well there is not much say  there is super mario world in this game you play mario or luigi and try to clear all levels you can get yoshis and mushrooms and 1 up mushrooms and you can also make some invisible blocks visible by clearing lets say the left levels of the 1st world and also get to secret like stars next game is super mario bros 3 in this game you can also play as mario or luigi there is many bonuses in this game like mini games or gifts and also a hidden flute in the first castle (mini castle) you must get a leaf first to get it and the more worlds you clear with the flute the more distance you can travel by using it so i would go to world 3 or 4 and then use it to get to world 5 or 6 then we have super mario bros 2 my favorite in this game you can lift some of your enemies and throw them at another one and you can also get something by pulling up some grass there is also a door potion which spawns a door to another place so best game ever there is also super mario bros which was the first mario game the good thing in this game is there is a cool secret in the 2nd level try to look around in that level and maybe you can find it well there is one mario game in this which i do not know about and that is super mario the lost levels and also one more thing if you want to know more about the secrets then tell me enjoy the games   

Good details and length but...grammar grammar grammar. Caps those I's and put a period on the end of the sentence.

lilythetigerkity : thanks for the tip I will try to remember

Nice try for your first review!

You talk a lot about what's in the game and its "secrets" for your entire review, so perhaps next time it would be better making a game discussion thread or a strategy guide instead if you want to delve into those aspects of the game.

A review, on the other hand, is about persuading us that how you feel about the game is right. You say whether you liked it or not, and you tell us why. That means that you might delve into the graphics, music, or a cohort of different things. This thread is a particularly good read on how to write a quality review.

Please ask if any of this doesn't make sense or you have any questions about what I just said, it's a lot of information.

Anyway, hope to see you keep reviewing and improving!

EideticMemory : so you mean that a review is to explain how graphics music or to tell how good the game was? 

jakob12341 : Sort of. You seem willing to learn, so I'm definitely willing to explain.

You know personally whether you liked a game or not. A review is you saying that, except that itself not enough for us to believe you. You also need to provide evidence (reasons) for why you liked it. Talking about the quality of the Graphics or whether the Music fit the game are aspects that you can use to make your point. But there are many ways, so you'll see reviewers explore many different aspects of the game. Most stick with the ones that you have to rate for the game (graphics, music, addictiveness, difficulty), but you're not limited to that.

The best way for you to understand is to read other reviews.

Here's one of Eirinn's and one of Sonicthehedgehog47's. For kicks, here's one of mine.

All three of our reviews had one thing in common, we analyzed aspects of the games and used that to support whether we liked / disliked the games themselves.

Does that make sense?

EideticMemory : okay thanks for telling me I just don't know if it will be a good idea to make reviews if it is that difficult

jakob12341 : Naw, man. It might seem difficult at first, but it's not.

Now I definitely think I was making it sound too complex, so let me simplify it.

All you have to do in a review is say whether you like a game or not and explain why. Simple as that.

Once you get that down, you can try looking at my previous advice again. I didn't mean to make it sound more difficult than it is, but perhaps I did. >.<

Hope that clears things up and shows why this wasn't exactly a review.

EideticMemory : so it can be short or does it has to be long? (the review)

It was good the next time you make a review don't forget to put period at the end of your sentences and you should spread it out more.

TheReaper7290 : you mean these ....?