Okay I'm just gonna get this out of the way before I start the review...THIS GAME SUCKS...REALLY BADDLY...

Graphics: Well...To be fair, the graphics look pretty nice for a NES game. The sprites look decent and you can tell what's going on most of the time... so yeah... thumbs up

Sound: The sounds and music SUCK even for an NES game!, It sounds like something you would hear if you were on a Atari 2600!, And the constantly looping music would make your ears VOMIT!.

Addictiveness: Nothing to say here. 

Story: The story is that your Jekyll trying to get to his wedding while dodging all of the angry towns folk... AND THATS IT!.

Depth: Depth?, What depth?.

Difficulty: My god is this game HARD!. LITTERALLY EVERYTHING WILL TRY TO KILL YOU, towns people will charge at you for some unknown reason, Dogs and cats will constantly harass you, and the bombs...OH THE BOMBS ARE THE MOST annoying things in the whole GAME, When you get hit by them, you fly backwards, and the range of the bombs are just AGGERVATING, like you could be standing a mile away and the bombs will still hit you!.

I think the title is a bit much, but yeah, this is a really odd game about... walking slowly, while apparently dodging your towns citizens. The Mr. Hyde parts aren't bad, but the game wants you to get further as boring Dr. J than as Hyde - if you let Hyde get too far, instant game over.  I'd try and write more to critique, this is more like small rant.

Compared to a great NES game like Bionic Commando, this game is definitely bottom rung.

   Besides pretty much just rewording the AVGN at some parts you did a pretty good job. It looks like you kind of just watched his video and just took the information you gained from that to make your review. Just look at the addictiveness category. It is blank, if you actually played it might be able to tell us something about it. The other thing I will point out is the difficulty section. The difficulty section you would also need to play to know. You put something down but it is mostly just rewording of the AVGN video about the game. " like you could be standing a mile away and the bombs will still hit you!." The AVGN almost said that exact thing in his video. Almost the whole difficulty section is like this. Please do not just watch a video and reword it to make it seem like you actually played the game.

Sorry if it sounds kind of mean but that is what it looks like you did:

Interesting review of an old game, it could be better however. Try to organize it better next time and put the scores next to the titles. 

For instance:

* Graphics: (explanation)

could be turned into 

* Graphics (score): (explanation)

Other than that please do not try to plagiarize AVGN, but other than that the review is alright.  

Your reviews are definitely improving with time. If you want to learn to make them better. try reading some more reviews that are highly-rated on this site. I can give more specific advice on this particular review, though...as has already been pointed out, you brought up some of the same points as the Angry Video Game Nerd, which is something you should avoid. Even if the points that he brings up are perfectly valid (and they absolutely are in this case), try to add more observations that aren't from his videos.

You could also use a lot more detail...everything written before the "Difficulty" section has only one or maybe two sentences devoted to explaining what's good or bad about it. You clearly did make an effort to explain what was good or bad about the graphics and sound, but a little bit more effort could have been made. If you think the graphics look decent for the NES, why not bring up more good points about them, such as the fact that they actually change quite a lot between Jekyll and Hyde's perspectives? The "Addictiveness" and "Depth" sections were also completely unnecessary, since you had absolutely nothing to say about either one.

I know this is a really long post, but I hope you'll listen and learn from the mistakes you've made. You've got a basic grasp on categories and reasoning, but you need a lot more work.