This game is like others it the monster games in that you fight with monster as your party but unlike the others you and not a tamer but a caravan master in this game you have to mange you rations wagon and members in the caravans you have a monster and up to 4 humans the humans do varies things from fighting to getting food the monster is your main fighter and the hp for the group later in the game you can get monster hearts. You combine this with monsters to get new ones. Like with other dragon monsters games you don't tell them how to fight.


the graphics are good for the gba and all the monster that I saw had different over world sprites which I thought was a nice touch

sound was ok from what I heard I don't really listen to game that much so but what I heard it was what you'd expect form a gba game

the story was good you are a prince that wants to go on a adventure but the king grounds you for trying then a masked figure takes you to some woods where a boy is looking for so medicine for his mom and dad after saving him and meeting the parents you go and a quest to find the orbs for the  masked figure to save them and go home  

drkonecharlie : You should have gone into better detail about the game. I am also learning more about reviewing video games, and it seems you still have a lot to learn. Keep at it and you will be good.

Destiny is right, you need more details if you want people to be interested in your review. Tell us why the graphics are good for the Game Boy Advanced; how do they compare to other games on the console? Are there tracks that were more memorable even though you didn't listen to most of it?

Also (blame my linguistics study on that one) make sure you right you sentences in good English. The spell checker is helpful; don't forget about punctuation either.

You already have a good structure by separating the different parameters; all you need is to add more content.

Like Destiny and Janus have already said, you could've added more detail to the review as well as make the review longer. In the future, you should also add details about the addictiveness, depth and difficulty categories as well. If you do these things, you will improve as a reviewer.