Okay so I had never heard of this game until I came across it in vizzed. I went in blind with no idea what to expect.
Things I took note of:
1. I loved the way it looks. Its classic Mario put on a board game.
2. The game play was most self explanatory with a mini tutorial.
3. There wasn't really a story but there were different quests that made it interesting to complete and see what would happen.
4. I recognized 99% of the characters in the game itself. I thought that it was awesome that the game included all of the classic characters each with their own quest/game. Thumbs way up for that!
5. I took me three days straight to complete it. If you don't believe me I have the Twitch videos to prove it. The game itself is SO UNFORGIVING. It's basically based on chance/luck that Bowser and Koopa Kid don't total fudge you over the closer you get to the end. The rage is strong with this one.

I really did enjoy this game even though there were moments where it was complete BS and I got screwed over a lot. A challenging game that still keeps a simple game play style. 

Good review.

However may I suggest some sort of formatting? There's no clear paragraphs or explanations to follow up.

Like for example:

Graphics:8/10

Pros:
Cons:

Also: It's nice of you to provide, but it'd be better if you keep the information on the review about your opinion of the game, and not irrevalant stuff like your twitch channel.


Also, Please avoid any form of cursing when Posting in any forum/thread, as it's a violation of the site rules.
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Great first try on a game review!

So you had never played any of the mario party games before? There are a bunch of them from the N64 and they still make them even today!

Yeah, as SuperCrash said, separating the review into separate categories would be the main thing I;d suggest doing in the future. Adding more details would also be great, especially since the longer your review is, the more Viz and CP you'll get. For now though, I think you did a decent job.

If I may add something on top of what was said: try comparing the game with others on other consoles. Would you say it is as enjoyable as the N64 and other consoles' versions?