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The Story of a Pokémon Master. (Part 1)

 

06-17-13 12:51 PM
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The Story of a Pokémon Master:

One day... a New child is born.
The child is called Mark.
His dad called Red knows that he becomes a splendid Pokémon Trainer.

10 years later...
Finally it's time to Start my Pokémon Adventure said Mark.
Oh crap I don't know which Pokémon I should choose, they're all so very good!
Great I don't know which I should choose...
Well I should go to the Lab.. If I walk I will think about it.
Walking....
Hmm said Mark. Turtwig is a look like a Turtle, great for beginners!
But Chimchar is also smashing! And Piplup then....
Oh man I can't choose...

Meanwhile in the Lab.
I hope that Red's son is here on time said Rowan the Professor.
Sophie because you're my Grand child you can choose first.
Okay Mr. Rowan. I'll choose Piplup, it's a cutie said Sophie.
A mystery Boy comes in the Lab.
... said the Boy
What are you doing here said Rowan.
... I'M TAKING THIS POKÉMON! 
The kid picks a Pokéball and runs away.
Oh no said the Professor, this is terrible!
Mr. Rowan also bad new is that the New Trainer can choose only one Pokémon.
No way said Rowan. I NEED TO CALL THE POLICE!!!
Calm down Rowan! Sigh I go on my Adventure to become the very best Pokémon Trainer here! See you later angry Man said Sophie.
COME ON! I AM NOT ANGRY said Rowan.
Rowan is calling the Police meanwhile Mark is in the Lab.
Sir what happened here asks Mark.
Nooooo! You are here!!!!
Aren't you happy to see the Son of the Champion?
Well... a Pokémon is stolen....
WHAT!! No way...
I called the Police already. Well I have only one Pokémon left... are you okay that you get that Pokémon?
I'm fine with that, I can't choose anyway.
Okay then here is a Gift for a Newbie: Pokéballs and a Pokédex.
Awesome thanks sir! Well it's time to see my first Pokémon! GOOOO!!!!!
A Chimchar appears...
So it's a Chimchar, okay then I hope that we'll become Great Friends pal!
Chim.... said the Pokémon.

Route 1: YEAH I AM A POKÉMON TRAINER!!!!!!! 
Then the mystery Kid appears..
You are a Newbie right said the Kid.
Ehh... yes... said Mark.
Well then LETS BATTLE!
Okay bring it on and give all what you have!
Two Pokémon's appeared. A Turtwig and a Chimchar.

How will this end? (Yeah I had nothing to do ) (Next Part comes maybe one day)
The Story of a Pokémon Master:

One day... a New child is born.
The child is called Mark.
His dad called Red knows that he becomes a splendid Pokémon Trainer.

10 years later...
Finally it's time to Start my Pokémon Adventure said Mark.
Oh crap I don't know which Pokémon I should choose, they're all so very good!
Great I don't know which I should choose...
Well I should go to the Lab.. If I walk I will think about it.
Walking....
Hmm said Mark. Turtwig is a look like a Turtle, great for beginners!
But Chimchar is also smashing! And Piplup then....
Oh man I can't choose...

Meanwhile in the Lab.
I hope that Red's son is here on time said Rowan the Professor.
Sophie because you're my Grand child you can choose first.
Okay Mr. Rowan. I'll choose Piplup, it's a cutie said Sophie.
A mystery Boy comes in the Lab.
... said the Boy
What are you doing here said Rowan.
... I'M TAKING THIS POKÉMON! 
The kid picks a Pokéball and runs away.
Oh no said the Professor, this is terrible!
Mr. Rowan also bad new is that the New Trainer can choose only one Pokémon.
No way said Rowan. I NEED TO CALL THE POLICE!!!
Calm down Rowan! Sigh I go on my Adventure to become the very best Pokémon Trainer here! See you later angry Man said Sophie.
COME ON! I AM NOT ANGRY said Rowan.
Rowan is calling the Police meanwhile Mark is in the Lab.
Sir what happened here asks Mark.
Nooooo! You are here!!!!
Aren't you happy to see the Son of the Champion?
Well... a Pokémon is stolen....
WHAT!! No way...
I called the Police already. Well I have only one Pokémon left... are you okay that you get that Pokémon?
I'm fine with that, I can't choose anyway.
Okay then here is a Gift for a Newbie: Pokéballs and a Pokédex.
Awesome thanks sir! Well it's time to see my first Pokémon! GOOOO!!!!!
A Chimchar appears...
So it's a Chimchar, okay then I hope that we'll become Great Friends pal!
Chim.... said the Pokémon.

Route 1: YEAH I AM A POKÉMON TRAINER!!!!!!! 
Then the mystery Kid appears..
You are a Newbie right said the Kid.
Ehh... yes... said Mark.
Well then LETS BATTLE!
Okay bring it on and give all what you have!
Two Pokémon's appeared. A Turtwig and a Chimchar.

How will this end? (Yeah I had nothing to do ) (Next Part comes maybe one day)
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This is a good story. Wait What, His Dad Red. This is like a fake Ash Ketchum story to me. But Like I said good story. Funny In some way's.
This is a good story. Wait What, His Dad Red. This is like a fake Ash Ketchum story to me. But Like I said good story. Funny In some way's.
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TornadoMudkip : Nice story! When are you planning on making part 2? 10/10
TornadoMudkip : Nice story! When are you planning on making part 2? 10/10
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This is a really good and funny story. I think it is good because you make the perfect setting and really sounds like a Pokémon trainer, indecisive of which Pokémon to choose. I think professor Rowan is funny to when he says "come on, I am not angry!" I like the humor in your story and I am anxious to see what part 2 will be like. Overall you did a great job with creating the perfect Pokémon setting and the way the trainer thinks. I think you did an awesome job and I like the way you did and set everything up, awesome job. I predict the chimchar will win because it is a fire type, but then again if they are just new and haven't learned any moves yet, it will be close and they both know tackle. I am eager for part 2. Excellent job and keep writing! 
This is a really good and funny story. I think it is good because you make the perfect setting and really sounds like a Pokémon trainer, indecisive of which Pokémon to choose. I think professor Rowan is funny to when he says "come on, I am not angry!" I like the humor in your story and I am anxious to see what part 2 will be like. Overall you did a great job with creating the perfect Pokémon setting and the way the trainer thinks. I think you did an awesome job and I like the way you did and set everything up, awesome job. I predict the chimchar will win because it is a fire type, but then again if they are just new and haven't learned any moves yet, it will be close and they both know tackle. I am eager for part 2. Excellent job and keep writing! 
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This was a good and funny story! I will wait for part 2.
This was a good and funny story! I will wait for part 2.
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Read this morning and I enjoyed it but why is Red's son in Sinnoh?Isn't Red from Kanto I know there is a possibility Red moved there but could you clarify why he did.
Read this morning and I enjoyed it but why is Red's son in Sinnoh?Isn't Red from Kanto I know there is a possibility Red moved there but could you clarify why he did.
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Well this Story is Fan Made!
Used my Fantasty for this Story!
I saw, you enjoyed my Story, well I will make Part 2 soon then.
Well this Story is Fan Made!
Used my Fantasty for this Story!
I saw, you enjoyed my Story, well I will make Part 2 soon then.
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This is a good story Where's the next part? Also maybe it'll be easier to tell what the characters are saying by labeling them like this:
Mark: Finally it's time to Start my Pokémon Adventure. Oh crap I don't know which Pokémon I should choose, they're all so very good! Great I don't know which I should choose...


I'm just suggesting, you honestly don't have to do it. Also I can help you with the story if you want.
This is a good story Where's the next part? Also maybe it'll be easier to tell what the characters are saying by labeling them like this:
Mark: Finally it's time to Start my Pokémon Adventure. Oh crap I don't know which Pokémon I should choose, they're all so very good! Great I don't know which I should choose...


I'm just suggesting, you honestly don't have to do it. Also I can help you with the story if you want.
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(edited by hilacle on 06-28-13 07:36 PM)    

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wow.....I like this story its so cool!
wow.....I like this story its so cool!
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