This game is a really good fan game. Instead of just being a pokemon mystery dungeon hack where they just add something new, this game has gone straight ahead. The Story is Your at your birthday party with all your friends. You join them and then suddenly.. You get teleported into the forest! Now You look like a pokemon! You encounter some other Pokemon and they ask "Would you like to join our rescue team?" You end up joining them and going on adventures! This game has the greatest story of a fangame i have ever played. It has a perfect amount of difficulty. Sometimes you fight LEGENDARY Pokemon! But if you play the game long enough, The game gets to a perfect difficulty. The graphics are amazing. SO Overall i give this game a ten out of ten. Its the best pokemon mystery dungeon fan game i have ever seen. Also, there are no pokeballs. Sometimes you just get pokemon to join you.

Congratulations on putting a little more effort at describing the story. However you barely spent any energy describing the rest of the metrics other than very short sentences.

A piece of advice: write your reviews in Word; that way you will have time to think your review more thoroughly and make it better. Don't think of me as a bad guy criticizing negatively; I've been where you are. Compare my Phantasy Star IV review to Dragon Warrior IV to see how much I've improved.

janus : Okay, I'll try to improve. The thing is, I don't have much time to do this. But I'll try to make them longer.

TaffyTheEevee : Take it from me. Even if you end up taking days (or even weeks in my case) to make a good, extensive review, take the time to do so. Trust me, it's worth it.

What was it that I think Sakurai said once? "A delayed game is eventually good, a bad game is bad forever." If that wasn't exact it was at least a pretty accurate paraphrase. This can be applied to anything.

It's better to make one good review than five incomplete ones. Take your time, and don't rush. Take janus's advice as well, and use word so you can keep the review saved as you progress.

Okay.I'll take it from both of you. Thanks for your help.