Yellow - hello, last time Potanto defeated Lavender and we planned a trip to Weaponia, please enjoy yourself.

Chapter 21 the journey begins

2 weeks later, Capsule Corp

Bulma had made a spaceship for the trip there.

The fighters got ready for the trip.

I installed a self-computer, now the ship will fly itself to Weaponia. Bulma said.

That’s awesome. Yellow said.

Where’s Elric king Kai? Gohan asked.

He’s training with the otherworld fighters, he and Vegeta are currently fighting someone named Gold. King Kai said.

Gohan are you coming? Goku asked.

Sorry dad. Gohan said as he got in the ship.

It’s a week trip. Trunks said.

Alright then. Potanto said.

Do we have something to eat? Goten asked.

Hey Gohan want to train? Yellow asked.

Uh, sure, why? Gohan said.

I need to get stronger, I was a burden back in that fight. Yellow said.

Piccolo went to meditate.

A week later.

I can see the planet. Yellow said.

Ugh finally! 18 said.

Oh stop complaining! Potanto said.

It’s so bad huh, what happened with Lavender on the lookout? Yellow said.

Whatever! Potanto said.

They felt a little quake as the ship landed.

Everyone got out of the ship.

Hey who are those? Goku said.

They turned and saw a few warriors running toward them.

That power, it’s so huge. Yellow said.

Yellow, every power higher then our base forms is huge for you. 18 said.

Gohan went mystic.

Potanto turned into an Oceana Akaian.

Goten and Trunks turned ssj1.

Goku went ssj3.

One of the Weaponians stood still.

Spear, Blade knock them down! the Weaponian said.

Yes Arrow. Blade said slightly irritated.

It’s boss for now! Arrow said.

Sure. Blade said.

Spear you know what to do. Arrow said.

Yes sir. Spear said.

She punched 18.

18 kicked Spear.

SUPER SUISHIO BLAST! Potanto screamed.

The attack went straight at Blade who blocked it and kicked Potanto.

Arrow kicked Goku and Gohan.

SPECIAL BEAM CANNON! Piccolo screamed.

The attack hit Blade.

Piccolo you can attack every one of them. Yellow said.

But you said that you could only attack your own gender. Piccolo said.

Yeah but they say that Namekians don’t have genders, so now you know why, sorry. Yellow explained.

Piccolo kicked Spear and shot a Ki blast at Blade.

Blade knocked the Ki blast back.

Arrow kicked Goten and punched Trunks.

Blade blasted Tien upwards.

Potanto kicked Blade but was punched by Arrow.

Piccolo punched Arrow and shot a Ki wave at Spear.

Spear knocked the Ki wave towards 18, knocking her out.

SIAN! Blade screamed.

The attack knocked Tien out.

Arrow kicked Goku down.

Ugh I don’t have the energy anymore. Goku said.

Dad! Goten said.

Blade knocked Goten and Trunks down.

SPECIAL BEAM CANNON! Piccolo screamed.

Blade dodged and kicked Piccolo.

Spear punched Piccolo down.

FULL POWER SUPER SUISHIO BLAST! Potanto screamed.

Blade and Arrow shot one Ki wave together, overpowering Potanto.

Blade kicked Gohan down.

Alright, prepare to finish them off. Arrow said.

Wait stop. Yellow said.

Why would we. Arrow said.

You can’t kill someone who didn’t start the fight. Yellow said.

They attacked us. Spear said.

But you began, so it was self-defense. Yellow said.

She’s got a point there, what’s your name kid. Blade said.

Yellow is my name. Yellow said.

Wait a minute, are you an Elniër. Blade said.

Don’t be an idiot, they all died because of the Kionki’s! Arrow said.

I’m an Elniër, about 43 percent survived, and I’m one of them. Yellow said.

Stop lying! Spear said as she charged a Ki blast.

Blade stepped in the way.

BLADE, WHAT ARE YOU DOING! Arrow said.

Following the rules, unlike you 2 Blade said.

The town doesn't need to know that! Spear said.

We’re bringing them to the leader, he can sense which race they are, remember? Blade said.

fine, her lies will be discovered either way. Arrow said.

Alright follow us, but don’t try anything. Spear said.

Thank you Blade. Yellow said.

Don’t mention it kid, really don’t. Blade said.

Author - will the z fighters get the dragon balls. find out in the next chapters.

imamonster :
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appelmoesFTW : Okay, you slightly improved. Remember to always add these " when a character talks. For example:"Spear, Blade, knock them down!" ordered Weaponian. For the story itself, it's good, and I was curious at the beginning about what will happen when the Z Fighters landed on the planet.

Dude, couldn't you come up with more original names, I mean weaopnians!? What in the world dude!

Anyway, good job. I really enjoyed this chapter, too.