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05-30-10 09:51 AM
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Here u can create a story to make people say wow! like my here

One time, Alex was in his house with his best friend, hunter, and while they were playing the computer. There something happen to computer that the screen became so bright and changing color. they knew that not good thing but we spoke so soon. The computer suck us into. Later on, they were found in sea with many fish and then we looks for land. "We can't find a land!" said hunter. "Look up! it looks like a blue plane!" said Alex. "are you sure? then why there 2 tails on plane?" As they try to find out what planet or place they on.


this all i can think. i will add more. turn in for more story soon!
Here u can create a story to make people say wow! like my here

One time, Alex was in his house with his best friend, hunter, and while they were playing the computer. There something happen to computer that the screen became so bright and changing color. they knew that not good thing but we spoke so soon. The computer suck us into. Later on, they were found in sea with many fish and then we looks for land. "We can't find a land!" said hunter. "Look up! it looks like a blue plane!" said Alex. "are you sure? then why there 2 tails on plane?" As they try to find out what planet or place they on.


this all i can think. i will add more. turn in for more story soon!
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06-13-10 01:36 PM
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I'll give it a shot ( :

That night was a blur in my mind. Everything was a blur. I couldn’t even remember who I was. So I lay there, wherever I was, with my eyes shut, but awake. I felt fantastic though, like my body was so energized. I craved for something, but I didn’t know what. I opened my eyes, and the sunlight blinded me. I whipped myself forward and realized I was lying in snow, and felt perfectly fine in just jogging pants and a ripped t-shirt. I felt a nearby presence of someone unknown, and I threw my head around and witnessed some kids making an imperfect looking snowman with a carrot nose and human gloves and a hat. It confused me like I have never seen it before. I thought I had, but obviously not, if it was confusing me. I then felt a sharp pain on the left side of my neck and I immediately threw my hand over the stinging area. I felt my neck, it was wet, and I could feel holes that were going through my skin. I looked at my hand and gazed at the bright red liquid dripping off my hands. The blood sunk into the snow, and it gave off a strange, alluring aroma. I’ve never seen blood as such an appealing substance. Out of nowhere, a snowball hit my face, as kids almost six feet away from me apologized. I felt a strong irritation and calmed myself down, and continued to think about why my own blood is so fascinating to me, and why the snow matches my own skin tone and doesn’t make me seem cold.
After giving up my unanswerable thoughts I stood up and left the snowy area I happened to be in. I stopped after I realized I didn’t hear the familiar crunching noises that snow makes when you step on it. So I looked back and noticed I was leaving no footprints in the snow. I pondered that thought and stopped, continuing my walk home until I yet again considered another question.
Where was home?


Well, that took longer than I thought it would..
I'll give it a shot ( :

That night was a blur in my mind. Everything was a blur. I couldn’t even remember who I was. So I lay there, wherever I was, with my eyes shut, but awake. I felt fantastic though, like my body was so energized. I craved for something, but I didn’t know what. I opened my eyes, and the sunlight blinded me. I whipped myself forward and realized I was lying in snow, and felt perfectly fine in just jogging pants and a ripped t-shirt. I felt a nearby presence of someone unknown, and I threw my head around and witnessed some kids making an imperfect looking snowman with a carrot nose and human gloves and a hat. It confused me like I have never seen it before. I thought I had, but obviously not, if it was confusing me. I then felt a sharp pain on the left side of my neck and I immediately threw my hand over the stinging area. I felt my neck, it was wet, and I could feel holes that were going through my skin. I looked at my hand and gazed at the bright red liquid dripping off my hands. The blood sunk into the snow, and it gave off a strange, alluring aroma. I’ve never seen blood as such an appealing substance. Out of nowhere, a snowball hit my face, as kids almost six feet away from me apologized. I felt a strong irritation and calmed myself down, and continued to think about why my own blood is so fascinating to me, and why the snow matches my own skin tone and doesn’t make me seem cold.
After giving up my unanswerable thoughts I stood up and left the snowy area I happened to be in. I stopped after I realized I didn’t hear the familiar crunching noises that snow makes when you step on it. So I looked back and noticed I was leaving no footprints in the snow. I pondered that thought and stopped, continuing my walk home until I yet again considered another question.
Where was home?


Well, that took longer than I thought it would..
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06-13-10 01:41 PM
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Wow, ImNotAfraid you are a good story maker. I'm not going to make my own, because I suck at story writing :/. You should continue that story and pm it to me .
Wow, ImNotAfraid you are a good story maker. I'm not going to make my own, because I suck at story writing :/. You should continue that story and pm it to me .
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06-13-10 02:54 PM
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Woot very cool story! please tell more player to come if they want make story
Woot very cool story! please tell more player to come if they want make story
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06-13-10 03:39 PM
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Thanksss ! ( :
Thanksss ! ( :
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06-14-10 05:28 PM
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you welcome! wow... that story almost spoke to my heart
you welcome! wow... that story almost spoke to my heart
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