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Revenge of the Stars- Part 2!
01-26-14 08:28 PM
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So most of you know that my story before Revenge of the Stars was the first story I made in years so there is many parts that your like what?? Or have questions. I left out some of the details which is understandable considering I just need pratice. I had a question from somebody that said, what did Henry get out of scamming Rebecca and her friend's? Bascially he got a lot of money out of it from a so called Stalker that Rebecca has.. which will be told in this next story added, with a lot more detail and explaining HOPEFULLY! HAHA.. Bare with me again! Be warned because this part 2 is completely different than the first thing I wrote it is a different story about Rebecca concerning her stalker. Revenge of the Stars : Part 2 After all that happened to her the year before concerning henry and his crazy scams, Rebecca has gained fame, money and happiness. Her birthday was coming up in November and it was only July at the time but little did she know that she had some suprises from her crazy stalker who was hiding behind the scenes of the crime. July 22, today was the first annuel actress award and Rebecca was so excited because not only did she play roles in her movie called Revenge of The Stars, which was rated as a true story, but she also gained her own TV show! The Tv show was called ROTS The Infamous Actress! She had been playing a true role about her life but there were many parts in her role that were made up and added to the shows that she was in. She knew that she had fans but she didn't really think about who could be watching it. She was so excited because tonight was the night that she was hoping to recieve the best actress award, so she put on her best dress and makeup and her parents and headed off to the award cermony! She finally arrived to it and a bunch of fans were there screaming wanting her autograph and she was so stoked to see that she had so many fans. It was an awesome experince for her. She signed quite a few autographs before she headed into the entrence of the ceremony. She was placed in the front row of the seats along with her parents. There was still an hour left before the ceremony began and her old 3 sister pals came running down the stairs to greet her at her seat! She was so happy to see them. It had already been like 2 months since the last time she saw them! She found out that they had also gained spots as singers in the couple of months that they were apart and would also be recieving rewards! The annoucer put on the speakers and said, " Five minutes before show, please take your seats and be prepared for an awesome ceremony!" Rebecca and her friends were so excited and their parents were looking down on them so very proud and happy for what they had accomplished thus far! Richard Star the amazing host from rising from the stars came upon the stage and said " Welcome one and all to the best Actress and singer awards for 2000!" First off I will go ahead and tell you there is only 10 awards in place for tonight. 1st - 5th place for best singer and 1st - 5th place for best actress! "Let's Begin" He shouted! All the names were called and two of the 3 sisters had already earned 2nd and 3rd place for best singer award. "Many girls had already won best actress award so there was only 2 more awards. One for best singer and one for best actress! Who shall recieve them? We will see in the next few minutes!" , said host Richard Star! Rebecca and "Amy" the oldest of the 3 sisters were so nervous and worried that they might not recieve 1st place for what they had worked so hard for. A few minutes had passed and Richard Star gave a congratulations to both Amy and Rebecca! Rebecca for best actress and Amy for best Singer! They were so excited they recieved their rewards and were off to go back home. They were also stoked and excited for what would happen the year to come. Little did they know that they had a stalker who watched their every move and has from the beginning.. really the only person he wanted was Rebecca and was going to go after Amy next time. Rebecca had made it home safe and sound and told her parents how much she loved them and headed off to bed. The next morning she woke up and decided that it was about time that she applied for college! She had already been planning a while to go to college but her fame and work that she had put into her talent was taking up all the time that she wished she would have put towards college but knew this was for the best! Her parents told her that they approved her moving to Harvard, the best college on the map for Rebecca to go to. Some would ask well what about her fame? Will people be following her around and bugging her at this college with papparatzi and other people bothering her? No they won't be because this college is a special made college for actresses and people of fame and glory. It is called Harvard but it's the 2nd harvard for the rich and famous. Rebecca sent in her application to apply for the college. About 2 weeks had went by and she recieved a letter in the mail! She was so excited that her socks were about to fall off. She opened the letter and it gave her all the info about the collage and said you have been approved for Harvard College of fame and glory! Welcome to your new home! She was so excited she would now be living at a new place by herself. She decided that she wanted to go learn about being a nurse and get an actual degree in nursing. It would take alot of time and hard work but she knew that she could do it and just had to be patient. She had her bags packed and ready to go on September 1st. She had to arrive at the school on September the 7th to actually get settled in her place on campus and get her classes memorized. She finally arrived at Harvard.. after a LONG flight. She was exhausted. It was the 6th of September. She had arrived a bit early so she had plenty of time to get things in order and get a bit of She was in coed dorms and was already nervous about who her roommate was going to be. She awoke only to find that there was a mysterious guy in her room sitting at the desk on his laptop playing a cool online game. She said, " Um.. Hi I'm Rebecca" ! You must be my new roommate? He kind of stumbled over his words and said, " Um.. yyy.. Yes! My name is Peter, It's nice to meet you! She said, It's nice to meet you to! Looks like we have the rest of the summer to spend together!? He sat there and kind of muttered yes, I suppose. Things were okay for the next couple of week's she went to her classes and she was passing all of them with flying colors. Peter always sat next to her in most of the classes and they seemed to grow quite close to each other. Time passed and Peter started to get weird around Rebecca.. he would follow her around everywhere.. and when I say everywhere I mean everywhere. There wasn't a place that she didn't look and he wasn't there. Rebecca started to get kind of nervous because she wondered why it seemed he was following her all the time. She also always kept her cell phone in her room because she didn't want to get caught in class texting or anything. She knew that would of been a definant 0 on her test. She got home to check her messages and she didn't recieve any.. she was worried because her parents promised her that they would call and leave her a message on how their trip to Hawii was going. Rebecca tried to call them back but didn't get a answer. The thing about it was that Peter was on her phone the night before and set herself as invisable so whoever she called it appeared as a unknown name and number and of course Rebecca's parents NEVER answer calls like that just because of the scams that took place the year before in their life. It was pretty scary for her since she didn't know what was going on.. and she was already weirded out by Peter. She started recieving weird gifts at her door.. things like broken glass dolls.. dead flowers and she even recieved some kind of dress. She was really freaked out now.. and all the letters from the gifts said. I know where you live and I'm watching you. I love you please come out from your dreadful hole and save me. Which was a pretty confusing and creepy message. She then went and reported it to the school security. They said things like this happen all the time it's nothing you should worry about young lady. She looked up at him and said okay but what do I do if I keep recieving these things.. I am being stalked if you haven't already noticed sir. He replied to her and said, I'm sure it's just some fan who really likes your acting. I'm sure it's nothing to worry about. She said Okay and walked on back to her dorm. Things were okay for the next week but after that week she started recieving strange phone calls. They were scary phone calls so she rushed to the police since the security guard wouldn't help her and her parents weren't answering the phone. The funny thing about it was the police traced the number and apparently Peter wasn't very smart because it traced right back to his cell phone. Most stalkers you would think would be a lot smarter than this but in Rebecca's amazing luck she was spared the extra trouble that a normal human being in real life would of caused her. The cops checked her phone and let her know that it was set to invisable.. and she was like what? How could this happen? The cop repied to her and asked her if she left her phone in her dorm most of the time and of course she did so she repied with yes. He said, well then since Peter was your roommate that was probably a pretty easy way for him to keep you excluded from your parents by messing with the settings in your phone so they wouldn't answer when you called. She felt so horrible.. because once again all this depression had come upon her again because of the horrible things that keep happening to her. Peter was sentenced to life in prison with no possibility for parol but not for what he had done to Rebecca. The cops had been doing some research and investagations on some murders taken place back in Virginia and were just looking for a match to the face of the killer. The truth was Peter was a sicko and a murderer. His next victem was going to be Rebecca but since he wasn't as smart as he thought he was and made a VERY simple yet dumb mistake, he will now pay for it in prision for life. Rebecca had a longgg month and had finally got ahold of her parents to let them know what was going on.. they were already worried sick because she hadn't called and they said they were on their way to see her. They finally arrived to Harvard school to take her home for a couple of weeks and have her Birthday Party which was November 1st. She was so excited yet so sad about all the things she had to go through the past year with the scams and the stalker. Many things are going to happen in Rebecca's life next time but who know's what? I guess we will see Next time on the story of Revenge of the Stars! This story was the second one I wrote in a while so if you have questions or concerns about details that I may have left out or something that didn't make sense let me know so I can reply to you in the next story. Everyone has to start somewhere.. By the way some things in this story are not realistic many details were left out due to young readers.. I hope you understand. Thank you for reading until next time. Bintsy years so there is many parts that your like what?? Or have questions. I left out some of the details which is understandable considering I just need pratice. I had a question from somebody that said, what did Henry get out of scamming Rebecca and her friend's? Bascially he got a lot of money out of it from a so called Stalker that Rebecca has.. which will be told in this next story added, with a lot more detail and explaining HOPEFULLY! HAHA.. Bare with me again! Be warned because this part 2 is completely different than the first thing I wrote it is a different story about Rebecca concerning her stalker. Revenge of the Stars : Part 2 After all that happened to her the year before concerning henry and his crazy scams, Rebecca has gained fame, money and happiness. Her birthday was coming up in November and it was only July at the time but little did she know that she had some suprises from her crazy stalker who was hiding behind the scenes of the crime. July 22, today was the first annuel actress award and Rebecca was so excited because not only did she play roles in her movie called Revenge of The Stars, which was rated as a true story, but she also gained her own TV show! The Tv show was called ROTS The Infamous Actress! She had been playing a true role about her life but there were many parts in her role that were made up and added to the shows that she was in. She knew that she had fans but she didn't really think about who could be watching it. She was so excited because tonight was the night that she was hoping to recieve the best actress award, so she put on her best dress and makeup and her parents and headed off to the award cermony! She finally arrived to it and a bunch of fans were there screaming wanting her autograph and she was so stoked to see that she had so many fans. It was an awesome experince for her. She signed quite a few autographs before she headed into the entrence of the ceremony. She was placed in the front row of the seats along with her parents. There was still an hour left before the ceremony began and her old 3 sister pals came running down the stairs to greet her at her seat! She was so happy to see them. It had already been like 2 months since the last time she saw them! She found out that they had also gained spots as singers in the couple of months that they were apart and would also be recieving rewards! The annoucer put on the speakers and said, " Five minutes before show, please take your seats and be prepared for an awesome ceremony!" Rebecca and her friends were so excited and their parents were looking down on them so very proud and happy for what they had accomplished thus far! Richard Star the amazing host from rising from the stars came upon the stage and said " Welcome one and all to the best Actress and singer awards for 2000!" First off I will go ahead and tell you there is only 10 awards in place for tonight. 1st - 5th place for best singer and 1st - 5th place for best actress! "Let's Begin" He shouted! All the names were called and two of the 3 sisters had already earned 2nd and 3rd place for best singer award. "Many girls had already won best actress award so there was only 2 more awards. One for best singer and one for best actress! Who shall recieve them? We will see in the next few minutes!" , said host Richard Star! Rebecca and "Amy" the oldest of the 3 sisters were so nervous and worried that they might not recieve 1st place for what they had worked so hard for. A few minutes had passed and Richard Star gave a congratulations to both Amy and Rebecca! Rebecca for best actress and Amy for best Singer! They were so excited they recieved their rewards and were off to go back home. They were also stoked and excited for what would happen the year to come. Little did they know that they had a stalker who watched their every move and has from the beginning.. really the only person he wanted was Rebecca and was going to go after Amy next time. Rebecca had made it home safe and sound and told her parents how much she loved them and headed off to bed. The next morning she woke up and decided that it was about time that she applied for college! She had already been planning a while to go to college but her fame and work that she had put into her talent was taking up all the time that she wished she would have put towards college but knew this was for the best! Her parents told her that they approved her moving to Harvard, the best college on the map for Rebecca to go to. Some would ask well what about her fame? Will people be following her around and bugging her at this college with papparatzi and other people bothering her? No they won't be because this college is a special made college for actresses and people of fame and glory. It is called Harvard but it's the 2nd harvard for the rich and famous. Rebecca sent in her application to apply for the college. About 2 weeks had went by and she recieved a letter in the mail! She was so excited that her socks were about to fall off. She opened the letter and it gave her all the info about the collage and said you have been approved for Harvard College of fame and glory! Welcome to your new home! She was so excited she would now be living at a new place by herself. She decided that she wanted to go learn about being a nurse and get an actual degree in nursing. It would take alot of time and hard work but she knew that she could do it and just had to be patient. She had her bags packed and ready to go on September 1st. She had to arrive at the school on September the 7th to actually get settled in her place on campus and get her classes memorized. She finally arrived at Harvard.. after a LONG flight. She was exhausted. It was the 6th of September. She had arrived a bit early so she had plenty of time to get things in order and get a bit of She was in coed dorms and was already nervous about who her roommate was going to be. She awoke only to find that there was a mysterious guy in her room sitting at the desk on his laptop playing a cool online game. She said, " Um.. Hi I'm Rebecca" ! You must be my new roommate? He kind of stumbled over his words and said, " Um.. yyy.. Yes! My name is Peter, It's nice to meet you! She said, It's nice to meet you to! Looks like we have the rest of the summer to spend together!? He sat there and kind of muttered yes, I suppose. Things were okay for the next couple of week's she went to her classes and she was passing all of them with flying colors. Peter always sat next to her in most of the classes and they seemed to grow quite close to each other. Time passed and Peter started to get weird around Rebecca.. he would follow her around everywhere.. and when I say everywhere I mean everywhere. There wasn't a place that she didn't look and he wasn't there. Rebecca started to get kind of nervous because she wondered why it seemed he was following her all the time. She also always kept her cell phone in her room because she didn't want to get caught in class texting or anything. She knew that would of been a definant 0 on her test. She got home to check her messages and she didn't recieve any.. she was worried because her parents promised her that they would call and leave her a message on how their trip to Hawii was going. Rebecca tried to call them back but didn't get a answer. The thing about it was that Peter was on her phone the night before and set herself as invisable so whoever she called it appeared as a unknown name and number and of course Rebecca's parents NEVER answer calls like that just because of the scams that took place the year before in their life. It was pretty scary for her since she didn't know what was going on.. and she was already weirded out by Peter. She started recieving weird gifts at her door.. things like broken glass dolls.. dead flowers and she even recieved some kind of dress. She was really freaked out now.. and all the letters from the gifts said. I know where you live and I'm watching you. I love you please come out from your dreadful hole and save me. Which was a pretty confusing and creepy message. She then went and reported it to the school security. They said things like this happen all the time it's nothing you should worry about young lady. She looked up at him and said okay but what do I do if I keep recieving these things.. I am being stalked if you haven't already noticed sir. He replied to her and said, I'm sure it's just some fan who really likes your acting. I'm sure it's nothing to worry about. She said Okay and walked on back to her dorm. Things were okay for the next week but after that week she started recieving strange phone calls. They were scary phone calls so she rushed to the police since the security guard wouldn't help her and her parents weren't answering the phone. The funny thing about it was the police traced the number and apparently Peter wasn't very smart because it traced right back to his cell phone. Most stalkers you would think would be a lot smarter than this but in Rebecca's amazing luck she was spared the extra trouble that a normal human being in real life would of caused her. The cops checked her phone and let her know that it was set to invisable.. and she was like what? How could this happen? The cop repied to her and asked her if she left her phone in her dorm most of the time and of course she did so she repied with yes. He said, well then since Peter was your roommate that was probably a pretty easy way for him to keep you excluded from your parents by messing with the settings in your phone so they wouldn't answer when you called. She felt so horrible.. because once again all this depression had come upon her again because of the horrible things that keep happening to her. Peter was sentenced to life in prison with no possibility for parol but not for what he had done to Rebecca. The cops had been doing some research and investagations on some murders taken place back in Virginia and were just looking for a match to the face of the killer. The truth was Peter was a sicko and a murderer. His next victem was going to be Rebecca but since he wasn't as smart as he thought he was and made a VERY simple yet dumb mistake, he will now pay for it in prision for life. Rebecca had a longgg month and had finally got ahold of her parents to let them know what was going on.. they were already worried sick because she hadn't called and they said they were on their way to see her. They finally arrived to Harvard school to take her home for a couple of weeks and have her Birthday Party which was November 1st. She was so excited yet so sad about all the things she had to go through the past year with the scams and the stalker. Many things are going to happen in Rebecca's life next time but who know's what? I guess we will see Next time on the story of Revenge of the Stars! This story was the second one I wrote in a while so if you have questions or concerns about details that I may have left out or something that didn't make sense let me know so I can reply to you in the next story. Everyone has to start somewhere.. By the way some things in this story are not realistic many details were left out due to young readers.. I hope you understand. Thank you for reading until next time. Bintsy |
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