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The Three Fangs- Chapter 1 'A robot trained by a wizard!?'
This is based on a old Action figure series I made. Not gonna upload those. But i thought it was good to make a story of.
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04-21-14 02:49 PM
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It's early in the morning. A wizard who lived underground was up. He was busy with something. Nobody knew....... He had all kinds of equipment. He was not a wizard like most people know them. He was a man Who excelled at Technology and.... Martial Arts. Not only was he the best martial artist in all of Zuragia he was a kind man. He was building a robot!


The reason he was building the robot was because he felt lonely. He lost his Wife and daughter and lived Under the ground.


The year was 1567. While things like Willem Van Oranje and other historic things happened on earth. Zuragia ( A country in the planet of Zanenda) was in a war with Zwoola.No one could get outside. You would get killed.

Weeks..... Months......Years were gone in the war. It was a war that was going for more then 100 years......

But the wizard who's name was Magic-o was not giving up hope....

10 Years later: The robot was finally ALIVE!!!

Magic-o Was excited. He never had to be lonely again.... He had a friend... But Magic-o said to himself.... I'll be his father..... I will prove that I'm a good father! I could not have done anything about the death of.... No don't think about that.

Under the wired filled bed a White robot stood up.


Magic-o Said... Now only to put in the settings
Bang bang....... The robot said his first words..... Bleep Bleep.

Magic-o was surpised and said... I thought you could speak english.... BOOM

Magic-o- Oh wait... Gotta reconfigure.. There we go. The robot was 10 years old. He was this old because of all the years in the lab.


This time The robot said his second words: Thank you so much.

Magic-o was touched and said NO thank you....


Magic-o said: This is what i always wanted to do with my child.... Do you want me to train you in martial arts?


The robot said Master Yes i do

Magic-o replied Thank you so very much. But don't call me master... call me Papa RoboFang! Yes that is you're name... RoboFang.

RoboFang- Papa.... that is A....... MAGICAL NAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Magic-O- YES!!!! I DON'T CARE IF IT'S WAR....... I WILL NOT CARE IF IT NEVER ENDS..... BECAUSE YOU ARE WITH ME!!!!!!!!! THANK SHAIZA. Shaiza was the god of love in the country of zuragia.


They went to a special training room Which Magic-o made a long time ago while praying to Shaiza.

They trained for hours... Both loving it. But none as much as Magic-o. This was his dream. It was a dream coming true.

They trained every day. Magic-o always asked RoboFang if he wanted to train. Robo always said yes. HA HU DADA!

1 year had passed like this. Until. the army found out about the underground house. The house where magic-o and robofang lived.

What will happen! Find out in the next exciting chapter of the Three Fangs!!









It's early in the morning. A wizard who lived underground was up. He was busy with something. Nobody knew....... He had all kinds of equipment. He was not a wizard like most people know them. He was a man Who excelled at Technology and.... Martial Arts. Not only was he the best martial artist in all of Zuragia he was a kind man. He was building a robot!


The reason he was building the robot was because he felt lonely. He lost his Wife and daughter and lived Under the ground.


The year was 1567. While things like Willem Van Oranje and other historic things happened on earth. Zuragia ( A country in the planet of Zanenda) was in a war with Zwoola.No one could get outside. You would get killed.

Weeks..... Months......Years were gone in the war. It was a war that was going for more then 100 years......

But the wizard who's name was Magic-o was not giving up hope....

10 Years later: The robot was finally ALIVE!!!

Magic-o Was excited. He never had to be lonely again.... He had a friend... But Magic-o said to himself.... I'll be his father..... I will prove that I'm a good father! I could not have done anything about the death of.... No don't think about that.

Under the wired filled bed a White robot stood up.


Magic-o Said... Now only to put in the settings
Bang bang....... The robot said his first words..... Bleep Bleep.

Magic-o was surpised and said... I thought you could speak english.... BOOM

Magic-o- Oh wait... Gotta reconfigure.. There we go. The robot was 10 years old. He was this old because of all the years in the lab.


This time The robot said his second words: Thank you so much.

Magic-o was touched and said NO thank you....


Magic-o said: This is what i always wanted to do with my child.... Do you want me to train you in martial arts?


The robot said Master Yes i do

Magic-o replied Thank you so very much. But don't call me master... call me Papa RoboFang! Yes that is you're name... RoboFang.

RoboFang- Papa.... that is A....... MAGICAL NAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Magic-O- YES!!!! I DON'T CARE IF IT'S WAR....... I WILL NOT CARE IF IT NEVER ENDS..... BECAUSE YOU ARE WITH ME!!!!!!!!! THANK SHAIZA. Shaiza was the god of love in the country of zuragia.


They went to a special training room Which Magic-o made a long time ago while praying to Shaiza.

They trained for hours... Both loving it. But none as much as Magic-o. This was his dream. It was a dream coming true.

They trained every day. Magic-o always asked RoboFang if he wanted to train. Robo always said yes. HA HU DADA!

1 year had passed like this. Until. the army found out about the underground house. The house where magic-o and robofang lived.

What will happen! Find out in the next exciting chapter of the Three Fangs!!









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imamonster : oh no the army has found magic-o and robfang! will they survive? I hope not XD! well great chapter monster! another new series you're making huh? it's great i'll look forward for it!
imamonster : oh no the army has found magic-o and robfang! will they survive? I hope not XD! well great chapter monster! another new series you're making huh? it's great i'll look forward for it!
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This story is very good but try making the dialog work better. Also you did not follow one of the rules listed here.
 
 
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This story is very good but try making the dialog work better. Also you did not follow one of the rules listed here.
 
 
 https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=74472
 
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awesomeguy279 :  i forgot about that rule. I told the Local mods. And also thanks a lot!
awesomeguy279 :  i forgot about that rule. I told the Local mods. And also thanks a lot!
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Now I have myself another story to follow. xD I'm interested in seeing where this one goes. I'll certainly keep an eye out for more.
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Now I have myself another story to follow. xD I'm interested in seeing where this one goes. I'll certainly keep an eye out for more.
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Eirinn : I know right? Thanks for commenting on my story.

Fun fact: This story was based on a action figure series i made. That was a lot less story driven.
Eirinn : I know right? Thanks for commenting on my story.

Fun fact: This story was based on a action figure series i made. That was a lot less story driven.
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