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I just found this really cute story I wrote like four years ago xP
I'm from Sweden so at the time I wrote this I wasn't very good at English, so there may be a few errors, but please ignore them ^-^
The question is if I should continue to write on this story, I really like the idea, or if it's really bad perhaps it's for the better to just leave it behind...?

Once upon a
time there was a girl who lived under a huge rock. Her best friend was a puddle
called Slimy. They always did things together, like sliming around and other
funny stuff. One day when they were sliming around a weird thing happened. I’ll
tell you whole story. It all started with the chimney.
Suddenly a
big chimney jumped and prevented them to walk or slime any further.

-Get out of my garden! He screamed.

-This place doesn’t belong to you! Bubbled Slimy

-Oh come on, let’s just get out of here, fast, because that chimney does not
look happy for having us here…said the girl in a low voice
On their
way back home Slimy was very angry.

-This isn’t fair, he cried, when I was young things were different…

-Awww come on, cheer up and see things from the bright side! said the girl with
a smile.

And then they went home to drink some blueberry tea.
I just found this really cute story I wrote like four years ago xP
I'm from Sweden so at the time I wrote this I wasn't very good at English, so there may be a few errors, but please ignore them ^-^
The question is if I should continue to write on this story, I really like the idea, or if it's really bad perhaps it's for the better to just leave it behind...?

Once upon a
time there was a girl who lived under a huge rock. Her best friend was a puddle
called Slimy. They always did things together, like sliming around and other
funny stuff. One day when they were sliming around a weird thing happened. I’ll
tell you whole story. It all started with the chimney.
Suddenly a
big chimney jumped and prevented them to walk or slime any further.

-Get out of my garden! He screamed.

-This place doesn’t belong to you! Bubbled Slimy

-Oh come on, let’s just get out of here, fast, because that chimney does not
look happy for having us here…said the girl in a low voice
On their
way back home Slimy was very angry.

-This isn’t fair, he cried, when I was young things were different…

-Awww come on, cheer up and see things from the bright side! said the girl with
a smile.

And then they went home to drink some blueberry tea.
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