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02-15-17 06:51 AM
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Your smile lifts me with grace,
But you always want your space.

You want me to stay,
But you don't give me the time of day.

You help me through my trouble,
But you don't help me sort the rubble.

You say you will never leave,
But you have been trying to since new years eve.

You say you love me,
But hatred is all I see.

I finally ask do you love me anymore?
She packs her stuff and heads to the door.

She finally says goodbye,
But all I do inside is die.

I hope you guys enjoyed that! Let me know what you think!
Your smile lifts me with grace,
But you always want your space.

You want me to stay,
But you don't give me the time of day.

You help me through my trouble,
But you don't help me sort the rubble.

You say you will never leave,
But you have been trying to since new years eve.

You say you love me,
But hatred is all I see.

I finally ask do you love me anymore?
She packs her stuff and heads to the door.

She finally says goodbye,
But all I do inside is die.

I hope you guys enjoyed that! Let me know what you think!
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FinalFantasyDBC : Well that was sad, but to be honest a similar situation happened to me once so I can relate to this a lot.


Thank you so much.
FinalFantasyDBC : Well that was sad, but to be honest a similar situation happened to me once so I can relate to this a lot.


Thank you so much.
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Boured : You are very much welcome! I worked hard on it, and I am glad someone can relate. But hey, stay tuned. I may keep doing these!
Boured : You are very much welcome! I worked hard on it, and I am glad someone can relate. But hey, stay tuned. I may keep doing these!
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Nice work. I liked it, and hope you do indeed share more.
Have you been writing like this for long, or was this a first?
Nice work. I liked it, and hope you do indeed share more.
Have you been writing like this for long, or was this a first?
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