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01-22-17 05:19 PM
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So, I've heard from some people that the story is kind of hard to follow. I want this story to be a fun read for everyone, so I need an opinion on an idea I had. What if I made the story into a sprite comic? Nothing will change other than the fact that it's a sprite comic and it has pictures instead of just plain text. Would you want me to do this? Or should I just keep doing what I'm doing with the story? Going to summon everyone here to make sure they see this thread. If I end up abandoning the plain text version, I'm going to have to personally ask everyone in a PM what sprite they want their character to be. Thank you for giving your opinions and suggestions on this, it's really helpful. I'll reply to this thread with a sample eventually.

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So, I've heard from some people that the story is kind of hard to follow. I want this story to be a fun read for everyone, so I need an opinion on an idea I had. What if I made the story into a sprite comic? Nothing will change other than the fact that it's a sprite comic and it has pictures instead of just plain text. Would you want me to do this? Or should I just keep doing what I'm doing with the story? Going to summon everyone here to make sure they see this thread. If I end up abandoning the plain text version, I'm going to have to personally ask everyone in a PM what sprite they want their character to be. Thank you for giving your opinions and suggestions on this, it's really helpful. I'll reply to this thread with a sample eventually.

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Its gonna be more fun to read sprite comic, and it'll look cooler and more enjoyable to read instead of just plain text, but don't get me wrong, i do read you stuff and its enjoyable to read but, it just feel so grindy to read all that, so yeah, sprite comic is gonna be better i supposed
Its gonna be more fun to read sprite comic, and it'll look cooler and more enjoyable to read instead of just plain text, but don't get me wrong, i do read you stuff and its enjoyable to read but, it just feel so grindy to read all that, so yeah, sprite comic is gonna be better i supposed
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I like it as is personally. Sprite comics would look cool, but it would make new chapters harder to add and cut down on content. I like how descriptive stories and books are, so I'm biased.
I like it as is personally. Sprite comics would look cool, but it would make new chapters harder to add and cut down on content. I like how descriptive stories and books are, so I'm biased.
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I think for this kind of plot theme a sprite comic would be more fitting and more entertaining to most people (with the exception of certain rebels like Eirinn). Though with that said I'm not too sure if it would be a good idea switching when the story is already in progress since it could mess up the flow and existing plot. I would finish it before testing out a new format.
I think for this kind of plot theme a sprite comic would be more fitting and more entertaining to most people (with the exception of certain rebels like Eirinn). Though with that said I'm not too sure if it would be a good idea switching when the story is already in progress since it could mess up the flow and existing plot. I would finish it before testing out a new format.
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What I'm most likely going to end up doing is both continue the original format and make a sprite comic. I'm probably going to make the sprite comics and have the story in there catch up with the current chapter in the text format, which means that Chapter 6 won't be coming out for a long while.
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What I'm most likely going to end up doing is both continue the original format and make a sprite comic. I'm probably going to make the sprite comics and have the story in there catch up with the current chapter in the text format, which means that Chapter 6 won't be coming out for a long while.
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Zlinqx The Rebel Edgelord : Calling someone else a rebel? Is that even legal?
Zlinqx The Rebel Edgelord : Calling someone else a rebel? Is that even legal?
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Eirinn : BOIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII do you even know who I am? I am the The Rebel Edgelord himself, I do what I want while disregarding the consequences typically trying to achieve maximum edge. Legal or not sir, I am indeed calling you a rebel and I will not back down. Skool IS Kool.



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I would love to see this play out as a sprite comic. Go for it, dude!!
I would love to see this play out as a sprite comic. Go for it, dude!!
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*interrupts the party*

What if we still do the story but add a picture of the scene to the part it belongs to? That could be useful to understand the hard parts. You can post the stories here without pictures, ask people which part is hard to understand, if they specify a part that is unclear you can add a picture either made by Kimmy or me someone else. Then people may understand that one part. Believe me, Dutch writers like Paul van Loon (a writer who makes horror and halloween books suitable for kids) and a few others do that too: They add an image of the current scene here and there.


If it's not a good idea, maybe you or i got to improve it. But it's all i can think of, as i planned to do that myself too but failed.
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What if we still do the story but add a picture of the scene to the part it belongs to? That could be useful to understand the hard parts. You can post the stories here without pictures, ask people which part is hard to understand, if they specify a part that is unclear you can add a picture either made by Kimmy or me someone else. Then people may understand that one part. Believe me, Dutch writers like Paul van Loon (a writer who makes horror and halloween books suitable for kids) and a few others do that too: They add an image of the current scene here and there.


If it's not a good idea, maybe you or i got to improve it. But it's all i can think of, as i planned to do that myself too but failed.
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A good suggestion, but I already started the comic haha.

http://avizzedadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/
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A good suggestion, but I already started the comic haha.

http://avizzedadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/
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YES Sprite comic pls. I like this idea very much. It will be more enjoyable to read through than just text on a screen.
YES Sprite comic pls. I like this idea very much. It will be more enjoyable to read through than just text on a screen.
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Thanks for the input on such short notice, you all. The first page of the "story" part of the comic is up. Basically the first true page of the comic. I don't know when there will be any updates to the comic, most likely at random, so make sure to make a SmackJeeves account and favorite my comic to get notified about new panels. Thanks!

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Thanks for the input on such short notice, you all. The first page of the "story" part of the comic is up. Basically the first true page of the comic. I don't know when there will be any updates to the comic, most likely at random, so make sure to make a SmackJeeves account and favorite my comic to get notified about new panels. Thanks!

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I'll be sure to do that, as soon as I can. I will definitely keep my eye out for any new updates!
I'll be sure to do that, as soon as I can. I will definitely keep my eye out for any new updates!
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I have no idea what a sprite sheet is. Can you PM me one, and I'll be sure to do it by tomorrow night? 
I have no idea what a sprite sheet is. Can you PM me one, and I'll be sure to do it by tomorrow night? 
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