Well you guys asked and I came to inform you it didn't go well. Valentine's Day arrived and I gave margret a note saying "meet me in the library after school "Margret responded with "yea sure thing". The school day was over and I went inside the library I choose a seat towards the back because I like my privacy. An hour passed and I was ready to leave but as soon as I get my backpack margret walked through the door but she wasn't alone she was with a friend(let's call her Jenna).

Marget presumed to walk towards me and asked what I wanted to talk about? I told her we weren't going to talk until her friend left, margret.responded by telling her friend to leave then Jenna left . Me and margret began to flirt but I kinda notice something a little off with Jenna so I ask margret if Jenna is okay? Margret responded by saying "ohh yeah Jenna is fine she's just high" which actually explained a lot. I changed the topic by asking margret if she had a man she giggled and said in a girly voice "no I don't have a man".

Out of nowhere Jenna comes back and starts to eavesdrop on our conversation and begins to start crunching on a bag of chips very loudly. I ask Jenna if she would leave but margret cuts me off by saying "just tell me what you wanted to ask me" out of nowhere I feel a weight of my anxiety kicking in. I start to freak out and pull out a box of cookies I had prepared in case of an emergency. I give margret the box of cookies and she began to blush she grabbed the box from my hand and starts munching on the cookies. Jenna started staring at the cookies that I gave margret. This woman had the nerve to ask me if she could partake of the cookies. I have never been so angry I relentingly say yes and Jenna begins to eat all of the cookies that were intended for Margret. After they were finish margret told me her mother was going to pick her up and she left me. It almost as seems as if the gods want me to be single. The amount of embarrassment was just really bad I couldn't look margret in the eye for 5 days and we've never really talked to each like anymore However every once in a while I catch Margret glancing at me .



P.s what should I do now I mean this happened awhile ago and we still flirt with each other(eye tag).
P.S.S im a really shy person ive never been in a relationship before. is my situation (story) normal?

The spelling isn't terrible but from a grammar and readability standpoint... I'll be honest, it's horrendous. You didn't need nearly the length of the sentences you used, you had ideas going one direction and the follow up went a different direction and I have no idea why your mother accused you of cheating or why you lied to her and why God wants you to be single.

I'm not sure what I just read.

Anyway, here's the deal: You have to realize that if you pick a girl to have a serious relationship, her friends (drug users or not) come with her. And they have no problem helping themselves to the cookies. That means whatever the girl does, her friend will be right there, package deal, and experiencing the same things she is. You don't get her alone, end of story.

When you write this much, white space is your friend. There's a thing called a paragraph, which breaks up the situations into smaller groups and allows the readers to process the information.

SO:

I was nervous when I decided to talk to Margret on Valentine's Day. She looked amazing with her hair done. She had a nice outfit on and she held onto a fat teddy bear she brought with her. I elevated my game with an empty heart container with a note inside containing a Zelda reference.

Cut 20% of the words out, break up the thoughts into sentences, and break up the sentences into paragraphs.

You'll be fine.

My apologies I forgot t to edit my post but thank you for responding. but to inform you on what happened on my last post I asked people whether or not I should ask out Margaret or the 17 year old sophomore I decide to go with Margaret and it didn't go well. The gods part was just a joke I didn't mean it literally.

Tough break, man. Maybe you'll find a boyfriend-free girl who's willing to go out with you eventually. It was all Jenna's fault though. You should construct a plan to get revenge. Maybe steal her weed or something. 

I do apologize it was very late when I made this story not only that but I was rushing and using a tablet and not a computer I'll make sure to edit fully tomorrow

Please do that,fangsonic. Some of us here have poor eyesight.

And to answer your question,maybe it was not meant to be. Margret seems to be a little on the impatient side and Jenna seems to be a total leech. I think you can do better.

I think this would actually fit better in the Café corner rather than here but I'll let the

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