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06-28-13 03:34 PM
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Over view
Super Mario bros may not be the first Mario game but it was what started the modern Mario 2d platformers.There were a lot of down sides to this game but who can resist playing this game.

Graphics
For its time the graphics were pretty good you might think.Then when you look at games like Zelda, Kirby, or punch out you probably think what the heck happened.The graphics were pretty poor.Even for its time.

Sound
The sound was pretty good in this game.I mean it wasn't great.I got tired of the same music over and over again.The coin and jump sound was perfect.Making the sound in between.

Addictiveness
Yes it is a great game but is it really worth playing over and over again since the game can be beat in less than five minutes.(I'm not spilling the secrets).But hey who could resist killing koopa(bowser) over and over again.

Story
The story was quite unclear other than saving toadstool from bowser.

Depth
The game really did not go that deep.Bowser was the only boss.The only power ups were mushrooms, fire flowers , and stars. I mean where were the one up mushrooms.

Difficulty
No insults but this game is hard. Game over = start over game no mater what.

Conclusion
Super Mario overall is a good game.I have no problem playing it.
Over view
Super Mario bros may not be the first Mario game but it was what started the modern Mario 2d platformers.There were a lot of down sides to this game but who can resist playing this game.

Graphics
For its time the graphics were pretty good you might think.Then when you look at games like Zelda, Kirby, or punch out you probably think what the heck happened.The graphics were pretty poor.Even for its time.

Sound
The sound was pretty good in this game.I mean it wasn't great.I got tired of the same music over and over again.The coin and jump sound was perfect.Making the sound in between.

Addictiveness
Yes it is a great game but is it really worth playing over and over again since the game can be beat in less than five minutes.(I'm not spilling the secrets).But hey who could resist killing koopa(bowser) over and over again.

Story
The story was quite unclear other than saving toadstool from bowser.

Depth
The game really did not go that deep.Bowser was the only boss.The only power ups were mushrooms, fire flowers , and stars. I mean where were the one up mushrooms.

Difficulty
No insults but this game is hard. Game over = start over game no mater what.

Conclusion
Super Mario overall is a good game.I have no problem playing it.
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06-28-13 04:03 PM
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kennethfrost80 : Nice review here.I am a Super Mario Brothers fan myself, and I have played and beaten the original Super Mario Brothers game, so I know what it is like.You separate the categories like you should do, that is what I liked.That also makes reviews easier to read, and you will get more replies.Your spacing is good too.It is not all crammed up like some of the other reviews I have seen, good job o that.First off, you need to include a lot more words in your future reviews, because reviews are usually five hundred to one thousand words long, yes I know its time consuming, but it will all be worth it at the end when you get replies about how good your review is.Second, make sure to include descriptive information about each catogory.People do not want to read reviews that are vague and not very descriptive.Third, you forgot to rate each catogory.Rating each category is very important skill to know when writing or typing game reviews.Rate each category out of ten, and make sure you tell why you gave the category that rating.Fourth, do not include too much of your opinion in your reviews.Do not take this offensively, but no one will want to know what your opinion is.Instead, include detail on why the game is unique from other games instead of sharing your opinion so much about things.Fifth, when you say something like,"The only power-ups are..", tell what each of the power-ups do.This goes back to being very descriptive when you do game reviews.Finally, always make sure you are not insulting anything about any of the games here on vizzed.You may not know, but that is against the rules, and could possibly get you banned.I am just warning you ahead of time, do not do that.If it is by mistake, just apologize and do not do it again.I hope all my tips help you!!You can pm me with any questions you may have.Have a very nice day!!
kennethfrost80 : Nice review here.I am a Super Mario Brothers fan myself, and I have played and beaten the original Super Mario Brothers game, so I know what it is like.You separate the categories like you should do, that is what I liked.That also makes reviews easier to read, and you will get more replies.Your spacing is good too.It is not all crammed up like some of the other reviews I have seen, good job o that.First off, you need to include a lot more words in your future reviews, because reviews are usually five hundred to one thousand words long, yes I know its time consuming, but it will all be worth it at the end when you get replies about how good your review is.Second, make sure to include descriptive information about each catogory.People do not want to read reviews that are vague and not very descriptive.Third, you forgot to rate each catogory.Rating each category is very important skill to know when writing or typing game reviews.Rate each category out of ten, and make sure you tell why you gave the category that rating.Fourth, do not include too much of your opinion in your reviews.Do not take this offensively, but no one will want to know what your opinion is.Instead, include detail on why the game is unique from other games instead of sharing your opinion so much about things.Fifth, when you say something like,"The only power-ups are..", tell what each of the power-ups do.This goes back to being very descriptive when you do game reviews.Finally, always make sure you are not insulting anything about any of the games here on vizzed.You may not know, but that is against the rules, and could possibly get you banned.I am just warning you ahead of time, do not do that.If it is by mistake, just apologize and do not do it again.I hope all my tips help you!!You can pm me with any questions you may have.Have a very nice day!!
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dennyjr22 :
Thanks for the advice.That was my first review and I will do my best to make future ones better.Thank you.

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Thanks for the advice.That was my first review and I will do my best to make future ones better.Thank you.
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Great review for a first one. You included enough detail since it was your first one as well. Keep it up .
Great review for a first one. You included enough detail since it was your first one as well. Keep it up .
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Hello there! How are you? .. I'm great. Thanks for writing this review! It gave me something to read. (:

I've never seen anyone start with an overview which highlighted your personal insights and elements, which was really great! I've never seen anything like that before! Awesome.

You simply stated that  the graphics were pretty good, but you didn't explain why there good and you didn't give evidence to support why you thought the graphics were pretty good. I like how to referred and compared different games in this section, that was interesting.

You need to work on the spacing of your sentences. There are some sentences that are finished but join onto the next sentence, and this makes the review look very unprofessional. You want your reviews to look professional as it will attract good reviewers and staff to your reviews.

You gave fair points in the addictiveness section which is great to see. I would just like to see more development in these sections as they are personal opinions and you should be able to give more detail.

I'm sure there's more to the story than saving toadstool from bowser. Isn't there side quests? Side missions? Missions leading to the rescue?

Haha, I laughed at the line 'I mean where were the one up mushrooms'! True that. There weren't (m)any of them.

This was an overall good review! Thanks for writing it - more detail and structure needed! Improve on this!

Good Luck!
Hello there! How are you? .. I'm great. Thanks for writing this review! It gave me something to read. (:

I've never seen anyone start with an overview which highlighted your personal insights and elements, which was really great! I've never seen anything like that before! Awesome.

You simply stated that  the graphics were pretty good, but you didn't explain why there good and you didn't give evidence to support why you thought the graphics were pretty good. I like how to referred and compared different games in this section, that was interesting.

You need to work on the spacing of your sentences. There are some sentences that are finished but join onto the next sentence, and this makes the review look very unprofessional. You want your reviews to look professional as it will attract good reviewers and staff to your reviews.

You gave fair points in the addictiveness section which is great to see. I would just like to see more development in these sections as they are personal opinions and you should be able to give more detail.

I'm sure there's more to the story than saving toadstool from bowser. Isn't there side quests? Side missions? Missions leading to the rescue?

Haha, I laughed at the line 'I mean where were the one up mushrooms'! True that. There weren't (m)any of them.

This was an overall good review! Thanks for writing it - more detail and structure needed! Improve on this!

Good Luck!
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You never heard of the A+Start trick

Other than that, I grant you that graphs were primitive and that the music was repetitive(especially inside the castle). For "old" gamers like me, it does bring some nostalgia.
You never heard of the A+Start trick

Other than that, I grant you that graphs were primitive and that the music was repetitive(especially inside the castle). For "old" gamers like me, it does bring some nostalgia.
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this review is really good i liked reading it good job 
this review is really good i liked reading it good job 
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 Simple review.It's great,I can say it is so awesome.
 Simple review.It's great,I can say it is so awesome.
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Pretty good review for a first one but you forgot to rate the different categories but you used nice spacing between them That also makes reviews easier to read and it improves them a lot.

Hope you make more like these and keep it up!
Pretty good review for a first one but you forgot to rate the different categories but you used nice spacing between them That also makes reviews easier to read and it improves them a lot.

Hope you make more like these and keep it up!
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