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07-01-13 08:02 PM
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Since people reading my reviews have told me what they mean by putting theme in categories, I know what they mean.I quote this from linkmaster99: "Oh, and a tip of advice, when people said split into categories they
meant this way. Graphics, Sound, Addictiveness, Story, Depth,
Difficulty, Overall etc". So I know now.

----------Overall-----------
This game is a mix of Super Mario 1, 2, 3 and Super Mario World. That is what makes the game this good.
When I first went on the first level, I thought that this was going to be an awesome game. I was right. This game is the best!

----------Graphics---------
The graphics are very good but not quite a 10 on my scale. The graphics are still made entirely out of mini pixels. I like games that look more real. This just doesn't say '10' to me.

---------Sound-------------
The sounds are very good. Again, just not a 10. I like all the sounds. Some of them just don't say '10' to me again.

---------Addictiveness---------
Oh, where can I begin here?! The addictiveness on here is great. When I die in the game, I keep playing. Even when I get a 'Game Over', I play again. I just can't stop after I start. The game is very addicting.

--------Story-----------
(Basically, no story. Same story in all Mario video games.)

-------Depth-----------
Depth on the game is extreme. This game has a lot to offer. It also takes a while to beat. This is why the game's depth got a '10'.

-------Difficulty----------
Difficulty... Boy, oh boy. This game is easy at first. As you process, it gets harder. But, unlike most video games... this game has a lot of levels. That means the game gets even harder! If the game had less levels, it would not be this hard!!!

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This was my overall review of the game "Super Mario Bros. 7.5". Another special thanks to linkmaster99. Thank you for telling me!
Thank you for reading my review and have a nice day.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                 -sdslayer100
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sdslayer100 : Hello there & Linkmaster99 was correct! Splitting your review into different categories makes the review a lot easier to read and therefore the reader can enjoy reading it. I can see you took on this advice, which is brilliant; not many people listen to advice and just take the compliments. I'm glad you took on board what this user said.

I think this is a pretty decent review, well done! I'm glad you are writing reviews. Woah! You started with 'Overall'. This can be bad and good. Good in that it can let us know before reading it your overall thoughts and opinions of that game. Bad in that we already know how you feel about the game and will not be enticed. I think you should have put the overall at the end of your review, that's just my opinion.

There were a fair amount of descriptions & details in this review which is great, however, I think you could have developed your points a lot more. Simply stating 'I like all the sounds' isn't really a valid point and rather basic for a review. This is what you should be writing:

"I thoroughly enjoyed listening to the sounds in this game; they were very touching and they were a thrill to listen to. I think the creator of this game put a lot of effort into making these sounds appropriate for this game and that they appealed the gamer'

That's something along the lines of what you could and should be writing.

Overall, this wasn't a bad review! Improve on what I have said. Also, work on grammar and spelling. Spelling & Grammar are important for the professionalism of a review. 
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This is much better than your last review! Next time actually tell us your ratings for each category instead of saying "it's not a 10". And next time put the Overall category at the end instead of the beginning. Keep making more reviews and use each suggestion that vizzed users say in your next reviews and you will get better!
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See! This is much better now that you added some detail and you separated the categories! I sure do with that everyone would do that, but they don't and it annoys me. But good job with the review!
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Good review nice spacing and you added some detail to the catogeries, you also separated them nicely.
Good review and keep this up!
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