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My Story - Chapter Nine

 

10-06-13 07:58 PM
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It's story time! Yay stories! This is chapter nine of my story. Enjoy!

CHAPTER 9

I couldn't believe it. We had already lost someone. "No." I said. "He is not gone. I won't let him die." I stayed with him for hours. I did whatever I could. I gave him CPR, I dumped cold water on his head, I even smacked him and yelled at him to wake up. Nothing worked. He was gone.

Now that Divine Aurora was out of the Base and he had no memory of our plans, we started our rescue discussion again. "Ok so we I talk the guards into letting us in" Matthew2321 said. "Right. Then I serve as bait and distract the other guards and fly away if they get too close to me." said Eirinn. "Then I sneak into the technology room and disable all of the security cameras and take control over all of the electronics." said TornadoMudkip. "And after that I go in invisibly to make sure that the everything is good to go." said Eniitan. "And then the rest of us go in and save the good Things." goodboy said. "But how do we know who is good and who is bad?" I asked. "Easy." goodboy said. "If they attack us, they are bad. If they help us, they are good. If they don't do anything, just leave them. There are also a few Things that escaped. That managed to get out. But were captured again. I will let you know if I see them."

So we got ready for our invasion. Everyone was nervous, but determined. A successful rescue mission would benefit us greatly. But a failure would destroy us. We couldn't fail, or it's game over.

Well that is it for that chapter! I made it short on purpose. Hope you liked it. Ready for the invasion?

goodboy :
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B619ook : Even though you are dead you are still mentioned in this chapter.
Eirinn :
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It's story time! Yay stories! This is chapter nine of my story. Enjoy!

CHAPTER 9

I couldn't believe it. We had already lost someone. "No." I said. "He is not gone. I won't let him die." I stayed with him for hours. I did whatever I could. I gave him CPR, I dumped cold water on his head, I even smacked him and yelled at him to wake up. Nothing worked. He was gone.

Now that Divine Aurora was out of the Base and he had no memory of our plans, we started our rescue discussion again. "Ok so we I talk the guards into letting us in" Matthew2321 said. "Right. Then I serve as bait and distract the other guards and fly away if they get too close to me." said Eirinn. "Then I sneak into the technology room and disable all of the security cameras and take control over all of the electronics." said TornadoMudkip. "And after that I go in invisibly to make sure that the everything is good to go." said Eniitan. "And then the rest of us go in and save the good Things." goodboy said. "But how do we know who is good and who is bad?" I asked. "Easy." goodboy said. "If they attack us, they are bad. If they help us, they are good. If they don't do anything, just leave them. There are also a few Things that escaped. That managed to get out. But were captured again. I will let you know if I see them."

So we got ready for our invasion. Everyone was nervous, but determined. A successful rescue mission would benefit us greatly. But a failure would destroy us. We couldn't fail, or it's game over.

Well that is it for that chapter! I made it short on purpose. Hope you liked it. Ready for the invasion?

goodboy :
Matthew2321 :
B619ook : Even though you are dead you are still mentioned in this chapter.
Eirinn :
TornadoMudkip :
Eniitan :
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I wonder if Divine Aurora had a failsafe in case this very thing happened.  I bet there's some sort of plot still brewing beneath the surface.  Maybe not, but hmm...*Pulls out a magnifying glass and dons a cap to look like Sherlock Holmes*
I wonder if Divine Aurora had a failsafe in case this very thing happened.  I bet there's some sort of plot still brewing beneath the surface.  Maybe not, but hmm...*Pulls out a magnifying glass and dons a cap to look like Sherlock Holmes*
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tgags123 : What exactly is this? have you been working on sort of story with other members having apperances in it? That sounds like a cool idea. Good luck with the rest.
tgags123 : What exactly is this? have you been working on sort of story with other members having apperances in it? That sounds like a cool idea. Good luck with the rest.
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zanderlex : Yeah. You would have understood it if you read chapters 1 through 8.
zanderlex : Yeah. You would have understood it if you read chapters 1 through 8.
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tgags123 : Oh No! The Layout! I can't stop looking at it!!!
I shall read every chapter of this story and tell you what I think about it. So far, I give this chapter that I don't know anything about an 8/10.
tgags123 : Oh No! The Layout! I can't stop looking at it!!!
I shall read every chapter of this story and tell you what I think about it. So far, I give this chapter that I don't know anything about an 8/10.
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