if you are in a noodle mood

MAYIM: And are you in a noodle mood?

SHAWN: I feel like I am in the mood for anything

MAYIM: Then you will love these noodles,I know a kiosk around here

SHAWN: They will still be open? It is midnight

MAYIM: Sure,I don't think he ever closes

SHAWN: Well,I had nothing else planned at midnight,had nothing planned at all really

(Shawn pictures himself jumping off the bridge into the icy water below)

MAYIM: Alright,my treat again

SHAWN: Thank you,will be nicer atmosphere maybe,sometimes I feel like in places like a cafÈ,people are listening in on your conversations,like that creepy guy over there

MAYIM: Well,we can ditch the creepy guy and go get some noodles

(Mayim gets up from her seat and gets her handbag)

SHAWN: Yup,guess I am in a noodle mood

(Shawn and Mayim exit the cafÈ and start walking down the dimly lit streets to get to the noodle kiosk as the song "Starsail" by the Verve plays to end this chapter)

END OF PART TWO
(Shawn and Mayim sat in a cafÈ,only one other person was in the cafÈ as it was near closing time,Shawn and Mayim are sat by a booth at the window,they both have coffees)

MAYIM: This place has the best coffee huh?

SHAWN: Sure,it's what I needed

MAYIM: So,do tell,what has got you down? You can confide in me

SHAWN: Well,where to begin....

MAYIM: The start would be helpful

(Mayim giggles)

SHAWN: Well,I realised I am not the great Christian I should be,I am not perfect

MAYIM: No one is perfect,Shawn

SHAWN: I was raised to be perfect I guess,all the years going to church,bible studies,prayer group and choir,makes it all seem worthless

MAYIM: And what brought you to this conclusion?

SHAWN: Just things I have found out,like the ten commandments

MAYIM: Let me guess,you broke some,everyone has

SHAWN: Maybe those people don't care

MAYIM: I told you,no one is perfect

SHAWN: Except Jesus,and I am not Jesus

MAYIM: Listen,I saw you out by that bridge and you sure looked like you were going to do something stupid,was it because of this? This is the reason?

SHAWN: I don't even know anymore,I must seem like a confused moron to you now

MAYIM: Of course not,I want to try help you,I have that special part of me that wants to help people

SHAWN: Well,you have,you got me the best cup of coffee I have ever had,someone told me it is the best

(Mayim smiles as she finishes her coffee)

MAYIM: Well,usually after a good coffee I like to go get some noodles,you like noodles yeah?

SHAWN: They are alright,if you are in a noodle mood

MAYIM: And are you in a noodle mood?

SHAWN: I feel like I am in the mood for anything

MAYIM: Then you will love these noodles,I know a kiosk around here

SHAWN: They will still be open? It is midnight

MAYIM: Sure,I don't think he ever closes

SHAWN: Well,I had nothing else planned at midnight,had nothing planned at all really

(Shawn pictures himself jumping off the bridge into the icy water below)

MAYIM: Alright,my treat again

SHAWN: Thank you,will be nicer atmosphere maybe,sometimes I feel like in places like a cafÈ,people are listening in on your conversations,like that creepy guy over there

MAYIM: Well,we can ditch the creepy guy and go get some noodles

(Mayim gets up from her seat and gets her handbag)

SHAWN: Yup,guess I am in a noodle mood

(Shawn and Mayim exit the cafÈ and start walking down the dimly lit streets to get to the noodle kiosk as the song "Starsail" by the Verve plays to end this chapter)

END OF PART TWO
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