Although I have never beaten the game myself, I can already tell this hack is very well made from the story to how addictive it can be. The addition of most fake Pokémon was extremely clever and was a good way to introduce new experiences to the Pokémon world. What also caught my attention was that it was a ROM hack of Ruby, one of my most favorite Pokémon games in the entire world! Now, the only draw back for me was how difficult it was. I wish it was about as difficult as regular Pokémon games, but other than that, I can't complain. I love that it is based in some sort of apocalyptic time period. You should be careful though because the zombie trainers are stronger than normal trainers (minus gym leaders, the four horsemen, and the elite four). Please note however that the zombie Pokémon are unobtainable. All in all, I hope you enjoy this game as much as I did and leave an honest rating. Bye bye!

DolphinRider56 : This is good, but you might want to try adding more detail to it and making it just a bit longer. Sure, it' past the minimum word count, but making it longer could make it more interesting, and breaking down the review into a few paragraphs would make it a bit easier to read. I never played this game but I saw a few videos of it and I like what it looks like.

DolphinRider56: Good for a first time review, I think. :3

 Like zanderlex said, though, it could stand some more detail. An easy way to do this is to take the sections the review scores break down (like Graphics, Sound, Addictiveness, all that good  stuff) and use those as paragraph headers. What I mean by that is that, say, you take the Graphics 'header', and then write a bit about JUST the graphics of the game. Give examples of why they're good or bad,  and compare them to other games that are similar or from the same era, even, if you can. Do the same with all the other heading bits.

It doesn't even have to be much! Just talk about about each one in its own section to give it a little depth and help the people reading your review understand more about the game. Your ultimate goal is to try to convince someone to play the game based on your words, after all, so every little bit helps.

I've heard about this hack before, but I haven't played it yet. As far as your review goes, like Zander and Yuni said, in the future you should try to separate the review into different categories and explain your feelings on each category. If you do those things and work on making your reviews longer, you'll earn lots of Viz. But for a first review, this was pretty good.

DolphinRider56 : For a first review you were able to elaborate enough to actually be considered a "review". You gave your appreciation and explained why.

But I would suggest you elaborate a little more in the future. How does the hack compare to the original? How does it compare to other Pokémon games? Are there any features (graphics, music, addictiveness) that make the game worthwhile?

You have potential. Good luck!