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A Vizzed Adventure - Chapter 1: It Begins

 

12-03-16 02:24 PM
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pI5cukyEWcM (This is the current opening song. There eventually be an animation to make it like some sort of weird anime opening, courtesy of NintendoFanKimmy. Whenever the animation is finished it will be posted at the top of each chapter until another opening is ready.)

Ah, planet Earth. How wonderful it is. Lush forests, uh..."clean" lakes, and..."breathable" air...? Well, it just came to my realization that Earth sucks. Thankfully, our story does not take place on Earth, but rather a different dimension, and on a planet named Vizzed, and starting on the continent of North Vizzed, and the country of Debate. Fun fact, the country of Debate has the highest death toll in the world. The country of Debate is home to a variety of people, including our protagonist. A great adventure awaits. Sit back, relax, eat some popcorn. Welcome to Vizzed.

Max's Mom: "MAX. I TOLD YOU YESTERDAY TO MILK THE DANG COWS."
Max: "SORRY I'LL GET TO IT RIGHT NOW."
Max's Mom: "DON'T YOU YELL AT ME YOUNG MAN."
Max: "AAAAAAHHHH!"
Max's Mom: "AAAAAHHHH!"

Max runs out the door and eventually reaches his destination, the barn. Where the wild things- I mean the cows are. Max proceeds to milk each cow, one by one, utter by utter. Plip, plop, plip plop. The milk drips into the bucket. Plip plop plip plo- alright who's the moron that wrote this stuff? Anyway, little did Max know, he was not alone in the barn. Someone was there with him.

November: "BOO!"

Max screams like a little girl and tips the bucket of milk over, spilling milk everywhere. Idiot.

November: "HAHAHAHAHA!"
Max: "C'MON DUDE THAT COW MILKING WAS GOING SMOOTHLY."

November has been Max's best friend since Preschool.

November: "C'mon, I wanna go do something fun. I have some more buddies from school in the truck waiting for you."
Max: "But....cows..."
November: "You can do it later let's gooo!!!"

November grabs Max's arm and runs with him to his truck, where they find Eirinn, Alex, and Marcario. They get in the truck and drive off. Now, let us travel to the continent of Square, just west of North Vizzed. Yes, it's an actual square, like Colorado on Earth. In the country of General, we meet another very special character named Deg.

Deg: "I'm going out to Burger King."
Deg's Dad: "You're not going ANYWHERE."

Deg's dad slaps Deg across the face for literally no reason. His dad then picks Deg up and throws him across the living room, with Deg landing on the floor. Deg's life has been very hard. He once met someone he loved, named Aria, but she sadly died in World War IV. Soon after, Deg's mother died in World War V. This, along with his abusive father, made him an edgelord. Deg goes back to his room and escapes through the window.

Deg: "Just you wait, old man. There will be a day where I'm bigger than you. Just you watch..."

Deg met up with his two friends Sonic and Leggy. No, not Sonic the Hedgehog. And no, Leggy is not a giant pair of legs. All 3 of them were edgelords. Sonic grew up in an abusive home like Deg, but he never loved anyone, and he still doesn't to this day. Leggy hardly talks at all, and not much is known about him. All that is known is that he moved to General from another country, Servers. The trio was eating their burgers, when all of a sudden, a huge explosion was set off. The cause was unknown, but the explosion looked like it destroyed around a 200 mile radius. This pleased the trio, most notably Deg. And in that moment, Deg had a vision. A vision of terror, destruction, and all things evil. At that moment, he knew, that from here on out, everything was going to change.

END OF CHAPTER

I'm going to put a character list thingy here so that you can understand which character is based on which Vizzed user. It will be posted at the end of every chapter and will only include the characters who appeared or were mentioned in that chapter.

Max's Mom = 18mlivingston's Mom
Max = 18mlivingston
November = NovemberJoy
Eirinn = Eirinn
Alex = Lexatom
Marcario = MarioLucarioFan64
Deg = deggle
Deg's Dad = deggle's Dad
Aria = xxAriaxx
Deg's Mom = deggle's Mom
Sonic = sonicbros
Leggy = legacyme3


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pI5cukyEWcM (This is the current opening song. There eventually be an animation to make it like some sort of weird anime opening, courtesy of NintendoFanKimmy. Whenever the animation is finished it will be posted at the top of each chapter until another opening is ready.)

Ah, planet Earth. How wonderful it is. Lush forests, uh..."clean" lakes, and..."breathable" air...? Well, it just came to my realization that Earth sucks. Thankfully, our story does not take place on Earth, but rather a different dimension, and on a planet named Vizzed, and starting on the continent of North Vizzed, and the country of Debate. Fun fact, the country of Debate has the highest death toll in the world. The country of Debate is home to a variety of people, including our protagonist. A great adventure awaits. Sit back, relax, eat some popcorn. Welcome to Vizzed.

Max's Mom: "MAX. I TOLD YOU YESTERDAY TO MILK THE DANG COWS."
Max: "SORRY I'LL GET TO IT RIGHT NOW."
Max's Mom: "DON'T YOU YELL AT ME YOUNG MAN."
Max: "AAAAAAHHHH!"
Max's Mom: "AAAAAHHHH!"

Max runs out the door and eventually reaches his destination, the barn. Where the wild things- I mean the cows are. Max proceeds to milk each cow, one by one, utter by utter. Plip, plop, plip plop. The milk drips into the bucket. Plip plop plip plo- alright who's the moron that wrote this stuff? Anyway, little did Max know, he was not alone in the barn. Someone was there with him.

November: "BOO!"

Max screams like a little girl and tips the bucket of milk over, spilling milk everywhere. Idiot.

November: "HAHAHAHAHA!"
Max: "C'MON DUDE THAT COW MILKING WAS GOING SMOOTHLY."

November has been Max's best friend since Preschool.

November: "C'mon, I wanna go do something fun. I have some more buddies from school in the truck waiting for you."
Max: "But....cows..."
November: "You can do it later let's gooo!!!"

November grabs Max's arm and runs with him to his truck, where they find Eirinn, Alex, and Marcario. They get in the truck and drive off. Now, let us travel to the continent of Square, just west of North Vizzed. Yes, it's an actual square, like Colorado on Earth. In the country of General, we meet another very special character named Deg.

Deg: "I'm going out to Burger King."
Deg's Dad: "You're not going ANYWHERE."

Deg's dad slaps Deg across the face for literally no reason. His dad then picks Deg up and throws him across the living room, with Deg landing on the floor. Deg's life has been very hard. He once met someone he loved, named Aria, but she sadly died in World War IV. Soon after, Deg's mother died in World War V. This, along with his abusive father, made him an edgelord. Deg goes back to his room and escapes through the window.

Deg: "Just you wait, old man. There will be a day where I'm bigger than you. Just you watch..."

Deg met up with his two friends Sonic and Leggy. No, not Sonic the Hedgehog. And no, Leggy is not a giant pair of legs. All 3 of them were edgelords. Sonic grew up in an abusive home like Deg, but he never loved anyone, and he still doesn't to this day. Leggy hardly talks at all, and not much is known about him. All that is known is that he moved to General from another country, Servers. The trio was eating their burgers, when all of a sudden, a huge explosion was set off. The cause was unknown, but the explosion looked like it destroyed around a 200 mile radius. This pleased the trio, most notably Deg. And in that moment, Deg had a vision. A vision of terror, destruction, and all things evil. At that moment, he knew, that from here on out, everything was going to change.

END OF CHAPTER

I'm going to put a character list thingy here so that you can understand which character is based on which Vizzed user. It will be posted at the end of every chapter and will only include the characters who appeared or were mentioned in that chapter.

Max's Mom = 18mlivingston's Mom
Max = 18mlivingston
November = NovemberJoy
Eirinn = Eirinn
Alex = Lexatom
Marcario = MarioLucarioFan64
Deg = deggle
Deg's Dad = deggle's Dad
Aria = xxAriaxx
Deg's Mom = deggle's Mom
Sonic = sonicbros
Leggy = legacyme3


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12-03-16 02:29 PM
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It seems promising for comedy. Transitioning could be better, feels like a crappy jump cut you'd see in a YT video. 
It seems promising for comedy. Transitioning could be better, feels like a crappy jump cut you'd see in a YT video. 
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paper luigi :

Kinda like my videos ayylmao.
paper luigi :

Kinda like my videos ayylmao.
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I like your unique method of having me in your story.


"Max's Mom: "MAX. I TOLD YOU YESTERDAY TO MILK THE DANG COWS."

"YESTERDAY"

"YESTERDAY"
I like your unique method of having me in your story.


"Max's Mom: "MAX. I TOLD YOU YESTERDAY TO MILK THE DANG COWS."

"YESTERDAY"

"YESTERDAY"
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(edited by RDay13 on 12-03-16 02:39 PM)     Post Rating: 4   Liked By: Lexatom, Mynamescox44, NintendoFanDrew, NovemberJoy,

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Needs more edgelords and evil people.

0/10

(I also live in Colorado so I should be in that square area brah)
Needs more edgelords and evil people.

0/10

(I also live in Colorado so I should be in that square area brah)
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I agree with what Zeetee said c: and also since leggy was a secret role why couldn't he be my mother : ((((((( very disappointed in the story so far. 

Edit: actually I really fricking love this story so far I'm dying. AGAIN WITH SHIPPING ARIA AND I THO : ///// but like my best friends in the story are chill af. 
I agree with what Zeetee said c: and also since leggy was a secret role why couldn't he be my mother : ((((((( very disappointed in the story so far. 

Edit: actually I really fricking love this story so far I'm dying. AGAIN WITH SHIPPING ARIA AND I THO : ///// but like my best friends in the story are chill af. 
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(edited by deggle on 12-03-16 03:27 PM)     Post Rating: 1   Liked By: Lexatom,

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Just going to say one thing about this whole thing.



AAAAAAAAAHHHH!
Just going to say one thing about this whole thing.



AAAAAAAAAHHHH!
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What's my line again? *checks script* "Eirinn: chilling in truck" Cool, I can do this.

*chills in truck*

Lexatom - Know what the difference between me and you is? I make this truck look good (please dun sue me, Will).
What's my line again? *checks script* "Eirinn: chilling in truck" Cool, I can do this.

*chills in truck*

Lexatom - Know what the difference between me and you is? I make this truck look good (please dun sue me, Will).
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This is byotiful. I support everything about this story. Although there is a distinct lack of User in this chapter. How lame.
This is byotiful. I support everything about this story. Although there is a distinct lack of User in this chapter. How lame.
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No thing? Evil Lex? I just have one thing to say: 
   AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
No thing? Evil Lex? I just have one thing to say: 
   AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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I am best edgelord.
I am best edgelord.
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One Love.
One Dream.


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