05-06-17 01:43 PM

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From knowing the the start of the Big Bang
Until the present day with technology, violence and expensive cars
I have noticed something unusual:
Why are we all living so cruel and harsh?

There is not even a single person
who says something like "Hi, nice to meet you! Want to be friends?"
Nope, they just fight each other until they're dead
and that would be where their life ends

Most people steal valuable to useless stuff,
"might sell them immediately", they think
And the police solves murder cases and doesn't check the market meanwhile...
Now how deep can we sink?

Humanity can be really foolish
But not everyone is this way, to make things better
Some people donate money to save others
They'll eventually send money with a letter

Some people are really generous
and give away money and food
Others are bullying the innocent
and "are cool" by being rude

We can only watch how we kill each other
It's so useless and not needed
But as long as those who are positive are alive,
we all will remain undefeated

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06-07-17 07:38 PM

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Well done poem, short and to the point! I think many people's written works now are based on the way our human nature has become. The book I just read (the 2nd book in the NERDS series) seems to revolve around that concept too.

The ending of your poem certainly left an impact. It reminded me that even though it seems that there's chaos and lack of morality everywhere, that doesn't mean we're hopeless. It's up to those standing out from the crowd, and willing to stand up for their values, to change the world.