Ah super Mario 64 the best game you can imagine you buy a Nintendo 64 this is the first game you will buy I guarantee it the story is bowser kidnapped the princess like always but theres a twist to this 3D roaming world he uses power stars the are much more powerful its up to you  to find the princess and beat the game on your adventure you will see alot of secrets and power ups you can go near water falls and dont worry when you beat the game the experience does not end there are more secrets like all the challenges and alot more like a 3D appearance of yoshi this game is very kid freindly for a retro game you might find 5 year olds playing it i used to play it as a baby so if you have a kid and he loves mario put em in the computer seat and start this up or just hook up your old N64 either way it is very nice for kids well thats all i might do some hack reviews bye

I know its a great game, I'm so hardcore that I got an actual cartridge for my n64

Nice improvement in your reviews already. Keep it up, man. Remember: detail is a reviewers best friend (cheesey, I know). And categorization would be great too. That said, good work so far! Keep it up!

Eirinn : What did you like about this review?
shanezer :

This review needs a lot of work. Honestly It's not a "review" he gave little details about the game and the entire thing is a huge block of text with no punctuation or grammar.

In the future you need to go into depth as to what you liked about the game and what you didn't like. This reads more like a story summary than it does a review.

Jordanv78 : It was an improvement over the last one he posted. I was applauding the improvement while encouraging him to keep it up. I figure positive feedback is also important in a critique. True that it needs more work, but slow and steady wins the race, no? As you said, it does need more work and categorization. I tried to communicate that as well, though if I failed to do so, I apologize to shanezer for the poor guidance.

Not bad, man. Not my style, but keep up the good work. Next time, use proper grammar.

Eirinn : OH I understand what you are saying, I just wanted your feedback more than anything. I'm sorry if my last post came off differently.

Jordanv78 : Oh no worries. I actually thought it was more of a correction, but you have much more time logged here than I, so as far as I'm concerned, you have every right to. Feel free to, if you ever see me needing it.

should i quit reviewing?

shanezer : Dont quit your getting better  Some possible tips  i can give. You see those categories on the top of the reviewing page  try using them and talk about what you like about the Graphics.Sound. Explain how you find the game Addicting  Story Tell the main storyline of the game and rate it but dont rate it if theres not a storyline. Depth Give some readers how long a game is and how much it offers. Difficulty How Difficult the game can be for you.  When your talking about these categories add some explanations to back up your detail and information. Feel free to pm me if you need any help

Honestly I wouldn't call Super Mario 64 ... as you put it... the best game ever.
It may have been a great game but just saying its the best game ever just doesn't justify the statement.
Good review anyway

shanezer : Great review , I would like to say that this game is the best game ever , its the best game in the history of all game ever made and Super Mario 64 was my first mario game.

thanks supercool22 i hope you have a  nice life

Nice review, but I would have preferred you made it longer. I don't really care too much, but whatever. Anyways, I've played Super Mario 64 on my Nintendo 64 before, and it's a really good game. I agree with what you said about this being the "best game ever," as it's a fairly long Mario game, provides lots of challenge, and, of course, has really awesome glitches. If I were to pick a favorite Mario game, it would either be Super Mario 64 or Super Mario Galaxy 2.
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