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04-04-15 06:46 PM
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I hate to be in shining armour,
but I'll do so for you.

You turn me to an idiot
when I'm with you.

I hate how you made me cry
when you did nothing at all.

Despite how you wreck me
I'm happy just to be with you.
I hate to be in shining armour,
but I'll do so for you.

You turn me to an idiot
when I'm with you.

I hate how you made me cry
when you did nothing at all.

Despite how you wreck me
I'm happy just to be with you.
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Nice Patrick Star quote in the thread description

It's neat to see a poem that doesn't rhyme because I rarely see that, even though poems that rhyme are still counted as poems.

I suggest that next time you make a poem, you make the syllables in each stanza match or come closer to matching because that's what makes poems so rhythmical and enjoyable to read, especially out loud.
Nice Patrick Star quote in the thread description

It's neat to see a poem that doesn't rhyme because I rarely see that, even though poems that rhyme are still counted as poems.

I suggest that next time you make a poem, you make the syllables in each stanza match or come closer to matching because that's what makes poems so rhythmical and enjoyable to read, especially out loud.
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PacmanandMariofan : Thanks. I just had this idea in my head because something happened during the week, and I had to get it out of my head, RIGHT NOW! So that's why it's not very rhythmical.
PacmanandMariofan : Thanks. I just had this idea in my head because something happened during the week, and I had to get it out of my head, RIGHT NOW! So that's why it's not very rhythmical.
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SilverHyruler : That's OK because it's still a real poem And it's better than Patrick Star's poem XD
SilverHyruler : That's OK because it's still a real poem And it's better than Patrick Star's poem XD
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