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VIZZED ISLE EPISODE 13
FLASHBACK
*Jigsaw did not pick an action, so one will be chosen for him.
The morgue was cold and silent, bags on top of stretchers filled the room and the stench of latex gloves and death loomed over Dr. Locke and the other person in the room.
LOCKE: So who exactly are you looking for?
JIGSAW: Penny Bridgette.
LOCKE: Oh, wow. She’s been dead for seventeen years. I remember her.
JIGSAW: You have thousands of corpses in this morgue, how exactly do you know Penny?
Locke stayed silent for several moments, turning away from Jigsaw.
LOCKE: I know her, because I adopted one of her children.

All action menus locked
ONE EPISODE LEFT UNTIL THE SEASON FINALE!


Short episode, I know, but I'm taking extra preparation for episode 15. Trust me, episode 15 will be the longest one I've written.

Episode 14 will have the menus back on them, so don't worry about that.

FAR AND WIDE



Scenario: JIGSAW |
Flashback scene
Twelve years before….
Rain pounded down on the car’s hood. The light tapping noise soothed Jigsaw. He continued to sit in the car and stare down the grey street, and occasionally glimpsed at his gas tank; it was inching towards E. This afternoon was quite possibly the worst one he would ever experience, but at first it seemed like the best in his life.
When the harsh amount of rain cleared, Jigsaw got out of the car and slammed the door behind him. He then made a slow jog into the convenience store.
There were five lonely dollars in his pocket… Waiting to be spent.
JIGSAW: I’d like to check this lottery ticket, and could you get me a pack of menthols?
CLERK: Ah, the usual…
The clerk gave Jigsaw the cigarettes and then took the money. He put the ticket in the machine, and unlike anything he’d ever expected, these three amazing words emerged from the clerk.
CLERK: It’s a…. Winner…!
JIGSAW: What?!
CLERK: Oh, wow! Holy crap!
JIGSAW: You’re not joking?
CLERK: You’re two million dollars richer, my friend…

Back to present…
Jigsaw, bewildered, checked around the entire room… And then he ran for the door. Grabbing onto the doorknob, he immediately felt a searing pain surge through him.
A woman walked into the other end of the room and laughed.
JULIET: You didn’t think it’d be that easy, would you? Ben put some precautions here…
Jigsaw fell onto the floor and then stared at Juliet angrily. He jumped to his feet, and sprinted at her, but he then felt a cold smack against his shoulder. She was being protected by a wall of bullet-proof Plexiglas.
JULIET: Ha… This is entertaining. What other stupid thing will you try?
JIGSAW: Don’t worry, I’ll find a way outta here.
JULIET: …And risk your friends’ lives? I don’t think you have the coldness in you.
JIGSAW: What the hell are you saying?
Juliet grabbed a remote control from her pocket and clicked at the wall behind her. A massive screen turned on, apparently filming a room; Roy and BennyMD were lying unconscious in adjacent corners of one another.
JULIET: I am wired. If I die, the room holding your little friends will fill with poison. Almost a little like the Schrodinger’s cat experiment, isn’t it? Don’t rattle the box or there’s a big chance they’ll die.
JIGSAW: Why are you doing all of this? What do you people gain?
JULIET: We gain data.
FADE OUT





BennyMD’s Scenario:
Flashback
Fourteen days before:
The airport smelled like leather, and a mix of deodorants. The glass walls overlooking the runway were somewhat unsettling; BennyMD always feared flying.
BENNYMD: Hi, I’m getting on flight 815. When is that taking off?
DESK ASSISTANT: Well, about five minutes…
BENNYMD: What?!
DESK ASSISTANT: I guess I should hurry you in… Do you have all of your luggage?
BENNYMD: Yes….
DESK ASSISTANT: OK, come with me.
The Desk assistant walked past the desk and onto a forward-moving escalator. BennyMD followed and boarded onto the one plane that would change his life forever.
Back to present:
The room was cold, and felt lifeless. When BennyMD woke up, he noticed Roy was banging against a door with his fist.
ROY: Get me the hell out, damn you!
BENNYMD: Where the F*** are we, dude?!
ROY: Narnia! What’dyou think?!
BENNYMD: Thanks for the enlightenment, captain d-bag….
Kevin walked in from a door on the other end of the room and laughed.
KEVIN: My own brother tried to kill me. This is so priceless.
BENNYMD: Hey, you’re that dude!
KEVIN: Sure… Specific enough, are you?
Kevin quietly paced to the Plexiglas shield and pressed his hand up against it.
KEVIN: Do you like your new hamster cage?
BENNYMD: ….
KEVIN: Anyway, I’d like to make a proposal.
BennyMD hopped to his feet and stared at Kevin with skepticism. He checked his surroundings, there was unfortunately nowhere to escape..
ROY: And what exact ‘proposal’ do you have in mind?
KEVIN: If you follow my instructions, I’ll let you live.
FADE OUT

EPISODE LISTINGS FOR SEASON ONE:
Ep1, Ep2, Ep3, Ep4, Ep5, Ep6, Ep7, Ep8, Ep9, Ep10, Ep11, Ep12, Ep13, Ep14, and on 8/19, the season finale.

Episode information:
Episode fifteen will be the longest episode I have written to date. It will tie together some questions, and, unfortunately for you, create others for you to ask. Season Two will begin on September 16, 2008 with Episode 16.

I hope you have enjoyed the episodes so far, and yes, they will be getting far more elaborate in the future. Make sure not to have your head explode .

"HEY! YOU'RE THAT DUDE!"
That's pretty dang close.

It's more like
"WHOA! YOU'RE THAT GUY! WITH THE FACE!"

Anyways, thinking.

Don't worry take your time. I am also planning out more plot points.

I don't see this sim series ending any time soon

I'll take the proposal, as long as it doesn't require me to press a button every 108 minutes XD

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The Season Recap:
The first episode begins with iBOCK waking up with a headache, on an island he’s never seen before. In his pocket, mysteriously, there was a gun with one bullet in it, a knife, and other supplies. When he reached the island, he met fellow cast members JigSaw, Dragon Master, Belial, BennyMD, and the story had begun. They all crashed on the island, and the plane they were once in, American Airlines Flight 815 was in pieces.



Episode two set the stage for new interactive cast members BennyMD, and JigSaw. The mysteries of the island began to unfold, such as JigSaw and Dragon Master stumbling upon a black object in the sand…


Episode three opens with BennyMD searching the wreckage of the plane, and he finds numbers written in blood on a mirror in the plane’s restroom. JigSaw pulled the black object out of the sand to figure out that it was a cable… And iBOCK spoke with the woman near the wreckage.

Episodes four, five, six, and seven are the episodes involving the ‘Looking Glass’, an underwater station that JigSaw swam to. He then found an apparently insane man, claiming that he was his brother and that their mother had sent them to the island. iBOCK unveiled a stack of notebooks with several chilling notes of data, and a sentence stating that ‘they’ know iBOCK is on the island. BennyMD ends up finding a hatch in the sand and a man from the woods quickly stops him.


Episodes eight, nine, ten, and eleven revolve around BennyMD and Roy going down to the Looking Glass to find JigSaw, and to also find some possible answers. BennyMD and Roy find 2 pieces of a key, and an entire manifest of American Airlines flight 815.
Episodes twelve, thirteen, and fourteen have led up to this season finale. I hope you’re all ready.
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ONE MONTH BEFORE THE CRASH…
Juliet stood quietly in Benjamin Linus’ house, staring at him with a horrified look in her eyes.

Benjamin Linus: What?

JULIET: I have something to tell you…

Benjamin Linus: Well, sure, you can tell me anything.

JULIET: The back pains you’ve been having, I thought it was a fracture… But it turns out you have a very large tumor on your spine…

Benjamin Linus stared at Juliet, his hands began to shake and he dropped the mug he was holding in his right hand. It crashed to the floor and the coffee spilled everywhere.

JULIET: There’s obviously something you haven’t told me.

Benjamin Linus: You know I wasn’t lying to you about your sister---

JULIET: Yes, you did lie to me! If your research has found a cure for cancer, then how come you have it?! You didn’t cure my sister, you lied to me!

Benjamin Linus: No, I did not lie, Juliet, I always keep my word! I did cure your sister!

JULIET: Then let me go home! Let me see her!

Benjamin Linus: You know I can’t let you do that.

Juliet fell to her knees, and broke into tears. Benjamin Linus looked away in disgust, and he walked to the living room. Plopping in a chair and disregarding the broken mug in the kitchen, he undid his tie and looked down at the floor.

Benjamin Linus: There’s so very much for you to learn on this island--- so much you must help us discover. You have stumbled upon such an amazing discovery, and I intend to flaunt it to the world.

JULIET: …

Benjamin Linus: And you’re not leaving until you help me fix the mistake I’ve made.

It’s begun.

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FLASHBACK #1- ROY

The halls were barren; every step Roy took into this dank corridor, he felt more and more alone. A few doctors walked by, occasionally giving him a reassuring nod. The doors were numbered, and he was getting closer and closer to the door he needed to reach.

402L was printed, and he pushed it open to see a mortician standing over a former someone on the stretcher.

ROY: What happened?

MORTICIAN: A drive by. It’s almost becoming the norm around here.

ROY: I can’t believe this happened again.

MORTICIAN: You’re gonna have to get used to it, it’s your job to investigate,
isn’t it?

ROY: True… But there’s got to be a way to slow down this continuous flow of crimes.

MORTICIAN: I’ll call you when I find more information. Thanks for coming.

ROY: The pleasure’s all mine…
Back to Present

Kevin stood silently on the other end of the Plexiglas with a slight slouch. He put his hands in his pockets and smirked, chuckling quietly. After several moments of him just silently staring down Roy and BennyMD, he eventually began pacing around the chamber, until he came across a switch.

KEVIN: And now, for the instructions to my fun little game.
Slowly, he flipped open the cover to the switch and punched the button without hesitation. Kevin looked back up at the both of them and smirked once more, with the same devious smile he had shown before.

KEVIN: That door Roy is standing next to is about to swing open, so if I were you, I’d move.
Roy jogged to a safe location away from the door, and then it hit him…

ROY: How do you know me? You just called me by name.

KEVIN: I know all of you. [Kevin laughs] Every single one of you was sent here for a reason. My mother sent you here.
The door swung open and an alarm began to sound.

ALARM: Subject escaped. Please lock down cell 48 immediately.

KEVIN: Now here are my instructions, kiddies. Follow them word for word. Don’t question them, either. You’re going to walk out that door, and I’m going to play dumb like you just escaped. You’re going to kill Benjamin Linus, and don’t feel guilty, either, because he’s close to death anyway.

ROY: What does he look like?

KEVIN: Oh, he’s very hard to miss. Do you know what a weasel looks like?
Roy and BennyMD took Kevin’s proposal. They walked out the door and into the vast metal hallway. Strangely, the alarm stopped conveniently when they walked out. BennyMD turned around to ask Kevin one last question.

BENNYMD: Why did you help us?

KEVIN: Because Dharma Corporation is in the way… And you two are the first ones who can help me tear it down.

FLASHBACK #2- BENNYMD
TWO WEEKS BEFORE THE CRASH…

BennyMD sits nervously in the office of his potential boss. For seconds that seemed like hours, the man sitting behind the desk reviewed the Resume, looking for all the possible qualifications. And then, he looked up at BennyMD with a reassuring smile.

???: You’re hired.

BennyMD: Really? Oh, wow! Thank you, Mr. Klebold! When do I start?

MR. KLEBOLD: You can start designing our next game project next Thursday.

BennyMD stood quickly, and shook his bosses’ hand, smiling from ear to ear. He then quietly made his leave, preparing himself for the first day on the job.
The phone in Mr. Klebold’s office rang, and he chuckled, as if the call was planned for right after the interview.

MR. KLEBOLD: Well hello there, Mr. Linus.
Benjamin Linus: Did you recruit him?

MR. KLEBOLD: Of course. You can expect him to drop by in a couple weeks.
Benjamin Linus: Perfect. All according to plan, well done, you’re getting a raise.

MR. KLEBOLD: Thank you, Mr. Linus.


FLASHBACK #3- JIGSAW

Two million dollars… He laughed to himself uncontrollably. This was it, his life was set, and JigSaw didn’t have to work another day in his entire life. This meant everything, he didn’t have to work at his crummy old job anymore, and he could fix up his bucket-on-wheels of a car.

JIGSAW: This is great…!

ONE WEEK BEFORE THE CRASH…

His new house was beautiful; it was massive in scale and he’d never imagined one trip to the corner store would’ve done all of this for him. JigSaw took a tour of his huge house, looking at all the empty rooms. Now came the fun part, the part where he began filling the house with expensive things.

JigSaw did notice something unsettling, though. When he looked out the window from the second floor into the parking lot, he saw a man staring up at him with an odd look in his eyes.

Back to Present

The alarm continued to sound, and the camera overlooking the room that previously contained BennyMD and Roy was losing its signal.

JIGSAW: What?!

JULIET: Your little friends scurried away… Did you plan this?

JIGSAW: How would I have planned this if I’ve been in this room the whole time?

JULIET: Because, you have connections… [Juliet points to the man in the other room] Kevin, Your brother…

JIGSAW: He’s not my brother, I don’t even know him! What’s wrong with you people?!

JULIET: That, JigSaw, is for you to find out on your own… There’s nothing wrong with the Dharma Corporation. We’ve just been through some rough patches. But, this new testing phase will fix these minor errors.

JIGSAW: What testing phase?

JULIET: Don’t worry, you don’t need to know.

JigSaw, in a blind rage, rammed the large table into the wall of Plexiglas. Repeating this action over and over, he noticed that it began to crack slightly. And, he could see Juliet beginning to panic.

JIGSAW: I’m getting out of here even if I have to kill you!
Juliet looked around in a state of unending panic. The door closed behind her, and there was no way out.

JULIET: Ben, you son of a b****!
She began kicking the door, and started screaming at the security camera.

JULIET: Why didn’t you tell him the truth?!


iBOCK’s scenario

The paralysis began wearing off; he felt a heavy tingling, as if his entire body fell asleep while his eyes remained opened. Voices could be heard in the distance, growing louder as the footsteps ensued.

???: We found him!

iBOCK’s vision became hazy, and the faces that he had seen were unfamiliar. The group of unknown people picked him up and began carrying him… He kept fading in and out of a state of chronic shock. He managed to mumble before fading out again.

iBOCK: Where are you taking me?

???: The place you’ve been destined to reach for the past three years.

The rest was a blur for several hours, until he awoke in a cabin, in the middle of nowhere. A woman was sitting next to the bed with a cup of tea in hand.

iBOCK: What’s this?!

The woman looked at him curiously.

???: Confused, I bet?

iBOCK: I was on an island! Where am I now?

???: You’re still on the island, just a different part.

iBOCK looked out the window, and saw all the other cabins, children playing, and everything working together in harmony as if none of the past events happened…. It was as if the plane crash was a figment of his imagination.

iBOCK: Who… are you?

The woman remained silent as she drank her tea and stared at him innocently. She looked around the room before taking a deep breath, and finally spitting out the truth.

PENNY: I’m JigSaw’s mother. I sent you all here.

FADE OUT
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Notes on the serialized simulation adventure:
These past fifteen episodes have helped me improve my writing skill. To be honest, I do not see this simulation adventure ending. In fact, I see this SIM going on for many years, as long as the Vizzed Board remains up.
This simulation adventure relies heavily on the users, and requires interaction/responses from them (that’s what a simulation is). The second season will now be open for more participants, so please, don’t feel hesitant to join in! It’s never too late to join the mystery.
There are frequent references to LOST. Why? Because the very island that this simulation is taking place on is based on the island in the ABC television series, so there are obviously going to be references to the show left and right.
Recent reviews:
This simulation, upon sending to many individuals, has received high praise. Many have stated that it “Stays in the LOST universe while having its own unique touch.”
A fellow author, and family member, Judi Kolenda, has assisted significantly with my writing skills. She has provided so many books for me to read, which will obviously make me have a higher IQ than a raisin (which it WAS indeed about that amount in the 8th grade)…
After writing this past season of the SIM, I hope to bring more mysterious plot elements to the forefront, and I intend to make each new episode weekly, as I have been for basically the entire summer.
Questions? Comments? No, this is not a shampoo bottle, I’m not giving you my phone number. If you do indeed have any queries about the SIM adventure, such as signing up, going on hiatus, or plot points that confused you, feel free to send me a private message at any time. I will get back to you as soon as humanly possible.
Well, it’s been fun! Come by next season which starts September 16th! This thread will be fully open for discussion! Make sure to stop by August 30th for signup night!
Get lost in LOST! All 80+ episodes are available for viewing completely free at http://www.hulu.com/ and make sure to set your calendars for the season premiere in January 2009!
Notes for Wii Browser users: I think it may be possible to watch Hulu on your television with your Wii browser; it depends on your television I guess.
Mini-facts section (some comic relief to ease the tension from the script)
1. The average length of every submitted episode this season was roughly 900 words. So yes, I don’t know when to shut up.
2. Snape Kills Dumbledore.
3. You can only make so many Chuck Norris facts before it gets older than he is.
4. No, I do not write Naruto Fan-fiction. Stop asking me that. How can you write a fan-based fiction off of a series which has basically no plot, which stretches over 300 episodes? You can’t. At least, not without looking like an idiot, anyway.
5. If you checked the song list on my iPOD, you’d probably assume I was bi-polar. Seriously, the genres I have do not have a gray area; I can go from blasting Celldweller to listening to a Riyu Kosaka song in like ten minutes.
6. Jericho is over. Stop crying. b****ing and bringing a massive supply of peanuts to CBS headquarters won’t save it again. You can only pull the ‘Planters Peanut Jesus’ trick once.
7. If any of you were to come to Providence Place Mall with me or anyone for that matter, might I suggest bringing a +49 epic mace, or a gun, or a DVD of Roseanne? All three kill just as fiercely.
8. Myspace is a magical land of 11 year-old girls taking pictures of themselves at a retarded angle, flaunting how they look after just finding their mother’s stash of expensive makeup.
9. Good luck finding a Barnes&Noble bookstore in Rhode Island. I seriously had to kill a b**** to find one. (well, I had to look for 3 weeks, that’s my equivalent to killing a b****)
10. I’m not a funny person, so stop your false laughter please or I swear I’ll make you play Virtual Boy for 12 hours straight. *has an idea* wow, that’d be a great torture device in saw MCLXIVT!
11. FYE… You have delicious candy… But you should sort of sell them at retail price, especially when the NAME of the candy is “100 YEN” which means it’s about $1 USD, not 12.
12. The tuition of St. Leo the Great school, before ultimately closing, skyrocketed to one entire full gallon of gas. I know, it got THAT high in cost to have your 5 year-old become a super mega bible man.
13. Did any of these facts make you chuckle a little? If so, you’ve got a very twisted sense of humor. The list isn’t done yet, I was just checking up on you, wondering if any of these made you laugh, or if any of them made your sanity drop a few ticks.
14. Vizzed Board has been up for how long? Let’s make it stay up for another 10 years, please! Please!!! Please? Oh, c’mon, it’s a fun website…
15. Two things I learned about the Wii? They’re about as easy to find as a tiny shred of paper hidden SOMEWHERE in the entire universe, and it inhales battery life faster than Neopets eats little children.
16. The Red Ring of Death is Microsoft’s digital way of giving you a giant middle finger. In fact, they should make that an achievement: Get RRoD 5 times, because most of the XBOX 360 community will get it that many freaking times before they finally call Microsoft and cuss them out over the phone.
17. Hot pockets are delicious as long as you aren’t curious as to what the ingredients are. Just eat it, don’t look at the back of the box.
18. If one more American kid shouts ‘FREE TIBET!’ in the middle of the street, I’m going to hit them repeatedly in the face with a Chinese history book, and then I’m going to give them a 1-way ticket to Tibet.
19. I remember when I used to buy legos… God, I could’ve used that money for college instead of ‘The Harry Potter Limited Edition Wizard Set’… But it just had such an enticing name!
20. Age may just be a number, but that’s kind of a line Pedophiles often use to speak with “10 year old girls” from the executive offices of Dateline NBC’s: To Catch a Predator.
21. If I fail French class this year, I’m just going to blame Windows Vista.
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That is a very long read

I know, the season finale is 1,800+ words, and then it's 1,100+ words of explanations and notes. Not really a big deal XD.

Next season will be 10 episodes, and will start September 16th. Anyone wanting to sign up can sign up right now! It's encouraged, we need more cast members to make the story grow!

*Signs.*

We have a new cast member joining: Ziggy!

This is gonna get good!

Ziggy's joining?
o.o?

Originally posted by BennyMD4123

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Ziggy's joining?
o.o?

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Yeah, he's scheduled to join in season 2. I am waiting for a response from another few members.

this is gonna be fun

I hope it'll be fun for you guys besides, it's a decent read and the interactivity makes the story completely up to all you guys.

Hey, It's better than anything CC does >.>

Originally posted by BennyMD4123

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Hey, It's better than anything CC does >.>

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I know, CC has been down in the gutter lately.


I wonder if anyone else is going to join the sim in September... They'd better sign up by August 30th because that's the cutoff date for cast members joining.

who else have you pm'd?

Originally posted by ziggy

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who else have you pm'd?

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I PMed BB85, I think Vash, and I am going to PM Icewave about it.