Hm... Since you asked for constructive criticism, here goes...

First, as many people have mentioned, nice background! I actually spent quite some time looking at that, during the second time I viewed the video. This is mainly because...

As many people have also mentioned, please minimize the swaying. lol I know it's a bit difficult, but I found myself getting a bit distracted just looking at your movements, and that's not what I should be distracted by *cough what EX Palen said XD cough.* It got to the point where I missed half of the video before I realized what you were even saying, sorry. >< In essence, I had to rewatch the entire video (and stop looking at your moving figure) to figure out what you were saying. =/ Otherwise, you look polished and ready for the camera. Good job with the suit and tie! Looking good is half the battle.

Finally, when evaluating the content of your video, it might sound strange but you might want to consider rehearsing your lines before presenting them, even in front of a camera. It's the trend to just wing it, yes, but if presenting your thoughts in a concise and orderly manner doesn't come naturally to you, you will need to practice the speech over and over until it does. In trying to figure out the point of your video, I found that there were only 3 main points, but it took over 2 minutes to present it all. With half of that time, you could probably have presented more details and content to wow the viewers. I don't know how professional you want to become with your videos, but we have a little game we used to play in class that could help overcome the "fillers." The rules are simple: you may not say "hm, um, er, uh..., like, you know," and other similar “filler” words when you talk about a random topic for over 1 minute. (You might personally have to avoid using "apparently" and "obviously." ^^0 ) You are, however, allowed to pause for effect (just don't say anything for a moment). This game is actually more difficult than most people realize, but I think it will really show you what you need to work on for your presentations.

The 3 main points of your video, as I interpreted them:

1. You were presenting an article. Apparently, Reddit's already got leaks on there about a game (and you gave examples of the sources of the leaks, e.g. the retailer).
2. Avoid Reddit, because you can't avoid the leaks if you don't.
3. You have no opinion ("sounds about like Reddit"). When I heard that, I started wondering, if you have no opinion, then what's the point of this video again? oO Most people tend to present an opinion in their videos, even if they just agree with Reddit. They will also state that to be their opinion, and won't just say, "I don't have an opinion," because it won't make much sense and might confuse your viewers. Some of your viewers will begin to think, "Wait, I thought you said you had no opinion, but now you're saying it's like Reddit's...?"

I hope you don't think that I've been overly critical of your first video, it's just that I see so much potential for growth. If you try out some of our suggestions, I'm sure you'll be well on your way to making truly professional videos in no time. (Nice fade out effect, too.) ^^ Overall, for a first video, it was pretty good, can't wait to see more from you!