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My Imagination - Chapter 8: The End

Information:

Name: Jake
Gender: Male
Look: Black, short hair, white skin color, wearing a blue hoody and grey jeans
Age: 17
Comes from: USA
Crush: Zoe
Likes: Doing homework when needed, to make more time for games
Dislikes: School

Name: Zoe
Gender: Female
Look: Black, long hair, white skin color, wearing a pink skirt and a black sweatshirt
Age: 16
Comes from: USA
Crush: Jake
Likes: Jake's handwriting, making art of the nature
Dislikes: Bullying, insulting other people

Name: Jess
Gender: Female
Look: Black, really long hair, black skin color, wearing a cap, a green tied shirt and blue jeans
Age: 17
Comes from: USA
Crush: Mike
Likes: Staying cool with her friends, and playing tennis.
Dislikes: Eating much, as she wants to keep her body healthy. Hates it to be angry, as she has psychical problems with anger.

Name: Philip
Gender: Male
Look: Black, slightly short hair (which is dyed red), tinted skin color, wearing an army t-shirt and pants with army print.
Age: 18
Comes from: France
Crush: Jess
Likes: The USA army, and Jess' brave feelings for everything she does.
Dislikes: His father and school.

Name: Mike
Gender: Male
Look: Blonde, long hair, white skin color, wearing a yellow hoody and grey pants, with a lot of chains on it.
Age: 16
Comes from: USA
Crush: Jess
Likes: Death Metal music, and being alone
Dislikes: Being together with someone, except with Rachel, his sister

Name: Rachel
Gender: Female
Look: Blonde, really long hair, white skin color, wearing a sleeveless shirt in pink, a brown skirt and leather boots. Also has a huge ribbon in her hair.
Age: 18
Comes from: USA
Crush: X
Likes: Playing songs and making covers on her guitar secretly. In public, she makes jokes about everything. She likes being with her brother Mike as well.
Dislikes: Helping her handicapped mother constantly, so that she has no time for fun things to do.

Name: Frank Hudson (Mr. Hudson)
Gender: Male
Look: Grey, slightly short hair, white skin color, wearing a spencer, with green pants. Also, he's a bit on the old side.
Age: 57 (told you he is a bit on the old side!)
Comes from: USA
Crush: No one at school.
Likes: Listening to music from early 90's.
Dislikes: having to slap another student again. He hates that.

Name: Kelly McKinsey (Mrs. McKinsey)
Gender: Female
Look: Brown, really long hair, brown skin color, wearing a pink, sleeveless shirt with heartprint on it and wearing blue jeans, with a few chains on it.
Age: 23
Comes from: USA
Crush: No one at school
Likes: Helping out Mr Hudson's students when they're in trouble. Her best friend on school is Zoe.
Dislikes: Students who think they're cool if they throw a paper plane towards the teacher.

Note: None of these characters are in an 'important - not important' order, so the main character is hard to see here.

Chapter 8 - The End

Later on, they arrived at the tennis court. Mike already called Zoe, but couldn't get Jake to call. Zoe said she came to them. Later again, Zoe arrived as well. She had her bag with her.
Mike: "Zoe, you're not going to school now, are you?"
Zoe: "Oh... Yeah."
Jess: "Sit down, we've called you and Jake to listen to what REALLY happened during my trial."
Mike and Zoe were sitting on the ground. Jess sat on a rock.
Jess: "When i got arrested by the police, i saw Harold in the car as well. He said "Maybe i'll help you..." and i was quiet, i think. But once we had, apparently, 10 minutes before arriving, we made a deal: I'll let him free by paying for it and he keeps ME out of prison. So we decided to make the deal. And he kept his promise: he saved me."
Zoe: "Wow..."
Mike: "And are you gonna save him too?"
Jess: "What? No! He almost killed me at a bus stop, he has no regrets after his crimes and he smells! I'm not gonna save him!"
Mike: "But..."
Zoe: "Mike, it's better like this. If Harold is in prison, it's better like that. I mean, he finally can't commit a murder, steal and more in prison. We're free now."
Zoe suddenly felt two hands on her shoulders. She had a shock and looked up. It was Jake who found Zoe somehow. Zoe went off the ground and hugged Jake.
Zoe: "Jake! Where were you and why did you decline my phone call?!"
Jake: "Look, i HAD to decline the call, because i was in a library to find a book from the Harry Potter series, someone asked me for that. But i'll promise i'll be answering as much calls as i can."
Zoe: "You promise?"
Jake: "I'll promise."
They released each other. They held each other's hand.
Mike: "I got something as well."
Zoe: "Is it important?"
Mike: "Yes, absolutely! Philip told me this!"
Jake: "Poor Phil."
Mike: "Huh?"
Jake: "Never mind, i know that was rude."
Mike: "I didn't get what he said... Oh well. But as i said, Philip told me something. The good news is, he thinks we're his best friends. The bad news is, he's leaving America."
Zoe: "What?!"
Jake: "Did you hear WHY he's leaving?!"
Mike: "Well, his father wants to. And he takes Philip with him. So indeed: Poor Phil."
Jess: "I can't imagine sitting in an airplane to go all the way to France all day."
Zoe: "I heard Paris is a very romantic city, Jake."
Jake: "Heh heh... Maybe we can go there with Philip."
Mike: "But i'm pretty sure he says goodbye before leaving. He's nice. He always was."
Mike looked down. Jake noticed that.
Jake: "Aaah, you DO miss Philip, Mike!"
Mike: "Shut up... He was just... a good friend. Nothing more, nothing less."
Jake: "Philip said he was your BEST friend, Mike! Don't deny it!"
Zoe and Jess were laughing a bit.
Mike: "Ugh, okay! I'll admit it: He was my best friend. There, happy?!"
Mike went up and walked home.
Jake: "Mike! It was a joke!"
Mike ignored Jake. He continued going home.
Zoe: "Poor Mike."
Jess: "He isn't poor, just pretending... Right?"
Jake saw someone coming. It was Kimmy. She looked very down.
Jake: "Aha, Kimm-... Wait a minute... Kimmy... Grrr!!"
Jake became angry when he saw Kimmy: He saw her video too.
Kimmy: "Oh, hi..."
Jess: "Jake! Calm yourself a bit! Geez..."
Jake: "Okay, i'm finishing her after she told us what gave her the courage to come here."
Kimmy: "*sigh* I'm sorry... For everything..."
Zoe: "What?"
Kimmy: "I know, you're still upset... I shouldn't have uploaded that video, i realized 3 hours after that. I logged in as you, Zoe, to report myself. And i accidentally changed your password... Sorry... It's whereismybasketgoingto1337. But above all: I'm sorry."
It became silent. The only sounds were those from the singing birds and the wind blowing through the leaves of the trees.
Kimmy: "I know what you're thinking and i agree... I'm worthless. I'm a big piece of..."
Zoe: "It's alright. I forgive you now. I shouldn't be calling you "a 5-year old" or i shouldn't be saying "Ignore her". So... I'm sorry too."
Kimmy: "Thanks... I'll head home to make something for Philip."
Jess: "You heard it too?"
Kimmy: "Yep. Though he actually wanted to type 'Timmy', according to the description."
Jake: "Well... It's close enough."
Kimmy: "Yeah... But i'm going home, i don't wanna be in the rain that comes quickly. See you later!"
Kimmy went home. The three friends decided to go home as well.

Once Jake was home, he felt quite lonely. Mostly because his uncle died and his parents aren't back yet. He went to the kitchen to grab some cooking stuff, vegetables and some more foods and made something with that. He didn't count on his parents to come that evening. When he was almost finished, he put what he had left, in the fridge. He went upstairs, but...
Jake: "Oh no..."
... his bedroom was a mess and the window was open. There was a note left behind: "I will kill you if you warn the police..."
But what did he have to do then? Nothing? He looked if anything was stolen. Sadly, his money and his parents their money and jewelry were gone. Blast! Jake went back to his room. To clean everything up. He heard a really, really soft sound coming from the bathroom, three minutes later. It was the sound of someone stepping on a broken tile. Jake knew there was a tile in the floor broken, and not fixed yet. He took a look in the bathroom, which was open. He looked behind the door and saw a person standing with a baseball bat, ready to hit Jake with it. The person missed when Jake went back, back in the hallway. He kicked the door open and heard a female voice cursing a bit. He ran into the bathroom and saw a young female laying on the ground. She wasn't one of Jake's friends, but Jake recognized her anyway: She was a girl from the neighborhood, she always liked to do bad things. And now Jake was getting robbed by her. Her name was Alyssa.
Alyssa: "Grr, you (****)! Look at my nails!"
Jake: "But why did you broke in then!? To break your nails?! Get out of here and leave everything behind you! Or i'll call the police!"
Alyssa: "You didn't saw my note, apparently. How stupid."
Jake: "I've been reading it, but i don't care! Besides, you got no weapon at all!"
Alyssa grabbed something from her pocket: A small knife. Jake was thinking that she indeed can kill him. But what if he fights back? Jake was lifting his fist but kicked Alyssa, and she cursed a lot when she got hit against her leg. She even dropped the knife. And Jake picked it up and pointed it at Alyssa.
Jake: "Aha, now we switched roles... You stay here while i'll call the police. Or else..."
Alyssa: "Grrr..."
Jake ran downstairs and called the police. He said a person from his neighborhood broke in and he captured her. The police was on their way, but when Jake clicked on the red horn, he saw Alyssa jumped out of the window in the bathroom and she ran away. Jake had no choice: He laid down the phone and ran after her. He went outside when he dropped the knife and was chasing Alyssa. They were running to a railroad, which warned a train was coming. Alyssa ran over the railroad when the fences(?) were going down, and made it. Jake was left behind, but he did something extremely risky: He ran over the railroad too, and the train almost hit him when it went past him. Jake sighed. What a relief. Oh right, Alyssa! He started to continue the chase, and they came at another obstacle: a bridge. Alyssa didn't cross the bridge. Jake looked around and saw Alyssa running back to where they came from. She was pretty far, but Jake can still capture her. Jake began to run a little more to go back and chase her again. He started to get tired once he almost got her. He began to slow down. Suddenly, they heard a siren coming closer. It was the police, who arrived behind Alyssa. And in front of her was Jake, who was ready to capture her anyway. The police went out of the car. He looked at Jake. Jake sticked up his thumb. The police knew a bit who Alyssa was, so he grabbed Alyssa's shirt and took her to the policecar. The policeman drived to Jake.
Policeman: "Thank you for supporting us, Jake. But i'll be warning you: Don't put yourself in danger like that anymore."
Jake: "Excuse me?"
Policeman: "With the train, Jake. The machinist already called us and said a teen was almost being hit."
Jake: "Sorry, mister. I swear i won't do it again."
The police drived away, to the office. That was a tough situation Jake just had. He went back home again and fell on the couch. He was tired. And he fell asleep.

The next day...

It was 10:29 AM. Jake had an itchy nose, and slammed his hand on his face to scratch a bit. But he felt something else on his face: Someone apparently put some paint on his face and placed some creme on his hand. His entire face was dirty now. He opened his eyes and saw Mike laying on the ground because he was laughing so hard.
Mike: "OOH... Haha! Oh my lord... You..."
He was laughing so hard, he couldn't speak properly. Jake became mad.
Jake: "Why, Mike! What the (****) is wrong with you?!"
Mike was laughing less hard now.
Mike: "Haha! Sorry, dude! I... Heh heh... I just HAD to do that!"
Jake: "And how did you came in anyway?"
Mike: "Dude, you left the front door open a bit."
Jake: "...what."
Mike: "It's true, but i've already checked if nothing was gone."
Jake: "Get out of this house, Mike."
Mike: "Ok, sorry... Geez... Can't even appreciate my help..."
Mike left Jake's house. Jake went upstairs to clean his face, and after 15 minutes, he succeeded. Jake went downstairs again, to prepare himself for a date with Zoe in the park. After he checked if nothing was gone that night, he went out of the door, locked it now and went to the park.

Zoe was sitting on a bench underneath a tree on top of a hill. It was the most romantic spot in the park, so Zoe decided to go there with Jake. After 8 minutes, she saw Jake. Jake walked up on the hill, to the bench. He hugged Zoe quickly and sat next her on the bench. He sighed.
Zoe: "Tired?"
Jake: "No, i... Aaah, i see what you did there."
Zoe: "Heh heh..."
It became silent. After 1.5 minutes, Jake said something.
Jake: "If we were the main character of... i don't know... a book, would you like that?"
Zoe: "Umm... Depends on what genre the book is, of course."
Jake: "What do you mean by that?"
Zoe: "Well, if it's horror or thriller, i'm out. But if it's a romantic one or funny, i'm in. And you? You said "we"."
Jake: "True. Well, i would like it... actually, it's the same thing as your opinion. Heh heh..."
Zoe: "Wow, it's like we're meant to be there for each other, and think the same."
Jake: "Yep. I think so too."
Zoe: "Yeah..."
Zoe moved her head to Jake's mouth again to kiss him. Zoe moved a bit closer to Jake to do so, and hugged him. They loved each other a lot. Meanwhile, a kid's voice said something.
???: "Hey, Zoe!"
Zoe released Jake quickly and Jake released Zoe. Zoe recognized the voice: Zoe had to babysit a friend's little sister, Jasmine, sometimes. Zoe was surprised to see Jasmine and Jasmine's mother in the park.
Zoe: "Hey, Jasmine!"
Jasmine ran towards Zoe. Jasmine's mom yelled that Jasmine has to be careful not to fall. Jasmine had a present in her hands. She saw Zoe as her big sister sometimes. But that thought is good to hear, especially if a 7-year old girl you're close with, says it.
Jasmine: "Zoe, i got something for you!"
Zoe: "Oh, really? Wow! What is it?"
Jasmine was getting something from her pocket: A letter with a few stickers on it. Zoe opened the envelope and began to read the letter:
Zoe: "Dear Zoe and Lily. I want to thank you for babysitting me so good! I remember eating ice cream at the stores once! But i got you a present, Zoe! That's important now! Open it, quickly! Love, Jasmine"
Zoe looked at the present Jasmine gave to Zoe. It was a pretty big one. Zoe indeed opened it, and she saw something she secretly always wanted one of. And she told it only to Jasmine. And Jasmine got one for Zoe. But... What was it? A beautiful doll, dressed with the cutest clothes. And if Zoe wanted, she could change the doll's clothes to something else.
Zoe: "Ooooh!! A doll!! Oh my god!!"
Zoe went on her knees and hugged Jasmine. Jake looked a bit skeptical.
Zoe: "Oh, thank you so much, Jasmine!!!"
Jasmine's mom: "It's yours, Zoe! Because you helped us out that much and always had time for us!"
Jasmine: "You're welcome!"
Jake: "But... Hold on, miss. I'm Zoe's love and i'm curious: Are you two leaving the city?"
Zoe went on the bench again.
Jasmine's mom: "Well, not exactly. We are going on a vacation to California for 3 weeks. So before we leave, we wanted to thank Zoe for her help."
Zoe: "Is it weird if i hug you too, miss?"
Jasmine's mom: "Of course not! You and Jasmine are so close, you're always welcome, Zoe!"
Zoe went up and hugged Jasmine's mom a bit.
Zoe: "Thank you for the doll! I'm so happy now!"
Jasmine's mom: "I'm happy you like it so much! This was the last one they had."
Zoe released Jasmine's mother, because her phone rang. Zoe accepted the call, as it was Lily who called her.
Zoe: "Hi mom!"
Lily: "Zoe, where are you?"
Zoe: "I'm at the park, as i said. With Jake, Jasmine and Jasmine's mom."
Lily: "Jasmine?! What is she doing there?"
Zoe: "She gave me something REALLY nice! As a reward for all the help i gave her! She and her mom are gonna go on a vacation to California!"
Lily: "Oh wow! But i got a question for you: Are you close to Philip's house?"
Zoe: "Uh yes, but he's gonna leave America."
Lily: "I know, i wanted you to bring him some flowers, because he's your friend after all, right?"
Zoe: "Mom, he doesn't like flowers. He's allergic."
Lily: "Never mind then. See you around 13:00 PM?"
Zoe: "Sure, bye!"
Lily: "Be careful!"
They hung up the phone call. Zoe looked on her watch: 12:35 PM.
Zoe: "I got to go, miss. Thank you sooo much for the doll, i'm so happy with it! And Jasmine?"
Jasmine: "Yes, Zoe?"
Zoe: "I'm gonna miss you those 3 weeks. Really hard. But i'm curious how your vacation has been when you come back."
Jasmine: "I'm gonna miss you too, Zoe. But i'll call you by phone!"
Zoe: "Deal!"
Jasmine: "G.P.!"
Zoe: "G.P.!"
Jasmine and her mother went to their home. Jake was sitting on the bench again, as well as Zoe.
Jake: "What does G.P. mean? Guinea Pig? Good person?"
Zoe: "We always used to say "girl power" when we say goodbye, but to make it 'cooler', we turned it into 'G.P.'."
Jake: "Ah, i see."
He went up.
Jake: "I got to go home, Max probably needs food."
Zoe grabbed her doll and the box it was in. She packed her doll in the box and went up too.
Zoe: "Me too, i need to show this to my parents. My god, i still can't believe it..."
Jake and Zoe kissed each other again, said goodbye and went to their own home.

That evening, at Zoe's home...

Zoe showed the doll to her mom. Nathan had to stay in the hospital because he had a surgery for his leg. It wasn't going well with Nathan: He had something 'evil' in his leg.
Lily: "Wow... That doll would be very expensive, looking at the style and company that made it."
Zoe: "Yeah, but it doesn't matter now."
Zoe was looking at the doll.
Zoe: "I'll call her Lucy, because i'd think it fits her look."
Lily: "But where do you put her? On a shelf would be too hidden."
Zoe: "I don't know. Maybe behind my window?"
Lily: "Good idea, but why do you like her so much?"
Zoe: "I secretly always wanted a doll like Lucy. Maybe that's the reason."
Zoe picked up Lucy and took her upstairs. To place her on a nice spot. Zoe liked her new doll very much, it was the best (and first) gift Jasmine and her mom could give.

--{?}--{THE END}--{?}--

Note: If you expected an ending that ended a rough situation: I'm making a sequel for this, containing:

- More action (request by an user from Vizzed)
- A different title (same)
- More 'thrills'
- Two new characters
- New, existing storyline

And why did i make this story so fast? Well... I wanted to end it up quicker. I'll add a picture in Chapter 1 of the sequel to reveal the easter egg... Or should i do so now? Let me know below please, and if most votes are for 'yes', i'll reply with the picture here. Just a simple 'like' is good enough. Also, sorry if this was too short. I'll remaster the entire story and put it into one piece. I'll post it on a website, but is it a good idea to put everything here as well? Let me know that as well.

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